翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → ネイティブ 英語 )

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日本語

いつもお世話になっております、日本の〇〇です。
先日注文した商品が届きました。
いつも迅速に対応していただき感謝しております。
今回購入したＭ社の品番00ですが、１点動作しないものがあります。
扱いには十分に注意し、入念にテストを行いましたが６点のうち１点がまったく動作しません。
当方は貴店に状態を確認していただき、修理か交換を希望しております。
返送は次回注文時に同梱ということでも構いません。
まずはお返事をお待ちしております。

英語

Thank you for your usual support. This is OO from Japan.
The product I have ordered the other day has arrived.
I am grateful for your prompt action as always.
There is one item that does not operate for item number 00 of M company that was purchased this time.
And by testing it carefully and thoroughly, there was 1 out of 6 that does not operate at all.
I will ask you to confirm the status and hope for either a repair or an exchange.
The return can be packaged together when ordering next time.
But first, I will be looking forward to your response.

レビュー ( 1 )

katrina_zはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/05/13 04:11:33

元の翻訳
Thank you for your usual support. This is OO from Japan.
The product I have ordered the other day has arrived.
I am grateful for your prompt action as always.
There is one item that does not operate for item number 00 of M company that was purchased this time.
And by testing it carefully and thoroughly, there was 1 out of 6 that does not operate at all.
I will ask you to confirm the status and hope for either a repair or an exchange.
The return can be packaged together when ordering next time.
But first, I will be looking forward to your response.

修正後
Thank you for your continued support. This is OO from Japan.
The product I have ordered the other day has arrived.
I am grateful for your prompt action as always.
There is one item that does not operate for item number 00 of M company that was purchased this time.
And by testing it carefully and thoroughly, there was 1 out of 6 that does not operate at all.
I will ask you to confirm the status and hope for either a repair or an exchange.
The return can be packaged together when I order next time.
But first, I will be looking forward to your response.