Robert Baranowski (robbaran) — 付けたレビュー

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Due to the fact that this product is really expensive in Japan,
my customers and friends would be really happy if they bought it from you store.
I am happy with how things worked out this time.
Just so that you know I plan on making additional purchases in the future. When that time comes I hope we can make things work. Thank you very much for your time.

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Because this product is really expensive in Japan,
my customers and friends will be delighted when I show them what I bought from your store.
I am happy with how things worked out this time.
Just so you know, I plan on making additional purchases in the future. When that time comes I hope we can make things work. Thank you very much for your time.

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These are the 10 items out of the 20 that I bought.
Other 10 items were priced correctly.
Please revise the price of these 10 to $2000.00, which is the correct one. (I bought them at a wholesale discount.)
Otherwise, I will need to pay a tax more than I should only to lose my money.

Please note that unrevised price would affect our future business with you.

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These are 10 out of the 20 items that I bought.
The other 10 items were priced correctly.
Please revise the price of these 10 to $2000.00, which is the correct one. (I bought them at a wholesale discount.)
Otherwise, I will need to pay more tax than I should and I will lose money.

Please note that if you are unable to revise the price, it will affect our future business with you.

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Hello.
For the item which I have asked about before, If there is no display till 16th August, I heard that Amazon would pay for the item. How is it proceeding?

I am looking forward to your reply.

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Hello.
For this item which I have asked about before⇒↵
I heard that Amazon would pay for the item if it is not re-listed by August 16th. How is this being processed?

I am looking forward to your reply.

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The condition of item is very bad. Also, the package is very rough which cannot be looked like the brand new.

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The condition of the item is very bad. Also, the package is very rough and cannot be thought to be brand new.

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This is Watanosato, thank you for your reply.
I am very sorry for my late reply due to time lag.
I checked with your goods here in Japan, but I found out only that they are stored somewhere in Santa Monica.
I will continue searching, but the post office said it would take more than 1 week to get reply.
Didn't you find any pink USPS envelope of delivery absence notice in your post?
On that notice, the postal office which delivered your goods was written.

USPS free dial number is below,
800-222-1811

Please check the below URL to request re-delivery from HP

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This is Watanosato, thank you for your reply.
I am very sorry for my late reply due to the time lag.
I checked with your goods here in Japan, but I found out only that they are stored in a Post Office somewhere in Santa Monica.
I will continue searching, but the post office said it would take more than 1 week to get a reply.
Did you find a pink USPS notice of delivery absence in your mail?
On that notice, the postal office to which your goods were delivered was written.

USPS free dial number is below,
800-222-1811

Please check the below URL to request re-delivery from HP

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Yes, It's midnight in Japan right now.
I rest assure because you are a person willing to contact me on such short notice.
If I knew things were going to be like this, I would have contacted you directly much sooner.

Are you selling the watch with playing cards dials?
A seller I found is willing to sell it to me for $120.
I will send you an image.

I think that if you could lower the price a little I would consider buying from you.
Thank, let me know what you think.

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Yes, it's midnight in Japan right now.
I rest assured because you are a person willing to contact me on such short notice.
If I knew things were going to be like this, I would have contacted you directly much sooner.

Are you selling the watch with playing card dials?
A seller I found is willing to sell it to me for $120.
I will send you an image.

I think that if you could lower the price a little I would buy from you.
Thanks, let me know what you think.

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Thank you for your kind reply. The company name which we asked the remittance to your bank account on 12th is "Queenbee Capital Co., Ltd". I have been using this company for remittance to French bank for many times. Normally, the transfer had completed two days or one day after completion of remittance.
However, if you have not received my remittance yet, it would be necessary to investigate the reason.
So kindly please check whether you surely cannot receive my remittance or not.
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Thank you.

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Thank you for your kind reply. The name of the company we asked for the remittance to your bank account on 12th is "Queenbee Capital Co., Ltd". I have used this company for remittance to French banks many times. Normally, the transfer completes two days or one day after completion of remittance.
However, if you have not received my remittance yet, it would be necessary to investigate the reason.
So kindly please check whether you surely have not received my remittance.

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Thank you for your e-mail.
For the item, you haven't got it yet?

I will check it.

Thank you for your e-mail.
For the tracking number, I don't put it on the items under 70 dollars, because the transportation fee become expensive.

Thank you for your e-mail.
For the item, I am sorry to hear that it didn't arrive to the address.
If there is no mistake for the address, I will send it again and put the tracking number then.
Is it ok for you?

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Thank you for your e-mail.
For the item, you haven't got it yet?

I will check it.

Thank you for your e-mail.
For the tracking number, I don't put it on the items under 70 dollars, because the transportation fee would become expensive.

Thank you for your e-mail.
For the item, I am sorry to hear that it didn't arrive to your address.
If there is no mistake for the address, I will send it again and include a tracking number.
Is this ok with you?

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I have received the item, however it has been so badly damaged that it really can't be called a brand new item. I will return the item so please tell me the best place to return it to. Also I would like a refund for the price of the item. I will appreciate your cooperation

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I have received the item, however it has been so badly damaged that it really can't be called a brand new item. I will return the item so please tell me the best address to return it to. Also I would like a refund for the price of the item. I appreciate your cooperation.