翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

在庫にある商品を選んで発注しています。
販売価格の希望は、工場の卸価格でお願いいたします。在庫状況の確認 お願いいたします。
この在庫リストの商品の価格と出荷先を教えてください。来年の春夏商品を添付ファイルの内容で発注したいです。卸価格に対してどれだけのディスカウントができますか。その内容で正式オーダーにします。

英語

I order products which are still in stock. Our desired selling price is same as the factory's wholesale price. Could you please check the stock status and please let us know the prices for the products listed in the stock list and where to ship them to. I would like to order products for next spring/summer as I have stated in the attached file. Could you possibly give us some discount regarding wholesale price? If possible, I would officially order as it's offered.

レビュー ( 1 )

wannabeはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました 2014/08/13 20:02:46

元の翻訳
I order products which are still in stock. Our desired selling price is same as the factory's wholesale price. Could you please check the stock status and please let us know the prices for the products listed in the stock list and where to ship them to. I would like to order products for next spring/summer as I have stated in the attached file. Could you possibly give us some discount regarding wholesale price? If possible, I would officially order as it's offered.

修正後
I order products which are still in stock. I would like to purchase them at the factory's wholesale price. Could you please check the stock status and let us know the prices for the products in the stock list and where to ship them to. I would like to order products for next spring/summer as I have stated in the attached file. Could you possibly give us some discount from your wholesale price? I will place an final order upon receiving your reply.

まー元の日本語が曖昧な部分があるのは確かですが、「販売価格の希望」の部分は文脈から真意を少し推測してあげなければ辻褄が合わない英訳になってしまいます。

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レビューありがとうございます。特に最後の文は明確で完璧です！勉強させていただきました。