スージー (sujiko) — もらったレビュー

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We are sorry that we are delayed in sending it.
It takes time to package it.
We will send the item today by EMS.
After we send it, we will notify you of the tracking number.

Today we sent the item.
We are very sorry to have taken time this time.

We are sorry that we destroyed the item that you had bidded.
We will process refunding immediately.
We will open a cancellation transaction at Ebay, so we need your agreement.

As we gave you an inconvenience, we will give you 10 percent discount if you are interested in some items.

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We are sorry that we are delayed in sending it.
It takes time to package it.
We will send the item today by EMS.
After we send it, we will notify you of the tracking number.

Today we sent the item.
We are very sorry that it took long for this trade.

We are sorry that we have damaged the item that you had bidded.
We will make a refund immediately.
We will open a cancellation transaction at Ebay, and we need your agreement.

As we gave you an inconvenience, we will give you 10 percent discount if you are interested in some items.

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I purchased A and B from you.
Have you sent them all together or separately?
If you have sent it separately, please let me know the tracking number of another one.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I purchased two items, A and B, from you.
Have you shipped them altogether or separately?
If you have shipped them separately, please let me know the tracking number for the second shipment.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I purchased A and B from you.
Have you sent them all together or separately?
If you have sent it separately, please let me know the tracking number of another one.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I purchased A and B from you.
Have you shipped them altogether or separately?
If you have shipped them separately, please let me know the tracking number for the other one.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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She is conducting a tour called "Koda Kumi Live Tour 2014～Bon Voyage～" where 51 concerts are held in 2 countries with the album. The last one is held in Taiwan on August 16th.

On August 6th 2014, the newest summer single album "Hotel" will be released.

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She is currently having a tour called "Koda Kumi Live Tour 2014～Bon Voyage～" for the said album, with 51 concerts held in two countries. The last one was held in Taiwan on August 16.

On August 6, 2014, the newest summer single album "Hotel" will be released.

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Thank you for sending A last month.
The same customer told me that he or she wanted to purchase A again as an extra.
Please let me know the price.
I would like to order 1 piece.

Have you received B yet?
If you have received it, i would like to order.

When will I receive C?
I have already paid the price of the item 2 months ago.

I request that you let me know about receiving of D and E.

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Thank you for sending A last month.
The same customer told me that he or she wanted to purchase A again as an extra.
Please let me know the selling price.
I would like to order 1 piece.

Have you received B yet?
If you have done so, i would like to place an order.

When will I receive C?
I have already paid for the item 2 months ago.

I request that you let me know about the due-in status of D and E.

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In case where price of Amazon Japan x 0.96 is larger than price of Aucfan, etc.,
purchase by Aucfan,etc. other than Amazon.

If there is not much difference in the price for the item listed(does not apply to rule 1), please talk with a person in charge.
Please pay attention to "new item" and "used item".

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In case where price of Amazon Japan x 0.96 is larger than price of Aucfan, etc.,
purchase from Aucfan etc. other than Amazon.

If there is not much price difference for the listed item (does not apply to rule 1), please consult with a person in charge.
Please pay attention to "new item" and "used item".

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We are collecting packages at forwarding company to import the items.
As the forwarding company is strict about us recently, we cannot forward if we
do not submit an invoice where address, telephone number, details of the items and purchase
price of the seller are listed sometimes.
For this reason, I would like you to put the invoice in the packages or send the invoice to me by email.
You can send an invoice issued by Paypal.

We request that you enclose the invoice where address, telephone number, details of the items and purchase price of the seller are listed or send it by jpg or pdf by email.

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We are collecting packages at our forwarding company to then import the items.
As the forwarding company is being strict recently, we cannot forward items if we
do not submit an invoice where the address, telephone number, details of the items and purchase
price of the seller are listed.
For this reason, I would like you to put the invoice in the packages or send the invoice to me by email.
You can send an invoice issued by Paypal.

We request that you enclose invoices where the address, telephone number, details of the items and purchase price of the seller are listed or send it by jpg or pdf by email.

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(Sales) 10:00 on October 5th～
e＋http://eplus.jp/

(Inquiry) Kyoto Kacho University and Junior College Steering committee of Kacho Festival
Telephone: 075-525-2939
As we are the students, we cannot anwer your call.
We appreciate that you understand it.

URL of Kyoto Kacho University: http://www.kyotokacho-u.ac.jp/
URL of Kacho Junior College: http://www.kacho-college.ac.jp/

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(Sales) 10:00 on October 5th～
e＋http://eplus.jp/

(Inquiry) Kyoto Kacho University and Junior College Steering committee of Kacho Festival
Telephone: 075-525-2939
As we are students, we cannot answer your calls at any time.
We appreciate your understanding.

URL of Kyoto Kacho University: http://www.kyotokacho-u.ac.jp/
URL of Kacho Junior College: http://www.kacho-college.ac.jp/

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(Sales) 10:00 on October 12th(Sunday)～
e＋http://eplus.jp/

(inquiry) Student support group at Machida Campus of Tokyo Kaseigakuin University
Telephone: 042-782-9818
Email:gakusei@kasei-gakuin.ac.jp
Event URL of Tokyo Kasei Gakuin University: http://www.kasei-gakuin.ac.jp/event/index.html

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(Sales) 10:00 on October 12th(Sunday)～
e＋http://eplus.jp/

(Inquiries) Student support group at the Machida Campus of Tokyo Kasei Gakuin University
Telephone: 042-782-9818
Email: gakusei@kasei-gakuin.ac.jp
Event URL for Tokyo Kasei Gakuin University: http://www.kasei-gakuin.ac.jp/event/index.html

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After filling out the required items, please send it to us. The Information will contact you by email.

You sometimes cannot make a reservation within 2 weeks from the day you request.↵
We request that you understand it.

As this form is shown by frame, the mark of the key of SSL is not shown at a brower,↵
but it is sent by SSL. We hope that you do not worry about it.

As for inspection of other option, we will add based on the selection made by those who request it(We request that you understand that you have to pay for the fee for the inspection).

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Please send the form after filling in all required fields. General information will contact you via email once they have received the form.

Please understand that we may not be able to offer you an appointment in the two weeks after your requested date.

Please note that while an SSL (encryption) key does not appear at the top of the browser due to the form being displayed in frames, this page is safely encrypted.

We will add other test options based on selections made by applicants. (Please note that test fees are to be paid by the patient).

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Thank you for sending a sample book.
We checked the contents, and decided the item that we are going to sell.

The item below is the one that we have sold so far, and we will continue to sell it in the future.

The item below is the new item that we are going to sell.

We request that you send the status of inventory for these all the item every month.
If we know the status of the inventory, it is very helpful for us.

In addition, as the sample book that you had sent was so good, could you please send the
sample book of the item below that has already been sold?

If we have it, we can introduce the items to customers in detail, so it will be easy for us to sell.

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Thank you for sending a sample book.
We checked the contents, and decided the item that we are going to sell.

The item below is the one that we have been selling so far, and we will continue to sell it hereafter.

The item below is the new item that we are going to sell.

We request that you send the inventory status for these all the item every month.
If we know the inventory status, it is very helpful for us.

In addition, as the sample book that you had sent was so good, could you please send the
sample book of the item below that has already been sold?

If we have it, we can introduce the items to customers in detail, so it will be easier for us to sell.

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We can give 10 percent discount for both "aaa" and "bbb".
If you purchase both, we will make it at xxx dollars including shipping charge if you
don't mind about sending it by SAL without registered mail.(in case of air mail, it is plus xxx dollars and in case of EMS, it is plus xxx dollars).
We hope that you consider it. We appreciate your understanding.

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We can give 10 percent discount for both "aaa" and "bbb".
If you purchase both, we will make it at xxx dollars including shipping charge if you
don't mind about sending it by SAL without registered mail (additional xxx dollars in the case of air mail, or additional xxx dollars in the case of EMS).
Please take this into your consideration. Thank you and best regards.

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Thank you for contacting us.
Your item will be shipped today.
If it is sent by standard shipping that you selected, it will take about 6 to 20 days until you receive it.
If you would like to change how to send, please let us know immediately.
If you do not let us know, we will send it today as scheduled.

After we send it, we will inform you the tracking number, so we appreciate your little patience.

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Thank you for contacting us.
Your item will be shipped today.
If it is sent by standard shipping that you selected, it will take about 6 to 20 days until you receive it.
If you would like to change how to send, please let us know immediately.
If you do not let us know, we will send it today as scheduled.

After we send it, we will inform you of the tracking number, so we appreciate your little patience.

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Click the "INVENTORY" at top of the screnn, attach the copied ASIN and search.

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Click "INVENTORY" at the screen top, attach the copied ASIN, and search.

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If it not different much, delete the date of my item(it is the same as the relisted item until
middle point).

Copy not the screen of order but ASIN code of the item.

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If it [verb missing] not much different, delete the date [mistranslation] of my item (it is the same as the relisted item until
middle point).

Copy not the screen of order but ASIN code of the item [mistranslation].

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As there are appropriate items, we delete the listing by "Delete product and listing" of "Action".

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・As the applicable items show, select "Action" followed by "Delete product and listing", then delete the listings.

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As there are appropriate items, we delete the listing by "Delete product and listing" of "Action".

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The appropriate items appear, then you delete the listing by "Delete product and listing" in "Action".

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(Item whose profit was minus or less than 300 Yen after sending)

Compare our sale price and other's sales price.
In case where they are quite different and we are likely to gain the profit if we correct it (in other words, our pricing was not appropriate), we list it as if we set the price a little lower than other's price.

It is as follows. If other people list at 122.55 dollars(including shipping charge), we list at 122.45 dollars(including shipping charge). The standard of whether it produces a profit or not

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(Item of which profit was minus or less than 300 Yen after sending)

Compare our sale price with other's sales price.
In case where it is quite different and we are likely to gain the profit if we correct it (in other words, our pricing was not appropriate), we list it by setting the price a little lower than other's price.

It is as follows. If other people list at 122.55 dollars(including shipping charge), we list at 122.45 dollars(including shipping charge). The standard of whether it produces a profit or not is

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2. As for credit card, use Mitsui Sumitomo VISA listed above(registered).
12:00 to 14:00 is designated for the hour.
Select Osaka for the address to which it is delivered.
Remove the checking at registration of "like" at the shop, and at setting of distributing email magazine, click "Removing all the selections".↵
Click "Confirm order".

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2. As for the credit card, use Mitsui Sumitomo VISA listed above(registered).
Designate the time from 12:00 to 14:00.
Select Osaka for the address to which it is delivered.
Remove the "like" check to the shop registered and click "remove all the selections" at setting of email magazine distribution and then click "Place an order".

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My friends often say that I am active very much. I had been enthusiastic about playing baseball in elementary school, junior and senior high school while studied hard.

After entering the university, I volunteered in NGO in India and Myanmar, and created a free paper and documentary to show the activity. I also held a charity event to inform the activity of NGO in these countries. My grades in the university had been always good to be a foreign exchange student.
I am working at a company that carries out halal business as an intern energetically.
I always try to challenge.

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My friends often say that I am very active. I had been enthusiastic about playing baseball in elementary school, junior and senior high school while studied hard.

After entering the university, I volunteered in NGO in India and Myanmar, and created a free paper and documentary to show the activity. I also held a charity event to inform the activity of NGO in these countries. My grades in the university had been always good to be a foreign exchange student.
I am working at a company that carries out halal business as an intern energetically.
I always try to challenge myself.

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Finally about culture. I love music. I like to listen to the music, and I practice guitar recently.
I would like to introduce Japanese music ranging from traditional one to recent one to those in the dormitory. I also would like to play as a band with friends in the event such as l-Night.

Other than music, I would like to introduce culture of comics and food, and learn culture of other countries actively. I would like to exchange culture with those in the dormitory in the event of food, fair and daily life.

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Finally about culture. I love music. I like to listen to the music, and I practice guitar recently.
I would like to introduce Japanese music ranging from traditional to contemporary to fellow dormitory residents. I would also like to play as a band with friends at the l-Night event or alike.

Other than music, I would like to introduce food as well as comic culture, and actively learn about the culture of other countries. I would like to jouyfully engage in intercultural exchange with fellow dormitory residents both at events such as the Food Fair as well as during daily life.

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Finally send a message of apology to purchaser. Select the name.

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Finally, send a message of apology to purchaser. Select the name.

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As we have not received your reply yesterday, we will send an invoice for the remaining 2 pieces.
As we have already received 20 dollars as shipping charge, we will charge you 5 dollars as remaining amount.
As there must be 3 packages, we have not shipped the 1 that you had settled at first.

We will ship the 3 packages after settling by this invoice.
If you would like to cancel it, etc., please let us know as promptly as possible.
We appreciate your cooperation.

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As we did not received your reply yesterday, we will send an invoice for the remaining 2 pieces.
As we have already received 20 dollars as shipping charge, we will charge you 5 dollars as remaining amount.
As there must be 3 packages, we have not shipped the 1 that you had settled at first.

We will ship the 3 packages after settling by this invoice.
If you would like to cancel it, etc., please let us know as promptly as possible.
We appreciate your cooperation.