Choo Chun Meng (chunmeng) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for the quick response.

As today is a holiday in Japan,↵
the custom clearance officers are not working.

Thus, the goods are being held at Narita Airport for 4 days.
This also incurs a storage fee.

If the custom clearance finishes smoothly tomorrow, we will be able to dispatch it to your office by this week.

I will inform you of the cost of delivery from Narita Airport to your office once it is completed.

I think it may add up to another additional $350 from the amount you paid for delivery charge.

This time, I would like to request that you compensate at the end for the difference in the actual cost of the international delivery fee and the one I paid for, as well as other charges such as custom clearance and domestic delivery charge.

修正後
Thank you for the quick response.

As today is a holiday in Japan, the custom clearance officers are not working.

Thus, the goods are being held at Narita Airport for 4 days.
This also incurs a storage fee.

If the custom clearance finishes smoothly tomorrow, we will be able to dispatch it to your office by this week.

I will inform you of the cost of delivery from Narita Airport to your office once it is completed.

I think it may add up to another additional $350 from the amount you paid for delivery charge.

This time, I would like to request that you compensate at the end for the difference in the actual cost of the international delivery fee and the one I paid for, as well as other charges such as custom clearance and domestic delivery charge.

元の翻訳
I ordered and paid for 2 cabinets for 750 points, inclusive of delivery.
I have already made payment so may I request for urgent delivery?

修正後
I ordered and paid for 2 cabinets for 750 points [wrong currency?], including shipping.
I have already made payment, so may I request for [sounds odd, parts of speech confusion] urgent delivery?

元の翻訳
Let's learn how to play, explore and discover in the mountains.

The instructor will teaching how to do things like navigation and the correct way to wear a helmet.

Let's explore the richness of nature in the mountains, while heeding the rules and safely enjoying MTB.

The instructors will be doing maintenance for MTB one-to-one.

You can experience watching Houtou made from scratch before eating it and savouring the taste of history and culture in this region.

It is said that the origin of 'Houtou' came from the sound of rolling kneaded flour into long strips for udon during the Heian period.

修正後
Let's learn how to play, explore and discover in the mountains.

The instructor will teach you how to do things like navigation and the correct way to wear a helmet.

Let's explore the richness of nature in the mountains, while heeding the rules and safely enjoying MTB.

The instructors will be doing maintenance for MTB one-to-one.

You can experience watching Houtou made from scratch before eating it and savouring the taste of history and culture in this region.

It is said that the origin of 'Houtou' came from the sound of rolling kneaded flour into long strips for udon during the Heian period.