Wena Yu (lebron_2014) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
I am relieved as there seems to be no particular problems.
I will look forward to the arrival of the product.

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I am relieved as there seems to be no particular problem.
I look forward to the arrival of the product.

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for trying to change the feedback for me. I am very grateful.
I also don't know what to do to change it so I will try to inquire with the customer service center tomorrow. It's currently midnight of Sunday in Japan.
I also confirmed that the string height of the bass is high and that which strings of the 12 fret have noise. I immediately requested for the adjustment of the fender. It might take a little more time, but I will contact you if there are any progress. Despite that, I have never seen such as beautiful jazz bass.

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Thank you very much for trying to change the feedback for me. I am very grateful.
I also don't know what to do to change it so I will try to inquire with the customer service center tomorrow. It is now midnight on Sunday in Japan.
I have also confirmed that the action of the bass is high and each string has had a noise at each of 12 frets. I have immediately requested for the adjustment to the fender. It might take a little more time, but I will keep you posted if there is any update. Despite that, I have never seen such a beautiful jazz bass so far.↵

元の翻訳
I have a question regarding the "RBZ "TOUR ISSUE" FAIRWAY 3-14.5 HEAD RARE TOUR STAMP ON SOLE" that I have purchased the other day.
I confirmed the serial number after it was delivered and it was not in the TXXXXX-XXX format as specified in the product description, but was in "TFXXXXX" format. In addition, there was a "7" that's engrave slightly away from the end of the serial number. Please let me know what this means such as a difference in version. This explanation is required for it to be sold in Japan.
I am attaching a photograph so please kindly confirm.

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I have a question regarding the "RBZ "TOUR ISSUE" FAIRWAY 3-14.5 HEAD RARE TOUR STAMP ON SOLE" that I have purchased the other day.
I confirmed the serial number after it was delivered and found that he serial number was not in TXXXXX-XXX format as specified in the product description, but "TFXXXXX" format. In addition, there was a "7" engraved slightly away from the end of the serial number. Please let me know what this means such as a different version. This explanation is required for me to sell it in Japan.
Please kindly confirm the attached photograph.

元の翻訳
This order is currently put on hold.
We will officially receive the order once the payment procedure has been completed in the system of Amazon.

In addition, when you place an order in Amazon, your information will become unknown in the shop before the completion of the payment procedure.
Sorry for the trouble, please kindly inquire with the Amazon customer service.

Please kindly confirm the payment method in the following URL.

In addition, please kindly inquire using the following phone number.

Thank you very much.

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This order is currently put on hold.
We will officially receive the order once the payment procedure has been completed in the system of Amazon.

In addition, when you place an order in Amazon, we do not have access to your information until the completion of the payment procedure.
Sorry for the trouble, but please kindly inquire with Amazon's Customer Service.

Please kindly confirm the payment method in the following URL:

Or please call the following phone number.

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Dear B,
CC A,

I was contacted by A that you introduced your company.
I am F from C company.
Sorry for suddenly contacting you.

Our company was launched by people who did research on *** and signal processing.
We are aiming to launch our own business related to manufacturing in Tokyo while also doing contract development.
We think that our technical areas are close to that of your company's.
We also have businesses with companies in Japan who is doing research on ***.

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Dear B,
CC A,

I was contacted by A, who told me about your company.
I am F from C company.
Sorry for suddenly contacting you.

Our company was launched by people who did research on *** and signal processing.
We are aiming to launch our own business related to manufacturing in Tokyo while also doing contract development.
We think that our technical areas are close to those of your company.
We also have businesses with companies in Japan who are doing research on ***.

元の翻訳
I was suppose to have mentioned something to you beforehand.

After the order was made this time, each of the products is being done by hand by the craftsman.

Because of that, you will need to wait for a little longer for the arrival of the products.

On the other hand, we will be sending you the highest quality product.

The scheduled shipping will be around May 18 - May 20.

We will notify you on the tracking number after shipping the product and we will guide you on how to confirm the status on the website.

It will be a long wait, but I am hoping for your kind understanding on this matter.

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I was suppose to have mentioned something to you beforehand.

After the order was made this time, each of the products is being done by hand by the craftsman.

Because of that, you will need to wait a little longer for the arrival of the products.

On the other hand, we will be sending you the highest quality product.

The scheduled shipping will be around May 18 - May 20.

We will notify you of the tracking number after shipping the product and we will guide you on how to confirm the status on the website.

It will be a long wait, but I am hoping for your kind understanding on this matter.

元の翻訳
1. Thank you for contacting us.
There seems to be some sort of mistake and the product was return upon confirming the product's tracking information. I am very sorry for the trouble. We will either re-ship the product ot issue a full refund once it has arrived here so would this be alright with you? We will shoulder the shipping charges if you wished for the product to be reshipped.
We will wait for your response.

2.We are very sorry to have caused you any inconvenience this time. We request for your support once the opportunity arises.

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1. Thank you for contacting us.
Our verification of tracking information for the item revealed the possibility of some sort of mistake, and the product was returned. I am very sorry for the inconvenience this may have caused you. We will either re-ship the product or issue a full refund once it has arrived here, so please let us know how you would like us to handle it. We will shoulder the shipping charges if you choose the product to be re-shipped.
We will wait for your response.

2.We are very sorry to have caused you any inconvenience this time. We request for your support once the opportunity arises.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your usual support. This is OO from Japan.
The product I have ordered the other day has arrived.
I am grateful for your prompt action as always.
There is one item that does not operate for item number 00 of M company that was purchased this time.
And by testing it carefully and thoroughly, there was 1 out of 6 that does not operate at all.
I will ask you to confirm the status and hope for either a repair or an exchange.
The return can be packaged together when ordering next time.
But first, I will be looking forward to your response.

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Thank you for your continued support. This is OO from Japan.
The product I have ordered the other day has arrived.
I am grateful for your prompt action as always.
There is one item that does not operate for item number 00 of M company that was purchased this time.
And by testing it carefully and thoroughly, there was 1 out of 6 that does not operate at all.
I will ask you to confirm the status and hope for either a repair or an exchange.
The return can be packaged together when I order next time.
But first, I will be looking forward to your response.

元の翻訳
Request for reinstatement of selling rights

I have confirmed some problem points.
I will submit a sales improvement plan to eliminate negative feedback and A-to-Z claims. I will aim and do my best to keep the Order Defect Rate below 1%.
I will be doing my best in raising the customer's satisfaction level more than ever.
So can I ask for your confirmation?
Thank you very much.

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Request for recovering of selling rights

I have confirmed some problem points.
I will submit a sales improvement plan to eliminate negative feedback and A-to-Z claims. I will try my best to keep the Order Defect Rate below 1%.
I will do my best to raise the customer satisfaction more than ever.
So can I ask for your confirmation?
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Dear Ron,

Good day.

So is it definitely not possible to use PayPal for the remaining payment?
My US account cannot be used due to some circumstances.

I can immediately make the payment if its PayPal.

If not, then I would try to think of a way to remit the money from Japan.

Thank you and regards.


Good day.

The package of tracking number oo has not arrive, but what is the status for this?

Thank you and regards.

Good day.

I want to return the product with tracking number oo to Amazon.
I am attaching the data.

Thank you and regards.

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Dear Ron,

Good day.

So is it definitely not possible to use PayPal for the remaining payment?
My US account cannot be used due to some circumstances.

I can immediately make the payment if I may use PayPal.

If not, then I would try to think of a way to remit the money from Japan.

Thank you and regards.


Good day.

Could you update me on the delivery status of the package with tracking number oo, as it has not arrived for quite some time?

Thank you and regards.

Good day.

I want to return the product with number oo to Amazon.
I am attaching the data.

Thank you and regards.

元の翻訳
About 80% of the package are leaking in the package.

The paper and package inside are also soaked and are soggy.

Please kindly confirm the package status in the attached photo.

The contents are not lined up properly and are placed disorderly.

However, all the lids are loose upon confirming the 24 products that are leaking,↵
but there are a lot of loose lids even for the products that are not leaking.

There are no damages on the package.

So I think it probably leaked during the transport,
but we are certain that the caps are loose prior to the shipping stage.

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About 80% is leaking inside the package.

The paper and packages inside are also soaked and soggy.

Please confirm the package's condition in the attached photo.

The contents are not lined up properly and are placed disorderly.

However, upon reviewing the 24 leaking items, all of the lids came loose, and even among the items that weren't leaking, there were a lot of loose lids.

There is no damage to the package.

So I think it probably leaked during the transport,
but it is certain that the caps were loose prior to shipping.

元の翻訳
We are very sorry for the misunderstanding. We are only selling one bottle.
Please try searching for "Shiseido Pure White W For Shiny Skin 270 Tablets 3 Set" in Amazon.
This is the page that sells the 3 bottle set. The cheapest price is $134.

And although it was written in the email that you were told a "YES" when I was asked if this product is a 3 bottle set, this is the first time I am receiving an email from you so I did not provide such an answer.

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We are very sorry for the misunderstanding. We are only selling one bottle.
Please try searching for "Shiseido Pure White W For Shiny Skin 270 Tablets 3 Set" on Amazon.
This is the page where a set of 3 bottles is sold. The lowest price is $134.

And although you wrote in your email that you got "YES" when I was asked if this product is a set of 3 bottles, this is the first time I received email from you, so I did not give such an answer.

元の翻訳
The Fireglo of the photographs have been sold out during yesterday's afternoon.

It is possible to sell this guitar that is in stock right now at the same price.

1. This guitar is also a new product, but it is a display item in the main store. There are a few small scratches on it.
I am attaching the photo, but the scratches are so small that they cannot be captured in the photo.

2. Please kindly confirm the photo.

3. There are no problems with the electrical system, the hardware, the knobs and other parts.
It is an excellent quality guitar.

4. This guitar is a 2013 model with serial number **.
And it comes with it's own hard case.

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The Fireglo in the photograph was sold out yesterday afternoon.

It is possible to sell this guitar in stock right now at the same price.

1. This guitar is also new, but it is a display item in the main store. It has a few small scratches on it.
I am attaching a photo, but the scratches are so small that they cannot be captured in the photo.

2. Please kindly confirm the photo.

3. There are no problems with the electrical system, the hardware, the knobs and other parts.
It is an excellent quality guitar.

4. This guitar is a 2013 model with serial number **.
And it comes with its own hard case.

元の翻訳
We have send out guide letters to all the customers indicating that "Our store has already performed the user registration of the serial number of the guitar. Please ensure that you do not perform a duplicate registration." and reminded them directly by calling them through phone. We ensure that 100% of the serial numbers cannot be registered in Taylor so can you kindly ship the remaining guitars? If we cannot ship the guitars and immediately issue us a refund, then we will lack the funds and won't be able to do business. If we can secure the funds, then we can purchase the other guitars from you.

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We sent out guidance letters to all customers indicating: "Our store has already performed user registration of the guitar's serial number. Please ensure that you do not perform duplicate registration." We also reminded them directly by telephone call. We ensure that 100% of the serial numbers cannot be registered with Taylor so could you kindly ship the remaining guitars? If you cannot ship the guitars, and cannot immediately issue us a refund, then we will be lacking in funds and won't be able to do business. If we can secure the funds, then we can purchase other guitars from you.

元の翻訳
It is said that the WWDC held in 2013 is the first one as published by Apple.

After that, the start-up company, Estimote, published a case of a similar company utilizing iBeacon in YouTube. O2O was favorably popular and iBeacon has also gotten attention as well.
It was listed with the name "iBeacons" in the presentation slides during that time, but it was not talked about more in detail.

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It is said that the WWDC held in 2013 is the first one as published by Apple.

After that, the start-up company, Estimote, published a case of a similar company utilizing iBeacon in YouTube. O2O was favorably popular and iBeacon has also gotten attention.
It was listed with the name "iBeacons" in the presentation slides during that time, but it was not talked about more in detail.