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rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 23 Jul 2014 at 10:45
original When the iTunes hit chart appears, these songs don't appear on it at all. Is it because the song titles contain special characters? Also, when I click on the song titles, the I don't get sent to a new page (you probably already noticed this by now). The play button and other buttons doesn't appear at the bottom of the page. I've already dealt with it with CSS, but I'm just letting you know these issues.	corrected When the iTunes hit chart appears, these songs don't appear on it at all. Is it because the song titles contain special characters? Also, when I click on the song titles, I don't get sent to a new page (you probably already noticed this by now). The play button and other buttons don't appear in the column at the bottom of the page. I've already dealt with it with CSS, but I'm just letting you know these issues.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

23 Jul 2014 at 10:45

original
When the iTunes hit chart appears, these songs don't appear on it at all. Is it because the song titles contain special characters?

Also, when I click on the song titles, the I don't get sent to a new page (you probably already noticed this by now).
The play button and other buttons doesn't appear at the bottom of the page. I've already dealt with it with CSS, but I'm just letting you know these issues.

corrected
When the iTunes hit chart appears, these songs don't appear on it at all. Is it because the song titles contain special characters?

Also, when I click on the song titles, I don't get sent to a new page (you probably already noticed this by now).
The play button and other buttons don't appear in the column at the bottom of the page. I've already dealt with it with CSS, but I'm just letting you know these issues.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 23 Jul 2014 at 10:47
original As is shown in the photo there is no mistake that it was delivered to New York on the 6th June, after which tracking is not available. The possible causes we can imagine are loss, held by customs or theft. You chose standard shipping. As was stated in the description insured value of the item was placed to the value of $60. After you have contacted USPS and have found out that the item has been lost we will refund you $60.	corrected As is shown in the photo, it was definitely delivered to New York on the 6th of June, after which tracking is not available. The possible causes we can imagine are loss, customs delays, and theft. You chose standard shipping. As was stated in the description, the insured value of the item was placed at $60. Once you have contacted USPS to confirm that the item has been lost, we will refund you $60.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

23 Jul 2014 at 10:47

original
As is shown in the photo there is no mistake that it was delivered to New York on the 6th June, after which tracking is not available.
The possible causes we can imagine are loss, held by customs or theft.
You chose standard shipping. As was stated in the description insured value of the item was placed to the value of $60. After you have contacted USPS and have found out that the item has been lost we will refund you $60.

corrected
As is shown in the photo, it was definitely delivered to New York on the 6th of June, after which tracking is not available.
The possible causes we can imagine are loss, customs delays, and theft.
You chose standard shipping. As was stated in the description, the insured value of the item was placed at $60. Once you have contacted USPS to confirm that the item has been lost, we will refund you $60.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 23 Jul 2014 at 08:06
original This is a souvenir from famous "Koyasan", a sacred place of Buddhism in Japan. It is an ornament made in the motif of a novice monk (a boy under apprenticeship). The condition: It has been displayed at home for a long time. An ornament made from Japanese old coins (old moneys) It is not known whether the old coins are genuine articles or not. The size: Please compare with xx in the photographic image. (xx is not included in exhibit) A stationary article of a crane made from wood It can be displayed without problem, but the base on the lower side comes off. An ethnic taste vase This is a present I recieved as a souvenir from Egypt or Greece, but I do not remember clearly which was it. I have been displaying it with greate care.	corrected This is a souvenir from the famous Koyasan, a sacred Buddhist site in Japan. It is an ornament made in the shape of a novice monk (a boy under apprenticeship). Condition: It has been displayed in a home for a long time. An ornament made from old Japanese coins (old money) It is not known whether the old coins are genuine or not. Size: Please compare it with xx in the photographic image. (xx is not included in the listing) A wooden crane figurine It can be displayed without a problem, but the base on the bottom comes off. An ethnic-style vase This is a present I received as a souvenir from Egypt or Greece, but I do not remember clearly which was it. I have been displaying it with great care.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

23 Jul 2014 at 08:06

original
This is a souvenir from famous "Koyasan", a sacred place of Buddhism in Japan.
It is an ornament made in the motif of a novice monk (a boy under apprenticeship).

The condition: It has been displayed at home for a long time.

An ornament made from Japanese old coins (old moneys)
It is not known whether the old coins are genuine articles or not.

The size: Please compare with xx in the photographic image.
(xx is not included in exhibit)

A stationary article of a crane made from wood
It can be displayed without problem, but the base on the lower side comes off.

An ethnic taste vase
This is a present I recieved as a souvenir from Egypt or Greece, but I do not remember clearly which was it.
I have been displaying it with greate care.

corrected
This is a souvenir from the famous Koyasan, a sacred Buddhist site in Japan.
It is an ornament made in the shape of a novice monk (a boy under apprenticeship).

Condition: It has been displayed in a home for a long time.

An ornament made from old Japanese coins (old money)
It is not known whether the old coins are genuine or not.

Size: Please compare it with xx in the photographic image.
(xx is not included in the listing)

A wooden crane figurine
It can be displayed without a problem, but the base on the bottom comes off.

An ethnic-style vase
This is a present I received as a souvenir from Egypt or Greece, but I do not remember clearly which was it.
I have been displaying it with great care.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 07:33
original Hello Gailey, This is my first time ordering S4410x, so we have no previous record of the shipping history. Also from our previous order history, 10 pieces were ordered. So it should be fine if you could ship 10 pieces to us.	corrected Hello Gailey, This is my first time ordering S4410x, so we have no previous record of the shipping history. Also, our previous order history indicates that 10 pieces were ordered. So it should be fine if you could ship 10 pieces to us.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 08:42
original #2 Donate in the event and present the cherry trees which is guarding symbol for reconstruction to Watari-cho, Miyagi-ken The cherry trees spread their roots on the disaster-stricken area, become a hope which bright the mind of Tohoku region people with growing and pass down from generation to generation without weather the disaster memory. Someday, we hope that Tohoku region people can laugh and say "Good health!!!" under the full-brown cherry trees and send the heart for reconstruction of Kobe to Tohoku region.	corrected #2 Donate during the event to help present cherry trees, which offer symbolic protection for the reconstruction of Watari-cho, Miyagi-ken. The cherry trees will spread their roots throughout the disaster-stricken area, offering hope and optimism to the people of the Tohoku region as they grow and pass down from generation to generation a memory of the disaster that will not fade with time. Someday, we hope that the people of Tohoku can laugh and say "Good health!!!" under the cherry trees in full bloom, sending Kobe's hopes for reconstruction to the Tohoku region.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

22 Jul 2014 at 08:42

original
#2

Donate in the event and present the cherry trees which is guarding symbol for reconstruction to Watari-cho, Miyagi-ken

The cherry trees spread their roots on the disaster-stricken area, become a hope which bright the mind of Tohoku region people with growing and pass down from generation to generation without weather the disaster memory.

Someday, we hope that Tohoku region people can laugh and say "Good health!!!" under the full-brown cherry trees and send the heart for reconstruction of Kobe to Tohoku region.

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#2

Donate during the event to help present cherry trees, which offer symbolic protection for the reconstruction of Watari-cho, Miyagi-ken.

The cherry trees will spread their roots throughout the disaster-stricken area, offering hope and optimism to the people of the Tohoku region as they grow and pass down from generation to generation a memory of the disaster that will not fade with time.

Someday, we hope that the people of Tohoku can laugh and say "Good health!!!" under the cherry trees in full bloom, sending Kobe's hopes for reconstruction to the Tohoku region.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 08:10
original ★Time of the event: August 2 (Sat) 11:00 am-10:30 pm ★Location: Specially setted up stage at Minatonomori Pack (Kobe Shinsaifukko Memorial Park) ★Address: Onohamacho, Chuo Ward, Kobe City ★Entrance Fee: Free ★Performer: Itokin (ET-KING/OSAKA ROOTS) Gagaga SP, Da-iCE, SOLIDEMO, Mai Hoshimura, 7942, KOBerrieS♪, etc. ★Presenter: KoshibaKEN (ET-KING), Mai Enoki (Announcer of San TV), etc.	corrected ★When: August 2 (Sat) 11:00 am–10:30 pm ★Location: Special stage at Minatonomori Park (Kobe Shinsaifukko Memorial Park) ★Address: Onohama-cho, Chuo-ku, Kobe City ★Entrance Fee: Free ★Performers: Itokin (ET-KING/OSAKA ROOTS) Gagaga SP, Da-iCE, SOLIDEMO, Mai Hoshimura, 7942, KOBerrieS♪, and others ★Presenters: KoshibaKEN (ET-KING), Mai Enoki (San TV announcer), and others

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

22 Jul 2014 at 08:10

original
★Time of the event: August 2 (Sat) 11:00 am-10:30 pm
★Location: Specially setted up stage at Minatonomori Pack (Kobe Shinsaifukko Memorial Park)
★Address: Onohamacho, Chuo Ward, Kobe City
★Entrance Fee: Free
★Performer: Itokin (ET-KING/OSAKA ROOTS)
Gagaga SP, Da-iCE, SOLIDEMO, Mai Hoshimura, 7942, KOBerrieS♪, etc.
★Presenter: KoshibaKEN (ET-KING), Mai Enoki (Announcer of San TV), etc.

corrected
★When: August 2 (Sat) 11:00 am–10:30 pm
★Location: Special stage at Minatonomori Park (Kobe Shinsaifukko Memorial Park)
★Address: Onohama-cho, Chuo-ku, Kobe City
★Entrance Fee: Free
★Performers: Itokin (ET-KING/OSAKA ROOTS)
Gagaga SP, Da-iCE, SOLIDEMO, Mai Hoshimura, 7942, KOBerrieS♪, and others
★Presenters: KoshibaKEN (ET-KING), Mai Enoki (San TV announcer), and others

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 08:17
original Thank you for your message. Hasn't the product been delivered to you? We will check on the shipping situation, too. We're sorry, but please wait for about three days. Regarding the item, if it has been lost or shipped in a wrong way, we will ship the product to you again by means such as EMS. We appreciate your understanding. We apologize about the trouble we've caused you.	corrected Thank you for your message. Hasn't the product been delivered to you? We will check on the shipping situation, too. We're sorry, but please wait for about three days. Regarding the item, if it has been lost or incorrectly shipped, we will ship it to you again by EMS or a similar service. We appreciate your understanding. We apologize for the trouble we've caused you.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 07:39
original Thanks for your esteemed message. We are very sorry. We are afraid there is the possibility of delivery failure from the error of the dispatch system, as for the lost of the commodity. We will immediately refund. Please let us known of, if the commodity arrive at you. Thanks for your esteemed message. We are very sorry. We are afraid there is the probability of the delivery error, if we check further. As for the dispatch the commodity, it will be resent within 3 days. Please accept our sincere apology.	corrected Thank you for your message. We are very sorry. We are afraid there may have been a delivery failure due to a dispatch system error--or perhaps the item has been lost. We will immediately issue a refund. Please let us know when the item arrives. Thank you for your message. We are very sorry. Our inquiry has revealed that there has likely been a delivery error. We will resend the item within 3 days. Please accept our sincere apology.

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English

22 Jul 2014 at 07:39

original
Thanks for your esteemed message.

We are very sorry.
We are afraid there is the possibility of delivery failure from the error of the dispatch system, as for the lost of the commodity.
We will immediately refund.
Please let us known of, if the commodity arrive at you.

Thanks for your esteemed message.

We are very sorry. We are afraid there is the probability of the delivery error, if we check further.
As for the dispatch the commodity, it will be resent within 3 days.
Please accept our sincere apology.

corrected
Thank you for your message.

We are very sorry.
We are afraid there may have been a delivery failure due to a dispatch system error--or perhaps the item has been lost.
We will immediately issue a refund.
Please let us know when the item arrives.

Thank you for your message.

We are very sorry. Our inquiry has revealed that there has likely been a delivery error.
We will resend the item within 3 days.
Please accept our sincere apology.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 08:15
original Today, it was confirmed that the goods were damaged by the stuff of postoffice. I made a claim for damages to refund you. I am sorry to trouble you but will you let the postoffice know that the goods was damaged. The number is OO. And could you tell me your number, that they may call you. Your goods is now on my hand. Please look it that I put up again. Thank you for your additional bid. I will ship as I pack it. And as you paid over postage, I will refund partly through Paypal afterward.	corrected Today, we confirmed that the goods were damaged by the post office staff. I submitted a claim for damages so I can refund your money. I am sorry to trouble you, but please let the post office know that the goods were damaged. Their phone number is OO. And could you tell me your number, so they may call you? I have your goods with me now. Please see that I have listed them again. Thank you for your additional bid. I will ship it as soon as I pack it. And as you overpaid for postage, I will issue a partial refund through Paypal later.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

22 Jul 2014 at 08:15

original
Today, it was confirmed that the goods were damaged by the stuff of postoffice.
I made a claim for damages to refund you.
I am sorry to trouble you but will you let the postoffice know that the goods was damaged.
The number is OO.
And could you tell me your number, that they may call you.

Your goods is now on my hand.
Please look it that I put up again.

Thank you for your additional bid.
I will ship as I pack it.
And as you paid over postage, I will refund partly through Paypal afterward.

corrected
Today, we confirmed that the goods were damaged by the post office staff.
I submitted a claim for damages so I can refund your money.
I am sorry to trouble you, but please let the post office know that the goods were damaged.
Their phone number is OO.
And could you tell me your number, so they may call you?

I have your goods with me now.
Please see that I have listed them again.

Thank you for your additional bid.
I will ship it as soon as I pack it.
And as you overpaid for postage, I will issue a partial refund through Paypal later.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 08:54
original so I currently serve as a teacher at this unified educational offering elementary through junior high school educations. As a mother of three, I feel truly blessed for being able to pursue my career. Lisa, the birth giving experience will bring you a whole new world. It might give you a different insight which would motivate you to challenge something new. However, remain calm and enjoy your moments with your children. Before you know it, your wants will come to you. Ten years ago when I gave birth to my oldest, Yuzua, I left my job and had gone through the anxiety, nevertheless I tried to enjoy juggling my web design career and parenting.	corrected I currently serve as a teacher at a unified educational institution offering elementary through junior high school education and attended by special-needs children. As a mother of three, I feel truly blessed for being able to pursue my career. Lisa, the experience of giving birth will open up a whole new world for you. It might give you a different perspective that will motivate you to try something new. However, remain calm and enjoy your moments with your children. Before you know it, what you want will come to you. Ten years ago when I gave birth to my oldest, Yuzua, I left my job and went through some anxiety; nevertheless, I tried to enjoy juggling my web design career and parenting.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

22 Jul 2014 at 08:54

original
so I currently serve as a teacher at this unified educational offering elementary through junior high school educations.
As a mother of three, I feel truly blessed for being able to pursue my career.

Lisa, the birth giving experience will bring you a whole new world.
It might give you a different insight which would motivate you to challenge something new.

However, remain calm and enjoy your moments with your children. Before you know it, your wants will come to you.
Ten years ago when I gave birth to my oldest, Yuzua, I left my job and had gone through the anxiety, nevertheless I tried to enjoy juggling my web design career and parenting.

corrected
I currently serve as a teacher at a unified educational institution offering elementary through junior high school education and attended by special-needs children.
As a mother of three, I feel truly blessed for being able to pursue my career.

Lisa, the experience of giving birth will open up a whole new world for you.
It might give you a different perspective that will motivate you to try something new.

However, remain calm and enjoy your moments with your children. Before you know it, what you want will come to you.
Ten years ago when I gave birth to my oldest, Yuzua, I left my job and went through some anxiety; nevertheless, I tried to enjoy juggling my web design career and parenting.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 22 Jul 2014 at 08:19
original Kindly find the attached purchase order in PDF format. I understood your point. So you are going to ship my previous order, correct? Among those listed for the order this time, please take out whatever available and ship them together with my last order. If possible, please include Tripods and DOLLY to the upcoming shipment. Because I want my last order to be shipped today for sure, you could just focus on what you can ship today while leaving the remaining items behind for now.	corrected Kindly find the attached purchase order in PDF format. I understood your point. So you are going to ship my previous order, correct? Among those listed for the order this time, please take out whatever available and ship them together with my last order. If possible, please include Tripods and DOLLY in the upcoming shipment. Because I want my last order to be shipped today for sure, please just focus on what you can ship today while leaving the remaining items behind for now.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

22 Jul 2014 at 08:19

original
Kindly find the attached purchase order in PDF format.

I understood your point.
So you are going to ship my previous order, correct?
Among those listed for the order this time, please take out whatever available and ship them together with my last order.
If possible, please include Tripods and DOLLY to the upcoming shipment.

Because I want my last order to be shipped today for sure, you could just focus on what you can ship today while leaving the remaining items behind for now.

corrected
Kindly find the attached purchase order in PDF format.

I understood your point.
So you are going to ship my previous order, correct?
Among those listed for the order this time, please take out whatever available and ship them together with my last order.
If possible, please include Tripods and DOLLY in the upcoming shipment.

Because I want my last order to be shipped today for sure, please just focus on what you can ship today while leaving the remaining items behind for now.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 20 Jul 2014 at 11:02
original #ill The item I purchased is the following: It says New on eBay, but the correct description should be MINT? Or would it be another head? If it were for another head, would the specification be the same? (I mean, TOUR ISSUE SLDR SILVER 10.5 (Toe Screw)?) Awaiting your reply.	corrected #ill The item I purchased is the following: It says New on eBay, but should the correct description be MINT? Or would it be another head? If it were another head, would the specification be the same? (I mean, TOUR ISSUE SLDR SILVER 10.5 (Toe Screw)?) Awaiting your reply.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 20 Jul 2014 at 11:05
original "Family Seat" is prepared for small kids and people who want to sit and see the live, so please take a seat while the live is ongoing. It does not include seats that guarantee a close distance from the stage. Family Seats are only available at Kodagumi and playroom. Elementary students or older are same rate as adults for all tickets. (If you wish for your child to have their own seat, a ticket is required even for children under elementary school)	corrected "Family Seats" are for small kids and people who want to sit and see the show, so please take a seat while the show is ongoing. Does not include seats that are guaranteed to be close to the stage. Family Seats are only available at Kodagumi and playroom. Elementary students or older are the same rate as adults for all tickets. (If you wish for your child to have their own seat, a ticket is required even for children younger than elementary school age)

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

20 Jul 2014 at 11:05

original
*"Family Seat" is prepared for small kids and people who want to sit and see the live, so please take a seat while the live is ongoing.
*It does not include seats that guarantee a close distance from the stage.
*Family Seats are only available at Kodagumi and playroom.
*Elementary students or older are same rate as adults for all tickets. (If you wish for your child to have their own seat, a ticket is required even for children under elementary school)

corrected
*"Family Seats" are for small kids and people who want to sit and see the show, so please take a seat while the show is ongoing.
*Does not include seats that are guaranteed to be close to the stage.
*Family Seats are only available at Kodagumi and playroom.
*Elementary students or older are the same rate as adults for all tickets. (If you wish for your child to have their own seat, a ticket is required even for children younger than elementary school age)

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 20 Jul 2014 at 10:59
original Only 1 inventory is available for this version. I would apply 5% discount, how does this sound to you? If you'd like to, you may use this coupon here. Another customer has been inquiring about B, so it might be sold out. Please excuse us in such case. Would you please place an order by adding the item in the eBay shopping cart? If there is any discrepancy with the shipping fee, we will let you know in reply to this message.	corrected We have only one item in stock for this version. How about a 5% discount? If you'd like to, you may use this coupon here. Another customer has been inquiring about B, so it might be sold out. Please excuse us in such case. Would you please place an order by adding the item to your eBay shopping cart? If there is any discrepancy with the shipping fee, we will let you know in reply to this message.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

20 Jul 2014 at 10:59

original
Only 1 inventory is available for this version. I would apply 5% discount, how does this sound to you? If you'd like to, you may use this coupon here.
Another customer has been inquiring about B, so it might be sold out. Please excuse us in such case.
Would you please place an order by adding the item in the eBay shopping cart? If there is any discrepancy with the shipping fee, we will let you know in reply to this message.

corrected
We have only one item in stock for this version. How about a 5% discount? If you'd like to, you may use this coupon here.
Another customer has been inquiring about B, so it might be sold out. Please excuse us in such case.
Would you please place an order by adding the item to your eBay shopping cart? If there is any discrepancy with the shipping fee, we will let you know in reply to this message.

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