Maj (maj_osaka) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
※About the deciding process of 1 , when you find something ,explain the importance of it ,.
If Gone,Neil are satisfied with your reasoning then its OK.
If you have some doubts do consult beforehand.

During training period if you have some errands not connected to work (e.g going to Bank)↵
inform before one day in the attendance of Charwork. That part of time have to be done as overtime↵
after 6 o'clock.
*Taking leave*
When taking paid leaves inform Gone or Neil at least before 2 days.
If it is reported through other employees it will not be regarded as paid holiday.

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※About the deciding criteria of 1, when you find something, explain the importance of it to the job.
If Gone or Neil are satisfied with your reasoning then it's OK.
If you have some doubts then consult with us beforehand.

If you have some errands not connected to work (e.g. going to the bank) during working hours then report it to the Charwork attendance at least one day in advance. ↵
That time has to be made up after 6 o'clock.
↵
*Taking leave*
When taking paid leave, inform Gong as well as Neil directly at least 2 days in advance.
If it is reported through other employees it will not be approved as a paid holiday.

元の翻訳
My apologies to make it difficult to understand.
This time we need a document made by company A in which it has to be stated as below 0.2.
And we also need it signed by company A.
Is it possible for you to request A to make this document?

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I apologize for any misunderstandings.
This time we need a document made by company A in which it has to be stated as below 0.2.
And we also need it signed by company A.
Is it possible for you to request A to make this document?

元の翻訳
Sorry but it is not our fault.
We have the freedom to set the price of our products.
If you think it is expensive for you ,why did you order?
Is not it best to check the price and delivery cost before payment .
Why did you order if you don't want to pay for it.
I understand your feeling but I don't get why you are complaining.
Anyway if you don't like it please send the product back to us to Japan.
We will refund you.
Thank you very much.

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Sorry but it is not my fault.
The seller has the freedom to set the price for this product.
If you think that this is an expensive product then why did you make an order?
The product price and the delivery cost were already confirmed before payment .
If you think it is expensive then it is alright not to proceed with the order right?
I understand your feeling but I don't understand why you are complaining.
Anyway if you don't like it please send the product back to me in Japan.
I will issue a refund.
Thank you for understanding.

元の翻訳
Thank you for explaining.
In that case we will give up about 270 degree rotation.
How about the delivery date?
We will be waiting for your reply.

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I understood.
In that case, we will give up about specification of 270 degrees rotation.
How about the delivery date?
I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.

元の翻訳
The following explains the present condition and improvement measurements needed for the the two KPIs.
I will also explain about the performance of the individual articles respectively.

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I will report on the achievement status and the improvement measures for the two KPIs below.
I will also report about the performance of the respective items.

元の翻訳
[ KAWARA] is a new free news appli which offers a simple and easy way of reading recent news or articles or the collection of hot news .
It brings to you the information of politics, economy, sports, entertainment, disasters, etc. without requiring a RSS reader.
It also has the "Skimming function" that allows you to read freehand as in case of during meals or during make up .

Areas set in the terminal
Check the news efficiently suiting your taste!
Skimming mode on icon tap.
Switch to Skimming mode by icon tap.
Reload articles .
Areas set in the terminal

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[ KAWARA] is a new free news application which offers a simple and easy way of reading a collection of the hottest news such as the most recent news or articles.
It brings to you the information of politics, economy, sports, entertainment, disasters, etc. without requiring a RSS reader.
It also has the "Skimming function" that allows you to read freehand while you are having your meals or doing your make up .

Areas set in the device
Efficiently check the news that suits your taste!
Skimming mode with icon tap.
Switch to Skimming mode by icon tap.
Reload articles .
Areas set in the device

元の翻訳

Therefor, in this moment we are planning to select the pictures of good quality and of better user interest, for your products.(Some of the pictures posted will also fulfill　the requirement of "Creative Commons" or our own )

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Therefore, at this moment we are planning to select the pictures for your products based on our readers' interests and picture quality. (Some of the pictures posted will also be either our own or fall under the conditions for "Creative Commons".)

元の翻訳
It is very important that the contents of the posts are focused on the needs like their general affairs which the users are interested in. Also the point that the pictures will have influence on the response of the articles as a trait of Facebook must be considered .

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It is very important that the contents of the posts are focused on our readers' interests or needs. Also, as a trait of Facebook, it's also an important point that the picture quality will influence the responses to the articles.

元の翻訳
Therefor,as a starter how about the concept of introduction of Japanese culture using the images of your products .

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Therefor, as a starter, how about the concept of introduction of Japanese culture using the images of your products?

元の翻訳
I think we should not restrict our target to the existing customers but also include the potential customers who are not familiar to [A] but have interest in Japanese culture and hence making the target zone larger.

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I think we should make the target zone larger and not restrict our target to existing customers but also include potential customers who are not familiar with [A] but have an interest in Japanese culture.

元の翻訳
However ,the number of articles published in one day will vary depending on the number of contents provided.

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However, the number of articles published in one day will vary depending on the number of contents provided.

元の翻訳
As I was not able to find some details in the pictures, can you
answer me about the following questions?

Is the product new and never opened and without any scratch?
Can you pack the items very carefully and firmly when shipping?

We are thinking about buying six pieces depending on your answer.
Best Regards.

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As I was not able to find some details in the pictures, can you
answer the following questions?

Is the product new, never opened and without any scratch?
Can you pack the items very carefully and firmly when shipping?

We are thinking about buying six pieces depending on your answer.
Best Regards.

元の翻訳
This mail is to inform you that we have stock for the requested product.
But there is one problem .The two products has to be shipped separately↵
as it is not possible to ship them in one box.
It is possible to ship them immediately and you can track them from the ↵
tracking number.
Please let me know the name of your country because shipment is not↵
possible to some countries in the region of Africa.
Best Regards.

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This mail is to inform you that we have stock for the requested product.
But there is one problem. The two products have to be shipped separately as it is not possible to ship them in one box.
It is possible to ship them immediately and you can track them with a tracking number.
Please let me know the name of your country because shipment is not possible to some countries in the region of Africa.
Best Regards.

元の翻訳
That is of big help .
The buyer will answer us about the confirmation of the order before this Friday.
We will send you order request on Friday if the buyer confirms it.
Please do full inspection for the remaining goods as there is less rush for the delivery date.
Thank you for examining.

Sorry for replying late.
This is about the matter of translating the video to Japanese.
The dubbing will take some time and can be completed around December.
I will inform you when it is completed.

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That is a big help.
The buyer will answer us about the confirmation of the order before this Friday.
We will send you an order request on Friday if the buyer confirms it.
Please do a full inspection of the remaining goods as there is less rush for the delivery date.
Thank you for examining them for us.

Sorry for replying late.
This is about the matter of translating the video to Japanese.
The dubbing will take some time and can be completed around December.
I will inform you when it is completed.