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元の翻訳
Thank you for your everyday support.
Recently, I have received a contact from the buyer whom I requested a refund.
The product has been safely arrived.
Therefore, may I ask your favor to cancel my refund claim?
Thank you for your support.

Hello,
Thank you for your reply.
I'm glad to hear that the product has been safely arrived.
Currently, international postage seems to be delaying due to the holiday season.
It seems the reason of delay caused to your order.
In this time, it took a time, but I would highly appreciate your future orders.
Thank you very much.

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Thank you for your everyday support.
Recently, I have received a contact from the buyer for whom I requested a refund.
The product has been safely delivered.
Therefore, may I ask your favor to cancel my refund request?
Thank you for your support.

Hello,
Thank you for your reply.
I'm glad to hear that the product has safely arrived.
Currently, international shipping seems to be slower than usual due to the holiday season.
It seems to be the reason for the delay of delivery for your order.
Although the delivery took longer than expected this time, I would highly appreciate your future orders.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
We apologize.
It is our mistake of delivery by 100 percent.
We will refund the shipping charge.
We are asking the post office how many day are required until the item arrives.
We appreciate your patience.
It is expected to be about 10 days.
If you request cancellation, we will refund it to you in full.
What is your decision about it?
We will look forward to your reply.

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We apologize.
It is completely our mistake of delivery.
We will refund the shipping charge.
We are asking the post office how many days it takes for the item to arrive.
We appreciate your patience.
It is expected to take about 10 days.
If you request a cancellation, we will refund it to you in full.
What would you like to do?
We will look forward to your reply.

元の翻訳
Dear**
Thank you very much.
I will complete the payment to the person in charge until tomorrow of Japan time.
Thank you so will contact from me after payment completion.

Dear**
Hello.
Payment has been completed.
I think if you can send the goods if I get confirmation.

Sincerely.

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Dear**
Thank you very much.
I will complete the payment to the person in charge by tomorrow Japan time.
[Thank you so will contact from me] <-this part doesn't make sense after payment completion.

Dear**
Hello.
Payment has been completed.
I would appreciate it if you can send the product upon confirmation

Sincerely.

元の翻訳
You will not submit your invoice though we have been requested from last manth. Neither your adress nor telephone number are clear. Therefore, only the way left for us is to return the goods!
When we called for the company A, we are told about that there is no relationship between your company and the company A.
Since we buy it from not company A but your company, we have needed your information.
Although the haulier had made a contact with the company A, they could not obtain any information because there is no purchase with my name.
We cannot wait any longer, and then we will take a procedure for repayment via PayPal.
Please contact the haulier if there are any solutions.

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You do not submit your invoice though we have been requesting it from last month. Neither your address nor telephone number is clear. Therefore, the only way left for us is to return the goods!
When we called the company A, we were told that there is no relationship between your company and the company A.
Since we bought it from not company A but your company, we needed your information.
Although the carrier had made a contact with the company A, they could not obtain any information because there was no purchase under my name.
We cannot wait any longer, and thus we will proceed with a refund via PayPal.
Please contact the carrier if there are any solutions.

元の翻訳
Than you for contact us.
You made a successful bid of a wrong mount lens, didn't you?
E-PL3 has a mirrorless lens and runs on the one named M,ZUIKO.
We can accept your returning for mount different lens but please send the item to the place of the address below first. As soon as the item reaching, we'll refund the money deducting a shipping charge from PayPal.
Best regards.

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Than you for contacting us.
I understand you bid for a lens with a wrong mount, correct?
E-PL3 is a mirrorless camera and its compatible lens is called M,ZUIKO.
We can accept your return due to a wrong mount but please send the item to the address below first. As soon as the item arrives, we'll refund the money minus the shipping cost through PayPal.
Best regards.

元の翻訳
i am really sorry for the lateness of the sending
it took time to do the packaging
i will send the product today by EMS and notify you the tracking number so you can trace it.

i have sent the product today
i am really sorry that it took so much time

i am really sorry but the product that you successfully bid have been damaged.
i will refund you. i will make a transaction cancelllation on EBAY so please accept it
i am deeply sorry for the trouble. if there is another product that you are interested in, please let me know
i will grant you a 10% discount

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i am really sorry for the delayed shipping.
it is taking time to do the packaging.
i will send the product today by EMS and notify you the tracking number so you can trace it.

i have sent the product today.
i am really sorry that it took so much time.

i am really sorry but the product that you successfully bid has been damaged.
i will refund you. i will make a transaction cancellation on EBAY so please accept it.
i am deeply sorry for the trouble. if there is another product that you are interested in, please let me know.
i will grant you a 10% discount.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your inquiry.
The data you had purchased can be re-downloaded 100 times after the time of purchase.
You can download the data you purchased via smartphones or office PC directly to your private PC.

Thank you for being interested in the item.
We had asked to the manufacturer, and found that they do not ship this product to abroad.
We are really sorry that we could not help you for this.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
The data you purchased can be re-downloaded 100 times from your order history.
You can download the data you purchased via smartphones or office PC directly to your private PC.

Thank you for your interest in the product.
We asked the manufacturer, and found that they do not ship this product abroad.
We are really sorry that we could not be of your help.

元の翻訳
「インドの消費者は、何かを選ぶ時、サービスを基準に選択していることに気づきました。そして我々はどこよりもその部分で負けないようにしたいです。」
XiaomiのHugo Barra副社長はインドでの立ち上げの際に語りました。「我々はインドの中華系企業にはなりたくありません。インドで、インド企業として定着したいです。そして最良の第一歩を踏み出しました。サムソンやアップルにとっても脅威になるのではないでしょうか。」

「消費者にとっても、素晴らしい日々の始まりです。インド独立記念日にNarendra Modi総理大臣が国民に告げたように“素晴らしき時代はの始まり”です。

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「インドの消費者は、何かを選ぶ時、サービスを基準に選択していることに気づきました。そして我々はどこよりもその部分で負けないようにしたいです。」
XiaomiのHugo Barra副社長はインドでの立ち上げの際に語りました。「我々はインドの中華系企業にはなりたくありません。インドで、インド企業として定着したいです。そして最良の第一歩を踏み出しました。」サムソンやアップルにとっても脅威になるのではないでしょうか。

消費者にとっても、素晴らしい日々の始まりです。インド独立記念日である今日Narendra Modi総理大臣が国民に告げたように“素晴らしき時代の始まり”です。