翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

①彼女の頭の回転の速さにはびっくりしました。私は彼よりも遅いペースでしか、それを言えないかもしれない。
②この番組の中でこのエピソードが1番面白かったよね？
③お喋りな人は頭の回転が速いと思ってる。
④子供達がどんどん成長していくのを見て、私もがんばらなくちゃと思う。
⑤甘いものが苦手なの？
⑥もうそろそろ寝なくちゃ。いつも夜更かしして朝(早寝すればよかったと)後悔します。
⑦そのグループを知っているけれど、詳しくは知りません。⑧どうだろう…よくわからないや。

英語

1. I was surprised by her being his quick-witted. I think I could only say that in a slower pace compared to him.
2. This episode out of this program was the most interesting one, right?
3. I think, people who talk a lot are also thinking rapidly.
4. A I can see the children making big steps in growing, I have to hang on.
5. You don't like sweet food?
6. I have to go to sleep soon. Every time I stay up late I regret it in the morning (thinking "I should have slept earlier...")
7. I have heard of this group, but I don't know them any further.
8. I wonder, how it is... but I don't really know.

レビュー ( 1 )

chibaはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★★"と評価しました 2014/10/02 22:29:40

元の翻訳
1. I was surprised by her being his quick-witted. I think I could only say that in a slower pace compared to him.
2. This episode out of this program was the most interesting one, right?
3. I think, people who talk a lot are also thinking rapidly.
4. A I can see the children making big steps in growing, I have to hang on.
5. You don't like sweet food?
6. I have to go to sleep soon. Every time I stay up late I regret it in the morning (thinking "I should have slept earlier...")
7. I have heard of this group, but I don't know them any further.
8. I wonder, how it is... but I don't really know.

修正後
1. I was surprised by her being this quick-witted. I think I could only say that in a slower pace compared to him.
2. This episode out of this program was the most interesting one, right?
3. I think, people who talk a lot are also thinking rapidly.
4. As I can see the children making big steps in growing, I have to hang on.
5. You don't like sweet food?
6. I have to go to sleep soon. Every time I stay up late I regret it in the morning (thinking "I should have slept earlier...")
7. I have heard of this group, but I don't know them any further.
8. I wonder, how it is... but I don't really know.

Very good