Maj (maj_osaka) — 付けたレビュー

元の翻訳
When I sent your item by EMS, I accidentally wrote your old address on the slip.
I realized soon after and went through the procedure to get the address changed to your new address, and I relieved when I was told by the manager at the post office that it would be fine to change it. However, today I had a phone call from the manager saying that the change of address might not have been done on time. When I looked up the tracking number, I saw that it had been delivered yesterday, so if you have not received it there is a high chance it may have gone to your old address. Is there any chance you would be able to get it from your old address?

修正後
When I sent your item by EMS, I accidentally wrote your old address on the slip.
I realized soon after and went through the procedure to get the address changed to your new address, and I was relieved when the manager at the post office told me that it would be fine to change it. However, today I had a phone call from the manager saying that the change of address might not have been done on time. When I looked up the tracking number, I saw that it had been delivered yesterday, so if you have not received it there is a high chance it may have gone to your old address. Is there any chance you would be able to get it from your old address?

元の翻訳
I'm sorry for inconveniencing for you.

If possible, could you return the item to me?

As I have done it for this time, I'd like to help you out for another time.

I have substitute items.

I have already refunded to you.

I don't mind if you order unrelated items.

I'd prepare any Japanese items for you.

I hope that we'll have a further connecting.

And again, I'm terribly sorry for you causing a trouble for this time.

修正後
I'm sorry for your inconvenience.

If possible, can you return the item to me?

As I have troubled you this time, I'd like to assist you next time.

I have substitute items also.

I have already refunded to you.

I don't mind if you order other item.

I'd arrange any items from Japan.

I am looking forward to work with you.

And again, I'm terribly sorry for causing you trouble this time.

元の翻訳
The quantity isn't fixed, but fluctuates with price.
Like before, please inform me if it's cheaper to buy 5 or 10 units, etc.

Furthermore, aside from the included free products, how much would up to around 30 6ft HDMI cables cost?

修正後
The quantity isn't fixed, but will vary according to the price.
Like before, please inform me if it's cheaper to buy 5 or 10 units, etc.

Furthermore, aside from the included free products, how much it will cost for 30 pieces of 6ft HDMI cables ?