Miki Pozar (mikixn) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
We are introducing the 4th edition toy ofAYUMI HAMASAKI on LINE PLAY.

They are gonna be interior items introduced on ayu LIFE STYLE BOOK. (Expected on July 3rd.)

We are also having the special event!
We are collaborating AYUMI HAMASAKI PREMIUM SHOWCASE -Feel the love-!

修正後
We are introducing the 4th edition toy of AYUMI HAMASAKI on LINE PLAY.

They are going to be interior items introduced on ayu LIFE STYLE BOOK. (Expected on July 3rd.)

We are also having a special event!
We are collaborating with AYUMI HAMASAKI PREMIUM SHOWCASE -Feel the love-!

元の翻訳
明らかに最低のサービスです。海外から購入する時だけこのようなことが起きます。販売者からの返事もないですし、相談にも応じてくれません。
もし私がこのレンズの返金を求メルとして、次のことをどうやって知ることができますか。
1) あなたは商品を受け取ってから返金するつもりですか？
2) 私はあなたに£40をTax n Duty であなたからこの商品を購入するために支払いました。そして、今私はあなたのところに返品するための送料£40を損することに直面しています。どうして、自己都合ではない理由での返品で送料を負担しなければいけないのですか。あなたが行なっていることは販売者として最低です。
あなたはこのレンズが粗悪品あることをは十分知っていたんでしょうね。だから私が指摘してからあなたは何のコメントもなかった、つまりあなたは自分が間違ったことをしたことをわかっているからですね。

修正後
明らかに最低のサービスです。海外から購入する時だけこのようなことが起きます。販売者からの返事もないですし、相談にも応じてくれません。
もし私がこのレンズの返金を求メルとして、次のことをどうやって知ることができますか。
1) あなたは商品を受け取ってから返金するつもりですか？
2) 私はあなたからこの商品を購入するために税込み£40を支払いました。そして、今私はあなたのところに返品するための送料£40を損することに直面しています。どうして、自己都合ではない理由での返品で送料を負担しなければいけないのですか。あなたが行なっていることは販売者として最低です。
あなたはこのレンズが粗悪品あることをは十分知っていたんでしょうね。だから私が指摘してからあなたは何のコメントもなかった、つまりあなたは自分が間違ったことをしたとわかっているからですね。

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your email/letter/call.
My wife is in labor and I'm beside her and taking care of her at the hospital.
I would like to send your order as soon as possible, but I really cannot leave here till the time our baby comes.
According to the doctor, it should be done by Sunday.
I am very sorry to keep you waiting. I am sure that I can send it by Monday.

I know you are looking forward to it, and once again I am sorry that I can't send it you right away.
I appreciate your understanding.

Thank you.

修正後
Thank you very much for contacting me.
My wife is in labor, and I'm beside her to take care of her at the hospital.
I would like to send your order as soon as possible, but I really cannot leave here as I am not sure when the baby will be born.
According to the doctor, the baby should be born by Sunday.
I am very sorry to keep you waiting, but I am sure that I can send it by Monday.

I know you are looking forward to it, and once again I am sorry that I can't send it you right away.
I appreciate your understanding.

Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your email/letter/call.
My wife is in labor and I'm beside her and taking care of her at the hospital.
I would like to send your order as soon as possible, but I really cannot leave here till the time our baby comes.
According to the doctor, it should be done by Sunday.
I am very sorry to keep you waiting. I am sure that I can send it by Monday.

I know you are looking forward to it, and once again I am sorry that I can't send it you right away.
I appreciate your understanding.

Thank you.

修正後
Thank you very much for contacting me.
My wife is in labor and I'm beside her and taking care of her at the hospital.
I would like to send your order as soon as possible, but I really cannot leave here until our baby comes.
According to the doctor, it should be done by Sunday.
I am very sorry to keep you waiting. I am sure that I can send it by Monday.

I know you are looking forward to it, and once again I am sorry that I can't send it you right away.
I appreciate your understanding.

Thank you.