Choo Chun Meng (chunmeng) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
FOod lock is a little loose at the time of food storage. Food does not have to be loose, especially at the time of use.

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Hood lock is a bit loose during storage. During usage, there is not any particular problem with looseness.

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Thank you for contacting me.
What do you mean by this is not real?
I got this product for my wife, It's is Louis Vuitton, It can't be imitation.
Did you actually go to regular Vuitton shop to find it out?
I will accept the returning but I would have to have some proof.

However, I would like to apologize for the inconvenience for this time.
I understand it looks used entirely.

Thank you very much for wining a bid for it.
The shipping is accepted by EMS only.
We have already shipped the product today.
I assume it will take 5days to get there.
Can you wait for a while? Thank you for your patience.
If there is anything you would like to ask, please contact me.

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Thank you for contacting me.
What do you mean by this is not real?
I got this product for my wife and it is Louis Vuitton without a doubt.
Did you actually go to regular Vuitton shop to verify?
I will accept return of product but would require some proof.

Nevertheless, I would like to apologize for the inconvenience for this time.
I understand it looks used entirely.

Thank you very much for your bid.
The shipping is accepted by EMS only.
We have already shipped the product today.
It will take approximately 5 days.
I seek your kind understanding and patience for the delivery.
If there is anything you would like to ask, please do not hesitate to contact me.

元の翻訳
I'm sending you a picture of the product I received, as an evidence. What is this dirt?
If you're really unable to understand, never mind.
It's useless to give you further explanations, so I'll report it to the credit card company.

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I have attached a picture of the product as evidence. What is this dirt?
If you are really unable to understand, never mind.
It is useless to give you further explanations so I will report it to the credit card company.

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I was glad to speak about the story! Actually I was surprised.
I understand it was not suspend so I am really feel safe.
I just need to wait for the completion of the validation, right?
By the way, last time a document of validation is issued on the July 12th.
Later, I do not received any contact by validation team.
I think time has been consuming too.
Is there was a deficiency in the documents to be submitted?
I would like to ask you to re-submitted if there is a deficiency.

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I was glad to speak about the story, although I was surprised.
I was relieved to find out that it was not a suspension.
I just need to wait for the completion of the validation, right?
By the way, I last submitted the validation documents on 12th July.
Since then, I have not received any reply from validation team.
I think it is taking too long.
Was the information provided in my submission not enough?
If there is anything else I need to submit please let me know.

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I'm sorry that I had already sent off the product before I received your mail.
I asked to check that the product is still in the post office. It is currently under researching.
I will contact you again, so please wait for a while.

Unfortunately, the product has already shipped from the post office.
Could you please send it back when you receive it? A soon as I receive the product, I will refund your payment of the product. Please pay for your shipping fee.

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I am sorry that I had already sent out the product before I received your mail.
I am currently checking whether the product is still in the post office.
I will contact you again, so please wait for a while.

Unfortunately, the product has already been sent out from the post office.
Could you send it back when you receive it? As soon as I receive the product, I will refund your payment of the product. However, I would like to request that you bear the cost of delivery.

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I had a completely different reply from what I asked.
Please check more on the details.
The name of the merchandise is (A).
The seller and the shipper of it is (B company).
The shipping cost I purchased previously was 24.06 dollars.
The shipping cost is displayed to be 203.97 dollars this time if I purchase it.
The destination to be received is Japan.

Only a little time passed since I purchased the merchandise previously.
Why is the shipping cost changed dramatically in this short interval?

I put (A) into my cart now so that you can check on the merchandise.
Please check on it well.

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I had a completely different reply from what I asked.
Please check carefully on the details.
The name of the merchandise is (A).
The seller and the shipper of it is (B company).
The shipping cost when I purchased previously was $24.06.
The shipping cost is displayed as $203.97 if I purchase it now.
The destination to be received is Japan.

It has only been a short while since I purchased the merchandise previously.
Why has the shipping cost changed so dramatically in this short interval?

I put (A) into my cart now so that you can check on the merchandise.
Please check on it properly.

元の翻訳
Lisa, I just checked your post (on Facebook), and it made me very happy.
What a nice and pleasant surprise that you wrote it in Japanese!
Thank you for providing an opportunity for exposing Olivia to Japanese from miles away.
I think the artistic sense of your friend who made it is nice~♪ The white shelf is looking really good♪
You will have more books to fill the shelf. From Japan, I will send a couple of recommendable books, too!

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Lisa, I just checked your post (on Facebook), and it made me very happy.
What a nice and pleasant surprise that you wrote it in Japanese!
Thank you for providing an opportunity for exposing Olivia to Japanese from even though you are miles away.
I think the artistic sense of your friend who made it is nice~♪ The white shelf is looking really good♪
You will have more books to fill the shelf. From Japan, I will send a couple of recommendable books, too!

元の翻訳
【Recorded music】
1. Still Remember
2. Love Is Blind

【Price】
700yen (Tax-included)

【Parts number】
AQZ1-76504
AQZ1-76505



【What is the music card? ?】
The product which gives the music contents such as single ,album sound source with "a card type"not a " CD".
Access the special site with PC ,smart phone (Android, iPhone) after buying a card !
Input the gift cord written the card back side and you can download music contents anf enjoy it at once!

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【Recorded music】
1. Still Remember
2. Love Is Blind

【Price】
700yen (Tax-included)

【Parts number】
AQZ1-76504
AQZ1-76505



【What is the music card? ?】
The product which gives the music contents such as single ,album sound source with "a card type" instead of a " CD".
Access the special site with PC ,smart phone (Android, iPhone) after buying the card!
Input the gift code written on the back of the card and you can download music contents and enjoy it at once!

元の翻訳
【the period for download】 31. Jan. 2015
【precautions for use 】
This item is for smatphone, personalcomputer.(Not use for feature phone)
iphon requires installation of recommendation app(free).
Downloading the app needs fee.
No reissue,no refund,no compensation.
Use in Japan only.
Changes fo period of use,price,etc.will be done without notice.

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【Period for download】 Until 31. Jan. 2015(Saturday)
【Precautions for use 】
This item is for smartphone and PC. (Incompatible with feature phone)
iphone requires installation of a recommended app(free).
Download of app requires downloading fee.
Reissue, refund and compensation is not possible
Use in Japan only.
We are entitled to change the period of use, price, etc. without notice.

元の翻訳
Already start to sell in UN SHOP!

Click here to purchase↓

★Picture A
http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/item1/?jsiteid=UNSH&seq_exhibit_id=125562

★Picture B
http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/item1/?jsiteid=UNSH&seq_exhibit_id=125563&categ_id=6758

URATA NAOYA (AAA)
「Still Remember / Love Is Blind」

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Sale in UN SHOP have started!

Click here to purchase↓

★Picture A
http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/item1/?jsiteid=UNSH&seq_exhibit_id=125562

★Picture B
http://shop.mu-mo.net/a/item1/?jsiteid=UNSH&seq_exhibit_id=125563&categ_id=6758

URATA NAOYA (AAA)
「Still Remember / Love Is Blind」

元の翻訳
By using an experience of acupuncture treatment for 35 years, I am confident that I can contribute to increase the performance of the jockeys who are agonized with the ache at the waist and injury. I am also sure that I can devote myself to maintenance of the horse like the human beings. If I am given a chanve to treat as a trial, I would like to go to Qatar and demonstrate the acupuncture treatment.
Needless to say, as it is a trial, I will pay for the expense for treatment and all the expenses related thereto.
If we agree each other, I would like to execute an agreement.
Thank you for reading it to the last.

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By using an experience of acupuncture treatment for 35 years, I am confident that I can contribute to increase the performance of the jockeys who are agonized with the ache at the waist and injury. I am also sure that I can devote myself to maintenance of the horse like the human beings. If I am given a chanve to treat as a trial, I would like to go to Qatar and demonstrate the acupuncture treatment.
Needless to say, as it is a trial, I will pay for the expense for treatment and all the expenses related thereto.
If we both agree with each other, I would like to make a contract with you.
Thank you for reading it to the end.(/Thank you for taking the time to read.)

元の翻訳
The house was very beautiful and the kitchen equipment was also very satisfying. It was perfect.
The sea was very near and we could enjoy the time very much.

Thank you very much for everything.

P.S.
Since I couldn't see you, I left some Japanese souvenirs in the cottage. They are Japanese towel and chocolate which is popular in Japan. Please try them if you like.

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The house was very beautiful and the kitchen equipment was also very satisfying. It was perfect.
Moreover, as the sea was very near and we enjoyed ourselves very much.

Thank you very much for everything.

P.S.
Since I couldn't see you, I left some Japanese souvenirs in the cottage. They are Japanese towel and chocolate which is popular in Japan. Please try them if you like.

元の翻訳
I received the item.
This time the screen does not appear.
Why do you send an item with defect?
You said that you inspected the item.
I cannot trust you any more.
I will not forgive you this time.
I will file a claim. I ask you to refund.
My customer requested me the compensation for damage.

I ask you to pay for the shipping charge since it is for returning the item.
It is 200 dollars.
I do not need the item with defect.

I heard from a person who sells the same item in Japan.
I found that there are many similar defects.
It is must be swindling to send the item with defect by knowing that it has a defect.

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I received the item.
This time the screen does not appear.
Why did you send an item with defect?
You said that you inspected the item.
I cannot trust you any more.
I will not forgive you this time.
I will file a claim. I ask you to refund.
My customer requested me the compensation for the damage.

I ask you to pay for the shipping charge since it is for returning the item.
It is 200 dollars.
I do not need the item with defect.

I heard from a person who sells the same item in Japan.
I found that there are many similar defects.
Is not it a fraud to send an item knowing that it is defective?

元の翻訳
We report about progress of replacing the bed in the dormitory.

As a result of evaluating with an estimate, we decided to purchase the strong one that is appropriate for the use of hotel.

However, it is not much different from the one we are using now in design, but it must be comfortable since it is a new one.
As it is manufactured after we order, which is different from the one sold in the stores, we will receive it around from the beginning to the middle of December.
We appreciate your patience.
That is all we report.

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We report about progress of replacing the bed in the dormitory.

After analyzing the quotation received, we decided to purchase the strong one that is appropriate for the use in hotel.

The design is not that much different from the existing one, but it must be comfortable since it is a new one.
As it is manufactured after we order, unlike the one sold in the stores, we will receive it around from the beginning to the middle of December.
We appreciate your patience.
That is all we report.

元の翻訳
If you receive the product which is with a big crack not found in the description and enclosed photographs , please contact us to comfirm that.

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There is a big crack in the goods I received which differs from the photograph.↵
I am attaching the photograph so please contact me after checking.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry about your order.
We would love to deal with it immediately. ↵
Please understand and cooperate the situation below.
The order is already shipped on August 22nd by SAL.
It was planned to deliver to you between September 5th and 12th.
Could you check your post office whether the item is kept or not?
If the item is not delivered to you, we will return your payment immediately.
Could you contact us after you check your post office?
Please contact us when you have any question.

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Thank you for your inquiry about your order.
We would love to deal with it immediately so we seek your understanding and cooperation regarding the situation below.
The order is already shipped on August 22nd by SAL.
It was planned to deliver to you between September 5th and 12th.
Please kindly check whether your item is being kept at your post office.
Sorry for the inconvenience caused.↵
If the item is not delivered to you, we will refund you immediately.
It would be much appreciated if you can contact us after you have checked your post office.
Feel free to contact us if you have any questions.

元の翻訳
The idea comes gathered to sell the merchandise and attract people.

Sendenkaigi co., Ltd. held "Sendenkaigi promotion and attraction media forum 2014" on September 3rd and 4th.

This specialized exhibition introduces the effective methods, tools and ideas "to sell the merchandise" and "attract people" such as the necessary promotion strategy to make a profit and specific tips to make plans, considering the customers' purchasing behavior and mind.

This time's theme spotlights "the relationship between the people living in the omnichannel era and businesses"and introduces the latest examples of promotional methods to tackle various tasks like the amalgamation of the internet and the real world.

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Collection of ideas to sell merchandise and attract people.

Sendenkaigi co., Ltd. held "Sendenkaigi promotion and attraction media forum 2014" on September 3rd and 4th at Tokyo International Forum.

This specialized exhibition introduces the effective methods, tools and ideas "to sell the merchandise" and "attract people" such as the necessary promotion strategy to make a profit and specific tips to make plans, considering the customers' purchasing behavior and mind.

This time's theme spotlights "the relationship between the people living in the omnichannel era and businesses"and introduces the latest examples of promotional methods to tackle various tasks like the amalgamation of the internet and the real world.