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Could you send me the message about my payment that I need for shipping items? This time it will be 5 items for 80 dollers, will that be fine? I would like to understand what you exactly mean. If I am wrong, please let me know.

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Could you send me the message about my payment that I need for shipping items? This time, it will be 80 dollars for 5 items; will that be fine? I would like to understand what you exactly mean. If I am wrong, please let me know.

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I do not want you to hate Japan or eBay. I would take your returning offer if you are paying your shipping fee. After I receive the item, I will refund all of your money. Will you take this deal? Thank you.

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I do not want you to hate Japan or eBay. I will accept your offer to return the item if you pay the shipping fee. After I receive it, I will refund all your money. Will you take this deal? Thank you.

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1.On the page for products, it says it's new but the product i got is obviously used.

Also the product that doesn't have 80pages was delivered.

2. I received the product which looks completely different compare to the picture and dirty

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1.On the page for products, it says it's new but the product I got is obviously used.

Also the product that doesn't have 80 pages was delivered.

2. I received a dirty product completely different from the picture.

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Hello,
Thank you all the time and I would like to ask you some questions.
The product from Sena that I bought before, are the formware of SMH10D-10( 25pieces) and SMH 10-11 ( 15 pieces ) 4.2 of the newest version? If not, could you tell me what is the newest version?

Baby Plus, the product I bought from you said it is made in China, Is it the right product?
Also could you tell me when you will sell Baby plus? I would like to know some great deal products too.

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Hello,
Thank you all the time and I would like to ask you some questions.
The product from Sena that I bought before, are the firmwares of SMH10D-10( 25pieces) and SMH 10-11 ( 15 pieces ) using the newest 4.2 version? If not, could you tell me what is the newest version?

Baby Plus, the product I bought from you said it is made in China, Is it the right product?
Also could you tell me when you will sell Baby plus? I would like to know some great deal products too.

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AAA recommended me to go to your website so I did. I am currently looking for the products below.

If you are selling them, can I buy them? I am looking forward to hearing your good news.
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I am interested in those products down below.
I would love to buy them but I know you don't ship products to Japan. Could you send them to me somehow?

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AAA recommended your website to me to visit.↵
I am currently looking for the products listed below.

If you have some of the items, Id like to buy them. ↵
I am looking forward to hear from you.
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I am interested in the products listed below.
I would love to buy them but I know you don't ship products to Japan. ↵
Could you send them to me somehow?

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1; the customer said he/she bought the jack in bigger size.
2. the customer said he/she asked to change the same jacket in smaller size.
3; the customer claimed to want the same color.
4; maneger told me the smaller size jacket is out of stock.
5; maneger asked him/her if he/she wants the same jacket in navy.
6; maneger told him/her that even the manufacturer doesn't have one in same color.
7; the customer wasn't happy about the taste so he wants to bring the same meal again.
8; the customer asked us for the discount.

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1; the customer said he/she mistakenly bought the jacket in bigger size.
2. the customer asked to swap the jacket for the smaller size.
3; the customer requested for the same color.
4; maneger told me the smaller size jacket in the same color is out of stock.
5; maneger asked the costumer if he/she wants the same jacket in navy.
6; maneger told the costumer that even the manufacturer doesn't have one in same color.
7; the customer wasn't happy about the taste so he wants the same meal to be brought again.
8; the customer asked for a discount.↵
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1,客は昨日間違えて大きいサイズのジャケットを買ったと言った。↵
2,客は同じジャケットの小さいサイズに替えてもらうよう頼んだ。↵
3,客は同じ色が欲しいいと主張した。↵
4,マネージャーは同じ色の小さいジャケットは在庫切れだと言った。↵
5,マネージャーは紺色のサイズと交換するのはどうかと頼んだ。↵
6,マネージャーは同じ色はメーカーにもないと主張した。↵
7,客は味に満足しなかったので、同じ料理をもう一度持ってきてほしいと言った。↵
8,客は会計を安くしてほしいと頼んだ。

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Hello, I could get the product that I have wanted cheaper because of you. Can I get cheaper watches if I keep business with you? Emailing to you personally discounts the product than I order from the website, I would like to keep emailing to you personally. Thank you.

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Hello, I could get the product that I have wanted cheaper because of you. Can I get watches at low cost if I keep business with you? If emailing to you personally discounts the product than I order from the website, I would like to keep emailing to you personally. Thank you.

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thanks for your understanding. We relisted them so please check them. There is a kind of bubble on lens which is Cannon's speciality.

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Thank you for your understanding. We re-listed them so please check them. ↵
There is an available lens similar to Canon's specialty fisheye lens.

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こんにちは。　ebayのメールをのコピーの写真を送ります。　あなたは、これに記入していただいたのですが、一番大切な私のアドレスの部分を忘れています。郵便番号を忘れています。税関役員の人に明らかにするために、赤い文字ではっきりと、小包にかいてください。私はあなたの、郵便番号の載ってない送り状を持っていて、郵便番号の載っていない小包のコピーと、送り状の33.88ユーロ四捨五入して34.00ユーロのコピーを作成しました。

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こんにちは。　ebayのメールと一緒に、記入していただいた書類のコピー（写真）を送ります。あなたは、この書類に記入する際、一番大切な私のアドレスの部分を忘れていました。郵便番号を書き忘れていたんです。税関役員の人はその小包を処理する際に、赤い文字ではっきりと（ IN RED COLOR LETTERS ）フィギュアと小包の（配送）書類に書いてありました。私はあなたの、郵便番号の載ってないインボイス（請求書・納品書）を持っています。郵便番号の載っていない小包のコピーと、33.88ユーロ四捨五入して34.00ユーロのインボイス証明のコピーを持っています。

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Thank you for your respond.

I will send you the picture of bolts and nuts that we are using in Japan. The picture above is the one you sent us and below is the one made in Japan. The top part seems a bit bigger in Japan. The ones that are selling everywhere are them. If you need any other information please let us know. Thank you for your cooparation.

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Thank you for your (respond) responce.

I (will) hasten to send you the picture of bolts and nuts that we are using in Japan. The picture above is the one you sent us and below is the one specified (made) in Japan. The (top part) head of bolt seems a bit bigger in Japan. The ones that are sold commercially (selling sold everywhere) are this type (them). If you need any other information please let us know. Thank you for your cooparation.

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Long time no see. How are you doing? I am emailing to you about the refund of RBZ Tour8. Could I pay 240dollers payment and cutoff for the next payment? Thank You.

Long time no see. How are you doing? I am emailing to you about the returning of R11s V3 10.5, The picture is zoomed for the hall so could you take a look at it? Thank You.

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Long time no see. How are you doing? I am emailing to you about the refund of RBZ Tour8. Could I pay 240　dollers payment and have a setoff (cutoff) for the next payment? Thank You.

Long time no see. How are you doing? I am emailing to you about the returning of R11s V3 10.5, The picture is zoomed for the (hall) hole so could you take a look at it? Thank You.

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Thank you for your business with us all the time.

I am again very sorry for our mistake for your purchase. From now, we will put our extra careful of confirmation for the compliance, when you exhibit intellectual property rights and Customer Policy of Amazon for selling and buying. Thank You for your understanding and I hope we will have another business in near future.

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Thank you for your business with us all the time.

I am again very sorry for our mistake for your purchase. From now, we will take extra care of the confirmation of compliance with intellectual property rights and customer Policy of Amazon for selling and buying when we exhibit items. ↵
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Thank You for your understanding and I hope we will have another business in near future.

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I am now informing you the very important information so please finish reading all the letter.

Thank you for your purchase of () but I am so sorry that we mistakenly sent you the bigger one that you ordered so we are currently cancelling the merchandise to our office. For that, we couldn't deal with the budget that we had so we can't send it to you anymore. Could you please cancel your purchase by yourself? If you canceled it, we will send you 30dollers worth Amazon Gift Card for the return. I am very sorry for your inconvinience.

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I have an important announcement to make, so please be sure to read this until the very end.

Thank you for purchasing ().↵
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We have sent the item, which you have purchased. However, due to our mistake it was sent back because it was too big. ↵
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Since we weren't able to get the planned shipment method, the deficit amount in the amount that you paid is very big and so, we are not able to send the item.↵
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This may be a very selfish request, but may we ask you to cancel the order?↵
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We will give you an amazon gift certificate worth 300 dollars if you would cancel it.

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すべての、アメリカの工場や私たちは、5/8のフォルストナードリル（１５．８ｍｍ）を各刑場のねじをとめるために使っています。あなたがたは、何ミリのヒートボルトを使っているか教えてもらってもよいでしょうか？同じねじを日本のジムや、学校で使っていますか？t-nutはミリメーターのねじや、普通のねじ、もしくはどちらとも、受け入れてくれるのでしょうか？

私たちは５０種類の新しい、小さいものや普通のものや、昔の形のものをつくる準備をしており、私はあなたの、問題を検討し、そしてあなたは、ねじを抑えるものをつくらなくてよくなります。　そうなので、あなたのとt-nutsのねじを私が持っていれば、あなたに贈る、ねじおせえの検討をしたいです。

もし、あなたが、すぐにヒートボルトのミリメーターの大きさを教えてもらえるととても、助かります。ただちにおねがいします。

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すべての、アメリカの工場や私たちは、5/8のフォルストナードリル（１５．８ｍｍ）を各刑場のねじをとめるために使っています。あなたがたは、何ミリのヒートボルトを使っているか教えてもらってもよいでしょうか？同じねじを日本のジムや、学校で使っていますか？t-nutはミリメーターのねじや、普通のねじ、もしくはどちらとも、受け入れてくれるのでしょうか？

私たちは５０種類の新しい、小さいものや普通のものや、昔の形のものをつくる準備をしており、私はあなたの、問題を検討し、そしてあなたは、ねじを抑えるものをつくらなくてよくなります。　そうなので、あなたのとt-nutsのねじを私が持っていれば、あなたに贈る、ねじおせえの検討をしたいです。

もし、あなたが、すぐにヒートボルトのミリメーターの大きさを教えてもらえるととても、助かります。ただちにおねがいします。　

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Nowhereelse.frによると、これはiPhone5Sのユーザーのガイドだそうです。このパンフレットによると、iPhone５の指認識の説明をしていたときと、同じ形の丸いホームボタンの周りがグレイの輪っかがあるのがわかります。このガイドは”ホームボタン・タッチＩＤセンサー”と言われています。これは、Appleが識別の手段として5S'指紋認識と言っています。

これは、9to5Macとのコラボレーションと言われています。私たちは、さまざまな場面で、この指紋認識を電話をシャットダウンするためだと言っていました。私たちは、このシステムがどのようにして動くのか、あつめたものを説明していきます。

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Nowhereelse.frによると、これはiPhone5Sのユーザーガイドの写真です。パンフレットにはiPhone５の指紋認証の以前の描写に一致する、同じ形の丸いホームボタンの周りに灰色の輪っかがあるiphoneが記載されています。ガイドはこのボタンを”ホームボタン・タッチＩＤセンサー”として言及しています。これは、Appleが識別の手段として5S'指紋認識と意味しています。

これは、9to5Macとのコラボレーションと言われています。私たちは、さまざまな場面で、この指紋認証をアンロックの手段としか使用されないだろうと言っていました。私たちは、このシステムがどのようにして動くのか説明していきます。

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The merchandise hasn't arrived yet but I assume we will have them all by tomorrow. I would send you the picture of them when they come right away. Also I will send the picture of the bill throughout Paypal so please check it then finish the payment. Once I check your deposit, I will send the track numbers by email. If you were going through eBay, handling charge will be expensive so please contact in person.


I think there is some peeling gold here and there, but if you use them as decoration, they are not noticeable.

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The merchandise hasn't arrived yet but I assume we will have them all by tomorrow. I will send you the picture of them when they come right away. Also I will send the picture of the bill throughout Paypal so please check it and then finish the payment. Once I check your payment, I will send the tracking number(s) by email. If you were going through eBay, handling charge will be expensive so please contact in person.


Gold plating has been taken off here and there, but if you use them as decoration, they are not noticeable.