London Gardens (ayaka_maruyama) — もらったレビュー

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There is no problem in using my book for your book.
Please print my name under my photograph as a credit,
and if possible, please send me a copy of the finished book.
I will handle the shipping fee to Japan if you could tell me how much it would be.
I am looking forward for the book to finish.

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There is no problem in using my photograph for your book.
Please print my name under my photograph as a credit,
and if possible, please send me a copy of the finished book.
I will handle the shipping fee to Japan if you could tell me how much it would be.
I am looking forward for the book to finish.

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追跡番号を調べたのですが、何も情報が上がって参りません。もう一度ご確認の上、正しい追跡番号と、担当運送業者のホームページアドレスを、実働３日以内にご連絡下さい。

ご教示頂いた情報は、荷物引き取りの費用の責任者を認定する際に利用致します。指定日までにご対応頂けませんと、お引き取りを行う間、販売アカウントに影響致しますので、ご了承ください。

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uk
追跡番号を調べたのですが、何も情報が上がって参りません。もう一度ご確認の上、正しい追跡番号と、担当運送業者のホームページアドレスを、実働３日以内にご連絡下さい。

ご教示頂いた情報は、荷物引き取りの費用の責任者を認定する際に利用致します。指定日までにご対応頂けませんと、あなたの販売アカウントから全額差し引くことになりますのでご注意ください。

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Another is the expectation of a decrease in the expenses by the putting together all work forces.

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Another is the reduction of expenses expected from the centralization of all work forces with the labor-intensive works.

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Could you give us a little more time before registering further items after the current list (for 1000 items)?
We are currently checking through the prices of items on the brief list.
(There were many items which were set too cheap to make profits or were too expensive.)

When we are done with the check-ups, we will be putting them to sale. After all the registered items start to go on sale, then we would like to move on to the next list of items.

It may take some time because we would like to go through all the prices.

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Could you give us a little more time before registering further items after the current list (about 1000 items)?
We are currently checking through the prices of items on the brief list.
(There were many items which were set too cheap to make profits or were set too expensive.)

When we are done with the check-ups, we will be putting them on sale. After all the registered items start to go on sale, then we would like to move on to the next list of items.

It may take some time because we would like to go through all the prices.

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Thank you for your hospitality on ebay. Your thoughtfulness really touched my heart!! I am thankful from the bottom of my heart. Is it possible for you to make the doll on the picture in US$450, including delivery to my address in Florida? I would like pink clothes,magnetic pacifier, dark brunette hair and the finished photo as usual! I am looking forward to hearing from you. I adore your dolls!

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All of your help on Ebay is greatly appreciated. I was moved by the degree of care and consideration, and am truly thankful. I was wondering about the doll pictured; if I were to send it to my address in Florida, could it be made for the price of $450USD including shipping and handling? As usual, I would like the pink garments, magnetic pacifier, dark brown hair and a picture of the finished doll please. I am anxiously awaiting your response. Your dolls are absolutely my favorite.↵
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As someone who lives in the city, I hesitantly said "hello" back to the hikers when they crossed paths with me and said "hello" to me, on the morning of my first hiking. It made me feel the joy of regaining something that had been lost.

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On the morning of my first hike up the mountain, hesitantly returning the hellos of all the hikers I came across on the way brought back the joy of regaining something that had been forgotten up till now for someone like me who lives in the city.

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Wow, you moved a lot! LOL
Where you live is really important. Shibuya is a good place... but it is pretty noisy.
Oh by the way, my office is in Suginami, Nakano. Is it close?

I love Urayasu!
I have been living here for 10 years now.
It's a low-lying part of Tokyo and a lot of the people are warm. It's very comfortable to live and I recommend it.
You can also get to Tokyo station in 20 minutes, but it is painful that the last train leaves quite early!!

Yes, I love horses and animals! But not insects....
I have done horseback riding several times, and my brother does horseback riding too.
I'd love to visit Oregon one day.

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Wow, you moved a lot! LOL
Where you live is really important. Shibuya is a good place... but it is pretty noisy.
Oh by the way, my office is in Suginami, Nakano. Is it close?

I love Urayasu!
I have been living here for 10 years now.
It's a low-lying part of Tokyo and a lot of the people are warm. It's very comfortable to live in and I would recommend it.
You can also get to the Tokyo train station in 20 minutes, but it is hard that the last train leaves quite early!!

Yes, I love horses and animals! But not insects....
I have done horseback riding several times, and my brother does horseback riding too.
I'd love to visit Oregon one day.

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Hello.
Why is the total amount $1285.34?
The item I have purchased is only $810.
Will the shipment take $475?
I cannot pay this kind of money.

You can easily make shipments to Japan in $100-150.

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Hello.
Why is the total amount $1285.34?
The item I have purchased is only $810.
Will the shipment take $475?
I cannot pay that kind of money.

You can easily make shipments to Japan with $100-150.

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This graph shows each of the quarters from 2011 until last month.
As a result of making improvements, we have succeeded to decrease 80% from before we made the improvements.
We have decided to add to the original goals to deal with visual inspections in the same manner.
This problem was resolved through several telephone conferences.
We have succeeded in abolishing inspections in most categories by June.
This graph will enable us to decide whether or not to have inspections based on their defect rates.
If the defect is prominent, we believe that the inspections should continue.

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This graph shows each of the quarters from 2011 until last month.
As a result of making improvements, we have succeeded to decrease 80% from before we made the improvements.
We have decided to add to the original goals to deal with visual inspections in the same manner.
This problem was resolved through several telephone conferences.
We have succeeded in abolishing inspections in most categories by June.
This table will enable us to decide whether or not to have inspections based on their defect rates.
If the defect is prominent, we believe that the inspections should be continued.

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Yunzhisheng は現在Leshi Super TV、smartwatch inWatch、Smartisan ROM、Sougou Voice AidそしてNetEase’s EasyChatと提携している。 WeChat向けに音声プラグインの開発も行った。更にYunzhishengは、既にVoice Aid、Yunzhisheng VoiceそしてYunzhisheng Input methodといった、独自のアプリ３種投入している。

当社の音声認識製品の正確度は95％に達した。これは大手競争相手であり、シェア最大級の2社、USTC iFlytekとBaiduの開発技術と肩を並べている。

Yunzhishengは今後、プロ協会、自動車メーカー、スマート家具、装着デバイス生産者との掘り下げた提携を目指している。

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Yunzhisheng は現在Leshi Super TV、スマートウォッチのinWatch、Smartisan ROM、Sougou Voice AidそしてNetEaseのEasyChatと提携している。 WeChat向けに音声プラグインの開発も行った。更にYunzhishengは、既にVoice Aid、Yunzhisheng VoiceそしてYunzhisheng Input methodといった、独自のアプリを３種投入している。

当社の音声認識製品の正確度は95％に達した。これは大手競争相手であり、シェア最大級の2社、USTC iFlytekとBaiduの開発技術と肩を並べている。

Yunzhishengは今後、プロ協会、自動車メーカー、スマート家具、装着デバイス生産者との掘り下げた提携を目指している。

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No, neither had shift boots.
I will attach a picture of the label, ↵
with another picture of the one from my previous order which did come with a shift boot.

I don't believe shift boots can be removed,↵
so does this mean that you dispatched a product that does not come with shift boots?

Are there any stocks left of the product with shift boots?
If there is, I have a waiting client, and would like to order and receive the product as soon as possible.

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No, neither had shift boots.
I will attach a picture of the label, and also the picture of the one from my previous order which did come with a shift boot.

I don't believe shift boots can be removed from the product I ordered, so does this mean that you sent a wrong product that does not come with shift boots?

Are there any products with shift boots left in stock?
If there are, I have a waiting client who would like to order and receive the product as soon as possible.

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I have emailed you so many times, why have I not heard from you?
I have made deals with your company for many times.
Why can you not deal with this more quickly?
Please answer my inquiries.
Also I feel that it was you who made the mistake of getting me the products in different sizes.
Please get back to me in the next 2 hours.

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I have emailed you so many times, but why I haven't received any reply from you?
I have made business deals with your company for many times.
Why you didn't deal with this problem more quickly?
Please answer to my inquiries.
Also it is clear that it was you who made the size mistake.
Please get back to me within 2 hours.

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Is the time convenient for you?
If it isn't, please let me know.

Thank you.

*Because I didn't hear anything, I will send the products that I currently have stocks of.
I will give you a refund for the products that are out of stock.

Thank you for your order.
I have contacted you several times, but there is one product that is out of stock.
As I felt bad for not making shipments while I wait for your reply,
I have decided to send you the rest of the products that are available.
Also, I will give you a wrist band as a small gesture.

I hope you will like it.

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Is the time convenient for you?
If it isn't, please let me know.

Thank you.

*Because I didn't hear anything, I will send the products that I currently have stocks of.
I will give you a refund for the products that are out of stock.

Thank you for your order.
I have contacted you several times, but there is one product that is out of stock.
As I felt bad for not making shipments while I was waiting for your reply,
I have decided to send you the rest of the products that are available.
Also, I will give you a wrist band as a small gesture.

I hope you will like it.

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Line,インドにて1000万ユーザ達成、年末までにが2000万を目標

Lineが正式にインドにてローンチされたのは3ヶ月程前、高校生ユーザに向けたテレビ広告のキャンペーンを盾に行われた。
Line Corpによると、このメッセージアプリは、インドにて1000万ユーザ登録を実現し、年末までには2000万を切るであろうと予測されている。

Lineのユーザ登録総数は2.3億人、その内、日本の次に最もアプリユーザ数が多いタイでは1800万人となっている。スマホ市場の拡大を目に、Lineはインド１のスマホチャットアプリを目指し、大胆なマーケティングを用いている。↵
1800万

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Line,インドにて1000万ユーザ達成、年末までに2000万人を目標

Lineが正式にインドにてローンチされたのは3ヶ月程前、高校生ユーザに向けたテレビ広告のキャンペーンを盾に行われた。
Line Corpによると、このメッセージアプリは、インドにて1000万ユーザ登録を実現し、年末までには2000万人を越えるであろうと予測されている。

Lineのユーザ登録総数は2.3億人、その内、日本の次に最もアプリユーザ数が多いタイでは1800万人となっている。スマホ市場の急拡大を見据え、Lineはインド１のスマホチャットアプリを目指し、大胆なマーケティングを用いている。