Michael Davissen (michael_1987) — 付けたレビュー

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#1 If we buy a suitcase at the online store, could you stamp the name of the store on the warranty?

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If we buy a suitcase at the online store, could you stamp the name of the store on the warranty?

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I am glad that I could make settlement without any trouble.
I appreciate you kindly helped me in various ways.
The item will be shipped om February 17th, won't it? When will the item arrive at the destination address?
If there is any way to track the delivery status, I would appreciate if you can tell me how to track it.
I am looking forward to the arrival of the item at the soonest. Thank you in advance.

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I am glad that we settled this transaction without any problems.
I appreciate all your kind help.
The item will be shipped on February 17th, correct? When will the item arrive at the destination address?
If there is any way to track the delivery status, it would help me a lot if you could let me know.
I am looking forward to the arrival of the item as soon as possible. Thank you in advance.

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It is a quite old topic discussed two years ago, but we received the mail below from you r company on the ○.

At that time, I returned all of the stocks from your warehouse to us and checked all the items. but they were all fine.

After that mail. we have not communicate with you through e-mail, I am not sure if I can sell this item to you.

If I can, I would like to sell the item to you again.

However, if there is still any risk which would affect my account or the current listed items, then I will not list the item again.

Can you please tell me the current status?

Below is the copy of the e-mail which we received.

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It is quite an old topic discussed two years ago, but we received the mail below from your company on the ○.

At that time, I returned all of the stocks from your warehouse to us and checked all the items. but they were all fine.

After that e-mail. we have not communicated with you through e-mail, so I am not sure if I can sell this item to you.

If I can, I would like to sell the item to you again.

However, if there is still any risk which would affect my account or the current listed items, then I will not list the item again.

Can you please tell me the current status?

Below is the copy of the e-mail which we received.

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The sales is now going well.
We are going to expand the sales more by advertising the items.

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The sales are going well.
We are going to expand the sales more by advertising the items.

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Please fill out our questionnaire in order to improve our services and products.
To those who answer it, we will offer you a coupon to be able to purchase all our items at a 5% discount.
Please send your answers as a response to this email.

Please let us know good points and negative points about using our shop.
By what key word did you find the item you purchased this time?
What kind of items are you interested in purchasing at our shop?
Please let us know what items and things you are interested in now.
Please let us know the site URL where you often purchase goods.

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Please take this questionnaire to improve our shop items and services.
We will offer 5% OFF coupon code for customers who answer this questionnaire.
Please answer by replying to this email message.

Please tell us about good/ bad experiences you had by visiting our shop.
What kind of keywords did you use to find the item(s) you've purchased this time?
What kind of items do you want to see at our shop in the future?
What kind of things are you interested in the most these days?
Please list shop(s) URL(s) where you shop frequently.

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Could you please use the credit card with the 4 digits below ●●●●.
If this number card is not registered, I don't mind which credit is used.

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Could you please use the credit card with the last 4 digits ●●●●.
If this number card is not registered, I don't mind which credit is used.

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Please use with the credit card whose last 4 digits are xxxx.
If the card with this number is not registered, you can use any credit card.

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Please use the credit card whose last 4 digits are xxxx.
If the card with this number is not registered, you can use any credit card.

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I decided to return this item to seller.
I will negotiate with seller and arrange for returning it.
Please store the item until I prepare the label for returning it.

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I decided to return this item to the seller.
I will negotiate with the seller and arrange for it to be returned.
Please store the item until I prepare the label for returning it.

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Thank you for your inquiry.
Shipment of goods from Japan to South America often does not arrive safely.
It will take quite a bit of time even if they arrive.
So I suggest two to you.

The first, please cancel this order.
I will refund the full amount.

The second one is the product is in the warehouse in the US, so I will send one by special delivery. It will be delivered on January 31.

I apologize for any inconvenience this time.
I'm waiting for your contact.

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Thank you for contacting me.
Shipment of goods from Japan to South America often does not arrive safely.
It will take quite a bit of time even if they arrive.
So I have two suggestions for you.

The first, please cancel this order.
I will refund the full amount.

The second one is, the product stocked in a warehouse in the US, so I will send one by special delivery. It will be delivered on January 31.

I apologize for any inconvenience this time.
I'm waiting for your contact.

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I failed to reserve.
Please change my check in to 2nd of Feburary.
The check out must be on the 9th of February.
Please change to 2 adults to stay.

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I thought about changing the reservation, but I have been unable to.
Please change my check in to 2nd of Feburary.
The check out can remain as the 9th of February.
Please change to 2 adults to stay.

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..and so on.

There must be some who did not want to continue to read.
They will get 5 years older than non-smokers.
Men and women should retake their own beauty before going worsen.

There is no way but not to smoke.
The earlier it effects better.

I wish your succeeding in non-smoking.

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..and so on.

There must be some who did not want to continue reading.
Ageing occurs 5 years faster for smokers, than non-smokers.
Men and women should retake their beauty before it's too late.

Not smoking is the only way.
The earlier it happens the better the results.

I hope you succeed in quitting.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I send a radio clock after checking that it works in Japan. But sometimes we cannot receive electric wave by area and geographical feature. In that case, would you adjust it manually?
You were allowed to return it if it is within 30 days after receiving the item. However,↵
as the 30 days have passed, I hate to say that I cannot returned item.
I cause you an inconvenience, but hope that you handle it in the same way as you have been doing.

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Thank you for contacting me.
I send radio clocks after checking that they work in Japan, however, some areas in Japan cannot received a signal for geographical and other reasons. In that case, please adjust it manually.
You were allowed to return it within 30 days after receiving the item, however, as the 30 days have passed, I'm sorry to say that I cannot returned the item.
I know this is an inconvenience, but I hope that you handle it in the same way as you have up until now.

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■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
One portion, familiar things, harmful effects caused in turn.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver difficulties
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

As they are only terrible things, it is done to this extent.

For the consideration of yourself and to protect the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking all-out?

I hope that everyone can quit smoking successfully.

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■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
It's only one part, but I'll list some familiar products and the harmful effects.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver damage
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

... only terrible things come of smoking, so you should know this much at least.

For the consideration of yourself and to protect the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking for good?

I hope that everyone can quit smoking successfully.

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Also, commonplace smoke is acidic.

■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
One portion, familiar things, harmful effects caused in turn.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver difficulties
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

As they are only terrible things, it is done to this extent.

Tobacco isn't just a problem for yourself.
For consderation for yourself and the health of the people around you, won't you begin to try quitting smoking all-out?

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Also, first hand smoke is acidic. Second hand smoke is alkaline, and stimulates the mucous in the nose and eyes.

■ Ingredients of tobacco smoke
This is only a small part, but I will list some of the familiarities and adverse effects.
・Nicotine... cockroach repellent
Harmful effect: dependence on drugs
・Carbon monoxide... car exhaust fumes
Harmful effect: oxygen deficiency
・Ammonia... excrement
Harmful effect: liver damage
・Cadmium: batteries
Harmful effects: kidney damage

There are only terrible things in tabacco, which is why I list them.

Tobacco isn't just a problem for yourself.
For consideration of yourself and the health of the people around you, won't you begin to really try quitting smoking?

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In addition, tobacco smoke contains carbon monoxide and when it enters the bloodstream, it binds to hemoglobins. This inhibits the supply of oxygen.

When you smoke tobacco, the head becomes unsteady, and you can get headaches and dizziness... That is from an insufficiency of oxygen in the blood→this is falling into a state of anemia.


《Foods that contain iron》
◇Soybean products
◇Beef, pork, chicken liver
◇Shellfish like oyster, Manila clam, freshwater clam
◇Spinach, Japanese mustard spinach
◇Hijiki, prunes etc.

At the moment there is a bit of a boom in acai palm, which gives strong support to your blood.

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In addition, tobacco smoke contains carbon monoxide and when it enters the bloodstream, it binds to hemoglobins. This inhibits the supply of oxygen.

When you smoke tobacco, you can become lightheaded, get headaches, or become dizzy... This is from an insufficiency of oxygen in the blood→this is falling into a state of anemia.


《Foods that contain iron》
◇Soybean products
◇Beef, pork, chicken liver
◇Shellfish like oyster, Manila clam, freshwater clam
◇Spinach, Japanese mustard spinach
◇Hijiki, prunes etc.

At the moment there is a bit of a boom in acai, which gives strong support to your blood.

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◎Tobacco and... anemia?

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Anemia... if it's a woman, doesn't she have one experience of it?

In fact, does everyone know the things that tobacco does as one of the causes of anemia?

This time it is easy so I'll explain the relationship between tobacco and anemia.

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・By smoking tobacco once, it's said to destroy 25mg of vitamin C inside the body.
Vitamin C is a vital ingredient for the absorption of iron. When that vitamin C is destroyed, the rate of iron absorption declines.

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◎Tobacco and... anemia?

Anemia... most women are likely to have experienced it before.

In fact, did you know that tabacco has been raised as one of the causes of anemia?

Allow me, on this occasion, to explain the relation between tabacco amd anemia.

・It is said that smoking one cigarette destroys 25mg of vitamin C in the body.
Vitamin C is a vital ingredient for the absorption of iron. When that vitamin C is destroyed, the rate of iron absorption declines.

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I'm sorry for the unpleasant sentiments on this occasion.
I'm accepting return requests.

Only I am selling this set item as it looks.
I've already sold over several thousand of them, and the product reviews are high.
However, I received negative feedback for just 2 cases that they were counterfeit.
One of those was from you.
From looking at what did it make you think it was counterfeit? If you can tell me this, I'll make a consultation next time.
As this is procured in Japan, it would be difficult to prepare a counterfeit.
Is the item in the following URL different from the real thing?
Thank you very much.

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I'm sorry for the unpleasant sentiments on this occasion.
I'm accepting return requests.

Only I am selling this item set as you can see.
I've already sold over several thousand of them, and the product reviews are high.
However, I received negative feedback for just 2 cases that they were counterfeit.
One of those was from you.
From looking at what did it make you think it was counterfeit? If you could tell me this, it will be useful for future reference.
As this is procured in Japan, it would be difficult to prepare a counterfeit.
Is the item in the following URL different from the real thing?
Thank you very much.

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I am sorry for making you feel uncomfortable this time.
I will accept the return request.

As you see, only I am selling this set item.
I have already sold more than some thousands, and I have received a lot of good item review.
However, I have received two negative feedback suspecting if the item was a fake.
One of the two was from you.
Can you tell me how and why you thought that my item was a fake? I appreciate your suggestion for the future study.
As I purchase the item in Japan, it would rather more difficult to prepare a fake.
Is it different from the item listed on the URL below? Thank you in advance.

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I am sorry for making you feel uncomfortable.
I will accept the return request.

As you see, only I am selling this item set.
I have already sold more than a few thousand, and the product reviews have been very good.
However, I have received two negative feedback suspecting the item of being a fake.
One of the two was from you.
Can you tell me why you thought that my item was a fake? I appreciate your feedback for future reference.
As I stock the item in Japan, it is more difficult to acquire a fake one.
Is it different from the item listed in the URL below? Thank you in advance.

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I am sorry to have made you uncomfortable this time.
I have received your return request.

As can be seen, only I sell this set of item.
Thousands of them have already been sold, and they have had good item reviews.
However, only two of the reviews had negative feedback saying that the item may be fake.
One of the reviews is from you.
Did you see anything that made you think that it is a counterfeit?
I would like to take your teaching into account in the future.
I buy it in Japan, therefore it is more difficult to procure a fake one.
Is the actual item different from the one in URL below? Thank you in advance.

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I am sorry to have made you uncomfortable.
I have received your return request.

As you can see, only I sell this item set.
Thousands of them have already been sold, and they have had good item reviews.
However, only two of the reviews had negative feedback saying that the item may be fake.
One of those reviews is from you.
Did you see anything that made you think that it is a counterfeit?
Your feedback will prove useful for future reference.
I stock them in Japan, so it is more difficult to procure a fake one.
Is the actual item different from the one in the URL below? Thank you in advance.

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I have received the item! Great! I am happy! I appreciate it!
I am so glad because I can never get it in Japan! I just want a pillow.
I am going to use it tonight.

Thank you so much for a lot of sweets! Very sweet! A big size!
I am going to have little by little.
Many thanks. I am feeling so happy.

Well, I shipped a figure yesterday by EMS.
That figure is so cute.
It is cute and sexy. I love the pose putting the first finger on the lip.

I feel atmosphere of America from the cardboard.
Again, thank you so much!

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I have received the item! Great! I'm so happy! Thank you!
I can't get my hands on this pillow in Japan, so I'm so glad! It's exactly what I wanted.
I am going to use it tonight.

Thank you so much for all the sweets too! They're so sweet! And big!
I am going to have a little each day.
Really, thank you. I'm so happy.

Oh! I shipped the figure yesterday by EMS.
It's so cute.
And sexy too. I love the pose putting it's finger to it's lips.

The cardboard smells like America.
Again, thank you so much!

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How much additional fee is charged in this particular condition?
Would it be fine to assume that you can make a purchase of the item in the price listed on the attachment file?
As we have raised the purchase price, we cannot change the contents of the order.
As the order contains items other than standard goods, the order is well-balanced.
As there is not distributor, some suppliers place an order for one particular model.
As it is getting difficult to place an order, some manufacturers can only order standard models.
The amount of the order which this customer places is now one tenth compared with the one placed two years ago.
In fact, this is the reality.

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How much additional fee is charged in this case?
Would it be fine to assume that you can purchase the item at the price listed in the attached file?
As we have raised the purchase price, we cannot change the contents of the order.
As the order contains items other than standard goods, the order is well-balanced.
There is no distributor, so some suppliers place orders for only one model.
It is getting difficult to place orders, so some manufacturers can only order standard models.
The order from this customer is one tenth of the one placed two years ago.
But this is the reality.

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It's costs an annual fee for the usage of that kind of data. I didn't think it was that high.
I'll try to think of another research method by some kind of analog device until then.

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I see, it costs that much as an annual fee for the usage of data. I didn't think it was that high.
I'll try to think of another research method by some kind of analog device until then.

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I am surprised to know that the annual fee for utilizing the data is very high. I did not expect it is so expensive.
Then, I will plan to use some other alternative analog way to research it till then.

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I am surprised there is such an annual fee for data usage. I didn't think it was so expensive.
Then, I will plan to use some other alternative analog way to research it till then.

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In the near future, it may come out things we need.
We will contact you at that time, thank you for your consideration.

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There may be things we need in the near future.
We will contact you at that time, thank you for your consideration.