Braden (b_noyes8) — もらったレビュー

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Hi, does this Duffy stuffed animal have beads in its belly?

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Hi. Does this Duffy stuffed animal have beads in its belly?

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This time, I'm going to be traveling around the Tohoku region. I'm hoping to eat many different types of good food. I've heard there are many festivals and beautiful places to visit, so I'm really looking forward to it. Oh, if you know of any good places to visit or good food to eat, please let me know. Well then, I'm off!

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This time, I'm going to be traveling around the Tohoku region. I'm hoping to eat lots of good food. I've heard there are festivals and many beautiful places to visit, so I'm really looking forward to it. Oh, if you know of any good places to visit or good food to eat, please let me know. Well then, I'm off excited!

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Thank you very much for selling to me at the wholesale price.
Thank you also for providing me with a price list.
There are a few items I would like to stock so I will be contacting you about those soon.
Could you also please let me know how much it would cost to ship 5 players to Japan?

I would also like to thank you in regards to the insurance. It helps me tremendously.
Does that mean that if one of my customers requests repairs on a player he bought from me that I can send it to you and pay shipping costs and the cost of repairs?

If you have any other questions, please do not hesitate to ask.
I look forward to continuing to work with you.

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Thank you very much for selling to me at the wholesale price.
Thank you also for providing me with a price list.
There are a few items I would like to stock so I will be contacting you about those soon.
Could you also please let me know how much it would cost to ship 5 players to Japan?

I would also like to thank you in regards to the warranty. It helps me tremendously.
Does that mean that if one of my customers requests repairs on a player he bought from me that I can send it to you and pay shipping costs and the cost of repairs?

If you have any other questions, please do not hesitate to ask.
I look forward to continuing to work with you.

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I have just told the buyer that I would send them a gift card.
The value has been agreed on. I would like to send a gift card or a coupon, but↵
is it possible to send a gift card using amazon mail?
If there is any other method to do this, please let me know.
Also, does this break any contract rules?
How can I go about providing the buyer with a discount without breaking any contract rules?
I'm sorry for the trouble, but a quick response would be much appreciated. Thank you.

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I have just told the buyer that I would send them a gift card.
The value has been agreed on. I would like to send a gift card or a coupon, but is it possible to send a gift card using Amazon mail?
If there is any other method to do this, please let me know.
Also, does this break any contract rules?
How can I go about providing the buyer with a discount without breaking any contract rules?
I'm sorry for the trouble, but a quick response would be much appreciated. Thank you.

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You sound very busy with work. Your job must be really difficult.
Even though I'm sure your bosses always expect you to work hard, please make sure you take some time off and take care of your health.
You always seem so busy and you don't have much free time. Do you actually enjoy your job? Perhaps it might be good for you to study a bit and find a different job in a related field. You also enjoy making sweets, right!?
(I can sort of understand your feeling of wanting to try to make the sweets I send you.)
What exactly is a vegan blueberry?

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You sound very busy with work. Your job must be really difficult.
Even though I'm sure your bosses always expect you to work hard, please make sure to take some time off and take care of your health.
You always seem so busy and you don't have much free time. Do you actually enjoy your job? Perhaps it might be good for you to study a bit and find a different job in a related field. You also enjoy making sweets, right?!
(I can sort of understand your feeling of wanting to try to make the sweets I send you.)
What exactly is a vegan blueberry?