London Gardens (ayaka_maruyama) — 付けたレビュー

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It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you treat now and which is sold well for Japanese people. I am especially interested in A. Looking forward your reply.

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It's been a long time. I am considering doing business with you.
Could you tell me the price of some items you are currently handling and are selling well with Japanese people? I am especially interested in A. Looking forward for your reply.

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You cannot understand the manual and the mail I have sent to you were in the bad English, cannot you?

It you cannot understand those, we cannot communicate by those each other.

The items you have listed dose not include the description of the items and the shipping charges, and the payment histories of cutomers.

If you want to purchase an item from the eBay and others, what is your basis of criteria of judgment to purchase the item?

Would you by an item based on one picture and its title?

What would you do if an delivered item is different from your expected size and a function?

At eBay, those items will be returned and I muse pay for the return shipping charge.

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Were the manuals and emails in such bad English that you could not understand?

It you cannot understand those, then we are left with no means to communicate with each other.

The items you have listed does not include the description of the items and the shipping charges, and the payment methods.

If you wanted to purchase an item from eBay or other internet shops, what would be your criteria to purchase the item?

Would you buy an item based on one picture and its title?

What would you do if a delivered item is different from your expected size or function?

At eBay, that kind of item will be returned and I must pay for the return shipping charge.

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Are my english in the e-mails and manuals I provided to you so bad that you are not able to understand them?
If you are not able to understand my english, it would be very difficult for us to understand each other.
The item you put up for sale does not display item description, method of shipping nor method of payment.
What is your purchasing guideline if you were making a purchase on online shops like ebay?
Would you make a purchase based on title and one picture?
What would you do if after purchasing, the size or quality was different from what you envisioned?
If it was ebay, it would be returned. I would pay for the shipping as well.

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Is my English in the e-mails and manuals I provided to you so bad that you are not able to understand them?
If you are not able to understand my English, it would be very difficult for us to communicate with each other.
The item you put up for sale does not display item description, method of shipping nor method of payment.
What is your purchasing guideline if you were making a purchase on online shops like ebay?
Would you make a purchase based on title and one picture?
What would you do if after purchasing, the size or quality was different from what you had envisioned?
If it was on ebay, it would definitely be returned. I would have to pay for the shipping as well.

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I am sorry for my delayed reply!

I am just now building a website featuring the goods you deal.
The payment from my customer is late, so I would like to make a payment on 17.

Best regards,

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I am sorry for my delayed reply!

I am currently creating a website using your products.
The payment from my customer is late, so I would like to make my payment on the 17th.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

メールありがとうございます。

荷物が届きましたが中に商品が１個しかありませんでしたので、お知らせします。

含まれていない商品についてお店とお話しされたいことと思います。荷物の中に入っていませんでしたので。

私に何かできることがありましたらお知らせください。

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こんにちは。

メールありがとうございます。

荷物が届きましたが中に商品が１点しかありませんでしたので、お知らせします。

含まれていない商品についてお店とお話し頂ければと思います。荷物の中に入っていませんでしたので。

私に何かできることがありましたらお知らせください。

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Hello,

I have not yet received the item purchased from your store.
It has been 35 days since I paid for the item on October 11th.
I am very worried as the item has not delivered yet.
I am afraid that I will report this matter to PayPal if the item is not delivered by November 20th.
Let me know if there is anything I can do to solve this matter.

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Hello,

I have not yet received the item purchased from your store.
It has been 35 days since I paid for the item on October 11th.
I am very worried as the item has not arrived yet.
I am afraid that I will have to report this matter to PayPal if the item is not delivered by November 20th.
Let me know if there is anything I can do to solve this matter.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your yesterday’s reply.
I'm sorry I cannot tell you the price previously because the customs checks at random.
Please let me know when the customs duty occurred. I will return all.
Please submit a custom duty's bill later.
I just completed the refund for the procedure to the customs.

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Thank you for contacting me yesterday.
I'm afraid I cannot tell you the price beforehand, as the customs check items randomly.
Please let me know when the customs duty occurred. I will give you a full refund.
Please send us the custom duty receipt later.
I have just completed the refund for custom charges.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for contacting me yesterday.
Since the checking of the custom duties are done randomly, I regret to inform you that we cannot determine the amount of money.
Let me know if you will be charged for customs tariff and I will give a full refund.
Kindly send me the receipt of the customs duty later.
We have already completed the refunding process a while ago.

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Thank you very much for contacting me yesterday.
Since the custom duties are checked at random, I regret to inform you that we cannot determine the charges beforehand.
Let me know if you were charged for customs tariff and I will give a full refund.
Kindly send me the receipt of the customs duty later.
We have already completed the refunding process a while ago.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your reply. I think that I will buy a different design cycling suit soon. Thank you.

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Thank you for your reply. I think that I will buy a cycling suit of a different design soon. Thank you.

元の翻訳
それでは別の発送先住所のペイパルを通して支払いをされたのですね。あなたは今、別の発送先住所を私にくださいました。申し訳ありませんが、ペイパルから別の住所に送ることや多くの別の住所をお持ちのことにはいい気持ちがしません。ペイパルを通してあなたに全額返金をしようと思います。ペイパルは未確認の住所に発送する場合には保護を提供してくれないので、気持ちがよくないだけなのです。もし今でもペンの購入をご希望で今くださった住所への発送をお望みなら、銀行送金でお願いいたします。ペイパル手数料がかかりませんので13ドルだけ送っていただければ結構です。数分以内に返金いたしますのでペイパルでご確認ください。

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それでは別の発送先住所のペイパルを通して支払いをされたのですね。あなたは今、別の発送先住所を私にくださいました。申し訳ありませんが、ペイパルと異なる住所に配送することや多くの住所をお持ちになっていることに対し、不安を感じております。その為、ペイパルを通してあなたに全額返金をさせて頂きたく思います。ペイパルは未確認の住所に発送する場合には保護を提供してくれないので、安心できないだけなのです。もしそれでもペンの購入をご希望で今くださった住所への発送をお望みであれば、銀行送金でお願いいたします。この場合ペイパル手数料がかかりませんので13ドルだけ送っていただければ結構です。数分以内に返金いたしますのでペイパルでご確認ください。

元の翻訳
このBoyibangというユーザーアプリは、4つの部分で構成されている。名前ごとの記録、リマインダー、IM、知識のデータベースがあり、それを使って患者は病気についての記事を閲覧したり医者からのお勧めの投稿を読むことができる。

医者用のアプリには特別なアルゴリズム機能がついていて、これを使って患者や治療記録を区分することができる。また、特定の患者のデータを他の医者と共有することも出来るので同じ治療チーム内で診断結果を利用できる。

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このBoyibangというユーザーアプリは、4つの部分で構成されている。名前ごとの記録、リマインダー、IM、知識のデータベースがあり、それを使って患者は病気についての記事を閲覧したり医者からのお勧めの投稿を読むことができる。

医者用のアプリは特別なアルゴリズム機能を使っており、患者や治療記録を区分することができる。また、特定の患者のデータを他の医者と共有することも出来るので同じ治療チーム内で診断結果を利用できる。

元の翻訳
比して日本のゲーム業界は、昨年度の成長率はわずか1.2％だった。日本市場全体には46億米ドルの価値がある。一方、韓国のゲーム市場は10.8％成長した。現状、日本のゲーム市場は多くの問題に直面している。 GREE、DeNA、そしてSonyや任天堂のような大手企業さえ、成長鈍化に苦しんでいる。

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比して日本のゲーム業界は、昨年度の成長率はわずか1.2％だった。日本市場全体には46億米ドルの価値がある。一方、韓国のゲーム市場は10.8％成長した。現状、日本のゲーム市場は多くの問題に直面している。 GREE、DeNA、そしてSonyや任天堂のような大手企業でさえ、成長鈍化に苦しんでいる。

元の翻訳
My teacher was a lady who lives in Oregon!
She is Japanese, but she seems to speak only English.
I found many teachers on many different web sites, but it is hard to pick one out of bunch...
So I'm still .... thinking what to do.

Luke's former room mate has good taste!
I love to listen to Jack Johnson at a beach.

I'm thinking of studying English with my friend this weekend.
Me too! I love Onsen★ I sometime go to a two-day onsen trip.
I see you like it too! I've heard that there is a onsen in Oregon.
I'd love to go there someday...

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My teacher was a lady who lives in Oregon!
She is Japanese, but she seems to only speak English.
I found many teachers on a number of websites, but it is hard to pick one out of bunch...
So I'm still .... thinking what to do.

Luke's former room mate has a good taste!
I love to listen to Jack Johnson at the beach.

I'm thinking of studying English with my friend this weekend.
Me too! I love onsen★ I sometimes go to a two-day onsen trip.
I see that you like it too! I was surprised to hear that there is an onsen in Oregon.
I'd love to go there someday...

元の翻訳
Hello

I am interested in this product.
Please let me ask some questions because I'm considering buying.
How many days the product takes to arrived in Japan?
How much is the delivery fee to Japan ?

I am looking forward to the reply.
Thank you in advance.

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Hello

I am interested in this product.
Please let me ask some questions because I'm considering purchasing.
How many days does the product take to arrive at Japan?
How much is the delivery fee to Japan ?

I am looking forward to receiving your reply.
Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
メールありがとうございます。
日本でXL（EU L）サイズの黒/青のスーツは注文できますか?
2014年の１月８日に私の兄弟の誕生日に必要なのです。
代用品として、赤/黒の品をありがとうございます。しかし、彼はセルビアフットボールナショナルチームの赤いジャケットを持っています。
もしよろしければ、ユニクロで 聞いてみていただきたく思います。
ドイツあるいはセルビアにはユニクロがありません。

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メールありがとうございます。
日本でXL（EU L）サイズの黒/青のスーツは注文できますか?
2014年の１月８日,私の兄弟の誕生日に必要なのです。
代用品として、赤/黒の品をありがとうございます。しかし、彼はセルビアフットボールナショナルチームの赤いジャケットを持っています。
もしよろしければ、ユニクロで 聞いてみていただきたく思います。
ドイツあるいはセルビアにはユニクロがありません。

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
これを、既に、注文しましたが、通関において支払いは必要ですか。

よろしく。

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こんにちは。
こちらを既に注文したのですが、関税は支払う必要がありますか？

宜しくお願い致します。

元の翻訳
The A and B you shipped the other day have been held at customs, and I have been asked to submit the following document.
The power upper limit of this product is less than 0.989J. You should attach a document by the sales manager stating that it is a toy accessory.
I'm sorry to bother you again, but could you send me such a document?

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The A and B you shipped the other day have been held at customs, and I have been asked to submit the following document.
You should attach a document by the sales manager stating that the maximum power limit of this product is less than 0.989J and that it is a toy accessory.
I'm sorry to bother you again, but could you send me such documents by your manager?

元の翻訳
Hello.
Thank you for sending me exchange part
I Send back the returned goods part
I did not receive your reply so i send it via EMS.Tracking number is...
Thank you and best regards.
P/S, I send attach the image of this time returned goods part.

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Hello.
Thank you for sending me an exchange
I have sent back the original goods
I did not receive your reply so i sent it via EMS.Tracking number is...
Thank you and best regards.
Please find attached the image of this returned goods for reference.

元の翻訳
本日発送致しました。そして無料の速達発送にアップグレード致しました。

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本日発送致しました。そして無料で速達発送にアップグレード致しました。

元の翻訳
本日中にお届けします。なお配送は無料となりました。

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本日中に出荷致します。なお、無料で特急便に変更させて頂きました。

元の翻訳
Hello.
I just arranged for returning a package.
I will tell you tracking number,when I get it.
And,this is the mail from my US (international forwarding company).

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Hello.
I have just arranged for returning a package.
I will inform you with the tracking number when I get it.
This is the email from my US (international forwarding company).

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

I have requested the shipping arrangement for the item a while ago.
I will inform you the tracking number once I received it.

And, the attached is the email from the MyUS (international courier service).

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Hello.

I have requested the shipping arrangement for the item a while ago.
I will inform you with the tracking number once I receive it.

Please find attached the email from the MyUS (international courier service).

元の翻訳
I will arrive in Paris on the 7th as scheduled and I will check into your apartment. I will send an email once I arrive at the airport. I will go directly to your apartment after that. I am looking forward to meet up with me.

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I have arrived at the airport.
I will be heading to your apartment via bus. I will arrive there around an hour and fifteen minutes to thirty minutes.

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I will arrive in Paris on the 7th as scheduled and I will check into your apartment. I will send an email once I arrive at the airport. I will go directly to your apartment after that. I am looking forward to seeing you.

I have arrived at the airport.
I will be heading to your apartment via bus. I will arrive there in around an hour and fifteen minutes to thirty minutes.