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"About the realist"↵
items which is more than 300 yen of profits after shipping off.
-You can realist the item . Please copy the ASIN code of the item from the order screen.

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"About Re-listing"↵
(For the items with over 300 yen profits after the completion of shipping.)
-Re-list the item. Copy the ASIN code of the item from the order screen.

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11, Using account when you buy something↵
-The day of Amazon
-you e-mail address: acountusan@gmail.com
-password:
*Make sure using gift certificate.

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11, The account to be used at the time of purchase↵
- Amazon date
- e-mail address: acountusan@gmail.com
-password:
*Use of gift certificate is required.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

We only sell items only in the pdf data format.
The items purchased can be downloaded from the purchase record page.
(Reference: FAQ)↵
For the payment, we accept it through the PayPal.

If you have any inquiry, please feel free to contact us.
Thank you and regard.

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Thank you for your inquiry.

We only sell items only in the pdf data format.
The items purchased can be downloaded from the purchase record page.
(Please refer to FAQ page)↵
We accept payment through PayPal.

Please feel free to contact us should you have any questions.
Thank you and best regards.

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In case when multiple images are uploaded, would it be possible to change the image file's name to the image's"alt" or "title"?
Also, if submitting Youtube vids was possible, that would be good.
It might be only my opinion, so please treat it as advice.

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When multiple images are uploaded, would it be possible to change the image file's name to the image's"alt" or "title"?
Also, if submitting Youtube videos was possible, that would be good.
It might be only my opinion, so please treat it as advice.

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What is the conditions that turns the color of this bag?
Does this recover to original color?
Is there any other characteristics I should be aware?

Thank you in advance.

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What are the conditions that turn the color of this bag?
Does it get reverted to the original color after it has been changed?
Is there any other characteristics that I should be aware of?

Thank you in advance.

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Why the color of this bag change ?
And is it possible to back to the original color ?
And are there any other features ?

Thank you.

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What are the conditions that would make the color of this bag change ?
And is it possible to revert the color to the original color after it is changed?
And are there any other features ?

Thank you.

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A会社の製品の売り上げはどんな調子でしょう？在庫の補充は必要ないでしょうか？

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A社の製品の販売状況と在庫の補充がご必要かどうかを確認したいと思い、ご連絡差し上げております。

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A社の商品の販売はどうですかと在庫品の補充は必要かどうかについてお聞きしたいですが。

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A社の商品の販売状況と商品の補充がご必要かどうかを確認させていただきたくご連絡差し上げています。

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<<The case of purchasing through Rakuten>>
1. After adding to the cart and entering the payment page, you will be requested to key in the user ID and password. Please key in as below.
User ID: acountusan@gmail.com
Password:

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<<The case of purchasing through Rakuten>>
1. After adding your order to your shopping cart and entering the payment page, you will be requested to enter the user ID and password. Please key in as below.
User ID: acountusan@gmail.com
Password:

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<< in the case of the purchase through Rakuten>>
1. Put your selected items into a cart and go to the payment screen, your ID and password will be required, Enter your user ID: acountusan@gmail.com. Then enter your password:↵

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<< in the case of the purchase through Rakuten>>
1. Put your selected items into your shopping cart and go to the payment screen. Enter a user ID:countusan@gmail.com, and the password: when you are prompted to enter them.

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→The meaning was, "I have to cancel the order once because the item that I had sent came back to me. I am sorry about the confusion. In return, I would like to refund you $3."

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→The meaning was something like "I have to cancel the order once because the item that I had shipped was returned to me. I am sorry for any inconvenience this may have caused you. As a token of my apologies to you, I am issuing you a refund of 3 dollars."

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→The meaning is when we receive the returned product, we will cancal the order. Sorry for the inconvenience caused. We will refund 3 dollars to you for apologization. ↵

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→The meaning is we have received the item which we have shipped. We are therefore cancel your order. We apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused you. As a token of our apology, we are issuing you a refund of 3 dollars.

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· Drag the function entered into the column B of GD to the bottom and check for the double entries. Those filled with "2" successively means to have enclosed, so it has no concern. Those filled with "2" are here and there should be highly careful because the other orders may be filled in again.

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· Drag the formula entered into the column B of GD to the bottom and check for the redundant entries. Those filled with "2" successively indicate that they have been enclosed, so it has no concern. You should pay special attention to those filled with "2" are here and there as they are the orders with higher possibility that they are the redundant entry of different orders.

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I got 2 cabinets sold to me for 750 pounds including the postage, and I did pay.
I am already done with the payment, so can you ship them immediately?

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I have purchased and paid for two cabinets from you for 750 pounds inclusive of shipping charges.
Could you please ship my order immediately since I have already made the payment?

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Thank you for your purchase.
Did you get satisfied with the goods you purchased?
If so, please give us a feedback as 5-starred.

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Thank you for your purchase.
Are you satisfied with your purchase?
If so, please rate us with 5 stars.

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Thank you for purchasing from us.

Are you satisfied with the product you have bought?

If so, please give us an evaluation of five stars!

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Thank you for purchasing from us.

Are you satisfied with your purchase?

If so, please rate us with five stars!

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I don't know the reason but somehow an error occurs in the page of payment and I can't proceed payment.
I'm waiting for your reply.

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I don't know the reason but somehow an error occurs in the payment page therefore I can't proceed with the payment.
I'm waiting for your reply.

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I'm in trouble because there is something wrong with the purchase page. An error occurs there and I need help.

I'm waiting for your reply.

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For some reason, I have not been able to process payment as I am having error on the payment page.

I'm waiting for your reply.

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A part of content of this article is made by consulting the info of "A".

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A part of content of this article is based on the information from "A".↵

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I am fairly fond of this. Moving images also can be shot with high-vision by this one, and it's super connecting to DIGA as well!

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I am fairly fond of this. I can shoot high-vision movies combined with other functions all in one, and it's super connecting to DIGA as well!

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I cannot make a profit off of the price you are suggesting to me, so I am not going to buy it.

However, there might be other items in your inventory I would like from you.
Could you please tell me your item list?

Let us have a good business deal.

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I cannot make a profit off of the price you are offering to me, so I am not going to purchase it.

However, there might be other items that I may be interested in purchasing from you.
Could you please provide me your item list?

Let us have a good business deal.

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In case Scotland achieves independence, there is a possibility that separatist movements in West Europe that have been dormant since World War II, like in Spain, will react.

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In case Scotland achieves independence, there is a possibility that separatist movements in Western Europe that have been dormant since World War II, like in Spain, will react.

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According to the tracking history, it was supposed to be delivered on September 1st, but actually, be returned due to absence.
We apologize for the inconvenience, but would you mind your inquiring the closest post office with the tracking number, because we're overseas and could not contact them.
I am hoping to receive your kind cooperation.

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According to the tracking history from the post office, they have once tried to deliver it to you on September 1st, but it was returned to the post office due to absence.
We apologize for the inconvenience, but would you mind inquiring the closest post office with the tracking number. We cannot contact them directly to inquire the status as we are in overseas.
I am hoping to receive your kind cooperation.

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According to the tracking history at the post office, the item was attempted to be delivered on Sept. 11, but there was no recipient, so they retained back the item to the post office.

I am sorry for taking up your time, but would you please get in touch with a local post office about the package using the tracking number?
Since we cannot inquire to your local post office from foreign country, I appreciate your cooperation.

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According to the tracking record at the post office, they have attempted to deliver it on Sept. 1st, but it was returned to the post office due to your absence.

I am sorry for taking up your time, but would you please get in touch with your local post office about the package using the tracking number?
Since we cannot inquire to your local post office from foreign country, I appreciate your cooperation.