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We are sorry to give you an inconvenience this time.
There was a mistake in setting the price for the item that you had purchased due to system error of the sales of Amazon.

Amazon processed refunding in full and gave you 10 points additionally as their apology.
Are you satisfied with it?
Thank you for checking our store.

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We are sorry to give you an inconvenience this time.
There was a mistake in setting the price for the item that you had purchased due to sales system error of Amazon.

Amazon carried out full refund and gave you 10 points additionally as their apology.
Are you satisfied with it?
Thank you for purchasing in our store.

元の翻訳
Hello.
We will charge you the differnece to send by air with registered mail, but you have
not paid for it yet.
Under the current situation, we will send it by SAL without registered mail.
Is it all right for you?
We will wait for your reply.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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Hello.
We will charge you the difference to send by air with registered mail, but you have
not paid for it yet.
Under the current situation, we will send it by SAL without registered mail.
Is it all right for you?
We will wait for your reply.
Thank you for your cooperation.

元の翻訳
How to cancel by ourselves in case where more than 1 week has passed since the order has been made

It has already been under the status of "Confirm shipment" by a person in charge of sending.
If it has not been under this status, change it to "Confirm shipment" at first.
For the reason of refunding, select "Undeliverable shipping address". 3 dollars are compensated for it. Send the following message.↵

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How to cancel by ourselves in case of orders that have passed more than 1 week since the first order

It should be under the status of "Confirm shipment" by a person in charge of sending.
If it has not done, carry out the procedure of "Confirm shipment" at first.
For the reason of refunding, select "Undeliverable shipping address". 3 dollars are compensated for it. Send the following message.

元の翻訳
We were wrong in listing this size.
Could you tell us size of your shoes?
The size that you purchased are as follows.

US 9
US10
US11

Which one is your size?

After you let us know, we will send it to you.
Please send a message to us.

Is the item that you would like to obtain the one in this picture?

The price of this item is 20 dollars and shipping charge.

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■We listed the wrong size for this one.
Could you tell us your shoe size?
The size that you purchased were:

US 9
US10
US11

Which one is yours?

After you let us know, we will send it to you.
Please send us a message.

■ Is the item that you would like to obtain the one in this picture?

The price of this item is 20 dollars and shipping charge.

元の翻訳
If you have time, search Rakuten and other shops in Internet by Google.

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If you have time, search Rakuten and other online shops by using Google.

元の翻訳
However, we do not recommend participation by babies and very young children much by considering the volume of the speakers, etc. during the live concert.
If they would like to participate in it, we recommend that they see the concert at a seat that is far from the speakers.

Notes:
In participation of this event, we request that you must observe the following notes.

When we witness that you act by violating the notes and you do not follow the instruction of the staff on the day, we might stop holding the event or ask you to leave the hall.

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However, considering the volume of the speakers, etc. during the live concert, we do not recommend that babies and very young children attend the concert.
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If you are bringing them to the concert, we recommend that they sit far from the speakers.

Notes:
When attending this event, we request you to observe the following points.

If it is found that you are violating these points, and you do not follow the instructions of the staff on that day, we might stop holding the event or ask you to leave the hall. We appreciate your understanding.

元の翻訳
On the day, we will close when the space is filled. We request tha you understand it in advance. Those who are eligible for it are younger than elementary school students.
However, as for participating in the event by babies and very young children, we do not recommend it much by considering the volume of speaker when the live concert is performed.
If they would like to participate in it, we recommend that they see the concert at a seat that is far from the speaker.

Note:
In participating in this event, we request that you observe the following notes.

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On the day, we will close requests when the space is filled. We request that you understand it in advance. Those who are eligible for it are elementary school students or younger.
However, as for participating in the event with babies and very young children, we do not recommend it much by considering the volume of speakers when the live concert is performed.
If they would like to participate in it, we recommend that they see the concert at a seat that is far from the speakers.

Note:
In participating in this event, we request that you observe the following notes.

元の翻訳
You do not have to rearrange the meeting of A.
However, we will have the following meeting.

The time that is available now is as follows.

September 18th after 15:00
Morning of September 19th

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You do not need to rearrange the meeting of A.
However, we want to have the following meeting.

The time that is available now is as follows.

September 18th after 15:00
Morning of September 19th

元の翻訳
I am going to purchase 3 pieces of this item.
In case that I send 3 pieces of this item to Japan, may I send in the same box?
How much will be the shipping charge for it?

Will the price of 1 piece of the item when I send it to Japan 495.8 EURO excluding VAT?
Or will be 590 EURO including VAT?
I will wait for yoru reply.

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I am going to purchase 3 pieces of this item.
If you send 3 pieces of this item to Japan, can you send them all together in the same box?
How much will be the shipping charge for it?

Will the price of 1 piece of the item when I send it to Japan 495.8 EURO excluding VAT?
Or will be 590 EURO including VAT?
I will wait for your reply.

元の翻訳
I appreciate your long patience.
Yesterday I heard from a person in charge of Japan Post that it was going to be compensated due to the accident that happened when it was sent.do
I can refund 2,393 dollars to you.

Have you already returned the guitar to Japan?

Are you going to use the guitar after repairing?
Or if you would like to return it to Japan, please contact me.

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I appreciate your patience.
Yesterday I heard from a person in charge of Japan Post that it was going to be compensated due to the accident that happened when it was sent.do
I can refund 2,393 dollars to you.

Have you already returned the guitar to Japan?

Are you going to use the guitar after repairing?
Or if you would like to return it to Japan, please contact me.

元の翻訳
貴方のウェブサイトに関する記載内容ですが、大量にお買い求められるのですか。値段について交渉可能です。

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貴方のウェブサイトに関する記載内容ですが、（ある程度の）数量を買い求めになられますか。値段について交渉可能です。ご参考まで。

元の翻訳
We apologize to have given you an inconvenience.
we checked the history of sending again, and found that it ha↵
d already been sent to you.
It might be suspended at the customs or lost in the process of delivery.
This time we used SAL, by which we cannot track by the tracking number.
For this reason, we cannot track furtheremore, so we cannot check when we can deliver it to you.

As you said, we consider the fact that several months have already passed,
and we would like to process refunding for you.

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We apologize to have given you an inconvenience.
we checked the shipping status again, and found that it had already been sent to you.
It might be suspended at the customs or lost in the process of delivery.
This time we used SAL, by which we cannot track by the tracking number.
For this reason, we cannot track furthermore, so we cannot check when it will be delivered to you.

As you said, we consider the fact that several months have already passed,
and we would like to process refunding for you.

元の翻訳
According to history of tracking at post office, it was delivered on September 1st.↵
However, no one was at home, so it was returned to the post office.
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I hate to ask you, but could you inquire to your nearest post office by using the tracking number?
As I cannot inquire from other country, i request that you inquire it by yourself.

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According to the tracking record at the post office, the shipment was delivered on September 1st, but it was returned to the post office due to your absence.
I hate to ask you, but could you make an inquiry to your nearest post office with the tracking number?
As I cannot inquire from other country, i request that you inquire it by yourself.

元の翻訳
Please deliver the items from warehouse to delivery company urgently.
Could you please talk about the expense that is required additionally with the delivery company?
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The delivery company decided time and date of accepting the items from staff of the warehouse, and then went to the warehouse today.
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I assume that the staff of the warehouse contacted the delivery company after confirming the time and date of accepting them to you.
The ratio of volume that we ordered is 60 percent for clothes and 40 percent for shoes.
If we cannot order by this ratio, we will cancel it.

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Please hand over the items from warehouse to the delivery company as soon as possible.
Could you also please discuss on the expense with the delivery company ?
The delivery company went to the warehouse after fixing the date to collect items from the warehouse staff.
I assume that the warehouse staff contacted the delivery company after confirming the time and date with you.
The proportions of the order volume would be 60 percent for clothes and 40 percent for shoes.
If we cannot order in this proportions, we will cancel the whole order.

元の翻訳
2 weeks have passed since we heard from about sending it, but we still cannot track(meaning of tracking an item).

Is the tracking number correct? Please send me a correct tracking number.

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2 weeks have passed since we heard about sending it [room for improvement], but we still cannot track the item.

Is the tracking number correct? Please send me the correct tracking number.

元の翻訳
包装紙にカメラの減額された価格を記入するようお伝えすべきでした。本日、税関において関税を払い、その際、問題ありませんでしたので、ご安心ください。

価格が象徴のように記載されていれば、税関では関税について詰問されません。
なぜなら、税関職員がカメラに精通していないからです。

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パッケージ (または梱包の書類) にカメラの減額された価格を記入するようお伝えすべきでした。本日、税関において関税を払いましたが、仕方ないです。気にしないでください。

価格が象徴のように（実際より低く）記載されていれば、税関では関税を要求されません。
なぜなら、税関職員がカメラに精通していないからです。

元の翻訳
I found that 1item among the items pruchased from you has a defect, so I would like to return it to you. Could you accept it?↵
As shipping charge is high, I send by sea. For this reason, there was 2 month absence and I apologize to you.

Details of the item with defect
The color of left and right of the shoe(heel) is different. I did not find a problem at the items of other size, but the right shoe by US8.5 is yellow. I have not worn it yet, and its condition has not been changed since it had been delivered to me.

I will pay for shipping charge from Japan, and I request that you pay the price of the item when I purchased and the shipping charge.
Please let me know address to which I return it.

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An item I've purchased from your company seems to be defective and I'd like to exchange it, if at all possible.↵
Air mail from here would be expensive so I will have it sent by standard (sea) mail. It's estimated to take at least two months to reach you, so I apologize for the delay.

Details of the defective item:
The color of left and right of the shoe (heel) is different. I did not find a problem with the other sized items, but the heel of the right shoe is yellowed with age. I have not worn it yet, so it's in the same condition as when it was shipped.

I will pay for shipping from Japan, and I request that you refund me the price of the item as well as the shipping charge you applied when I purchased it.
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Please let me know the address to which I can return it.

元の翻訳
Thank you for information. I did not know about the website.
Probably contents of A and B are the same.

I regret to say, but I am not a native speaker, and I don't know what you say,
As Google Analytics does not measure Ajax, if you measure by using A, the number of access will be increased.

If more people post regarding A, it will give an inconvenience to other users, so I would like not to do so.

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Thank you for information. I did not know about the website.
Probably contents of A and B are the same.

I regret to say, but I am not a native speaker, and I don't know what you say.
As Google Analytics does not measure Ajax, if you measure by using A, the number of accesses will be increased.

If more people post regarding A, it will give an inconvenience to other users, so I would like not to do so.

元の翻訳
I need A that I ordered.
Please be careful that you do not send B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have an inventory of A, I cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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I want A that I ordered.
Please be sure not to ship B instead of A by mistake.
If you do not have the inventory of A, I will cancel this order.
I anticipate that you send A to me.
I appreciate your cooperation.