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評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2014/10/08 18:25:26

tearz
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日本語

①彼のあごのあざは、たしかマイクがぶつかってできたものだったと思います。唇の傷については(なぜできたかは)分かりません。あなたはなぜ彼のあごにあざがあるのか分かりますか?
②今日はディズニーランドに来ています。ハロウィン真最中です。
③私もあなたと全く同じこと思っていました!
④彼は楽しいビデオを投稿して私達を楽しませてくれます。
⑤いつもあなたは横切って行きますね。
⑥仕事が忙しくて、もしかしたらコンサートに行けないかもしれません。1日でも行けると嬉しいんだけど…
⑦凄く楽しかった!

英語

(1) I believe he got the bruise on his chin when the microphone hit him. I don't know (how he got) the scar on his lip. Do you know how he ended up getting the bruise on his chin?
(2) We are at the Disney Land today. It's in the middle of the Halloween season.
(3) It is exactly what was on my mind, too.
(4) He entertains us by posting fun videos.
(5) You always cut accross, right?
(6) I am too busy at work that I may not be able to go to the concert. If I could go there even for a day would make me glad though...
(7) I had so much fun!

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chiba 58
chibaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/09 18:38:58

元の翻訳
(1) I believe he got the bruise on his chin when the microphone hit him. I don't know (how he got) the scar on his lip. Do you know how he ended up getting the bruise on his chin?
(2) We are at the Disney Land today. It's in the middle of the Halloween season.
(3) It is exactly what was on my mind, too.
(4) He entertains us by posting fun videos.
(5) You always cut accross, right?
(6) I am too busy at work that I may not be able to go to the concert. If I could go there even for a day would make me glad though...
(7) I had so much fun!

修正後
(1) I believe he got the bruise on his chin when the microphone hit him. I don't know (how he got) the scar on his lip. Do you know how he ended up getting the bruise on his chin?
(2) We are at Disneyland today. It's in the middle of the Halloween season.
(3) It is exactly what was on my mind as well.
(4) He entertains us by posting funny videos.
(5) You always cut accross, right?
(6) I am so busy at work that I may not be able to go to the concert. If I could go there even for a day would make me glad though...
(7) I had so much fun!

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