畝森 浩一 (wannabe) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
Mr Hirata Yuichiro is scheduled to appear in both rooms alternatively (He is free to go to either).

①SOLIDEMO Mukaiyama, Watanabe, Sasaki, Yamaguchi
http://studio.ameba.jp/user/premiumBroadcast?cast_id=2320

②SOLIDEMO Nakayama, Sawaki, Kimata, Teshima
http://studio.ameba.jp/user/premiumBroadcast?cast_id=1459

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Mr Hirata Yuichiro is scheduled to appear in both rooms alternatively (He is footloose and can show up in either room any time).

①SOLIDEMO Mukaiyama, Watanabe, Sasaki, Yamaguchi
http://studio.ameba.jp/user/premiumBroadcast?cast_id=2320

②SOLIDEMO Nakayama, Sawaki, Kimata, Teshima
http://studio.ameba.jp/user/premiumBroadcast?cast_id=1459

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply.

We sell this sprinkler for $ 118.55 a piece.
However, there was a mistake in the product name on Amazon side and it was written four pack.

I'm terribly sorry, but could you please cancel it, or we will refund $90, so could you purchase products again for the proper price?

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Sorry for the late reply.

We sell this sprinkler for $ 118.55 a piece.
However, there was a mistake in the product name on Amazon side and it was written as four packs.

I'm terribly sorry, but could you please cancel it, or alternatively reply to us if you prefer to get $90 refund and receive the product for the price of one?

元の翻訳
I order products which are still in stock. Our desired selling price is same as the factory's wholesale price. Could you please check the stock status and please let us know the prices for the products listed in the stock list and where to ship them to. I would like to order products for next spring/summer as I have stated in the attached file. Could you possibly give us some discount regarding wholesale price? If possible, I would officially order as it's offered.

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I order products which are still in stock. I would like to purchase them at the factory's wholesale price. Could you please check the stock status and let us know the prices for the products in the stock list and where to ship them to. I would like to order products for next spring/summer as I have stated in the attached file. Could you possibly give us some discount from your wholesale price? I will place an final order upon receiving your reply.

元の翻訳
We'd like to join the pitch of the startup.
In that case, Tanaka is supposed to join it from our company.

Tanaka can't join the event during the time he takes part in the panel discussion.
Please let us know about the details.

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We'd like to join the startup pitch.
If accepted, we plan to delegate Mr. Tanaka to represent our company.

Mr. Tanaka cannot be present at the event during and around the time he takes part in the panel discussion.
Please let us know about the details.

元の翻訳
Application Qualification
・have internet connection environment
・able to use Skype
・work on at least one video per day
・able to use words, email, attached video to email, be able to insert basic information and to communicate through Gmail an so on.
・able to work on long duration
・able to work fine and accurately
・able to report, inform, ask for advise, and check
・housewife who has plenty of time
・able to reply right away when we contact
・acknowledge to let us upload the video on YouTube
・not use third party's video without permission

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Application Qualification
・has internet connection environment
・is able to use Skype
・can work on at least one video per day
・is able to use MS-Word and email, to attach video on a email, to insert basic information and communicate through Gmail or the like.
・is able to work on a long-term basis
・is able to work carefully and accurately
・is able to report, inform, ask for advise, and check
・is a housewife who has time to spare
・is able to reply quickly when we contact
・can accept our uploading the video on YouTube
・does not use third parties' video without permission