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The tracking number of UPS will not be issued.
The guide in amazon only states that UPS will pick up the goods.
That is the only information about goods returning.

I have sent you the label for returning the product again, please check it.
There is no problem regarding the processing fee.
Please proceed with returning the item.

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The tracking number of UPS has not been issued.
The guide on Amazon website states that UPS will simply pick up the goods.
That is the only information about returning the goods.

I will send you the label for returning the product, please check it.
There is no problem regarding the processing fee.
Please proceed with the returning procedure.

元の翻訳
Since the material is TPU (Thermoplastic Polyurethane), it is clear from the product name that it is made of soft plastic. Also, the word "Yawa" in the product name means "soft" in Japanese. I have no right to change the product name.

Although there is no problem with the product, you are giving a negative review.
In the review system, a rating of 3 is a negative review, so the "98%" in "Feedback Rating 98% Positive" will become lower.

Because of the above reason, could you remove the negative review?

Thanks in advance.

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Since the material is TPU (Thermoplastic Polyurethane), it is clear from the product name that it is made of soft plastic. Also, the word "Yawa" in the product name means "soft" in Japanese. I have no right to change the product name.

Although there is no problem with the product, you are giving a negative review.
In the review system, a rating of 3 is a negative review, so the "98%" in my "Feedback Rating 98% Positive" will go down.

Because of the above reasons, could you remove your negative review?

Thanks in advance.

元の翻訳
Hello.
I have purchased the following PHP script.

As stated below, I am thinking of only searching for recruitment in Japan.

Also, I am thinking of removing the "SelectCountry" section in the front page.
* because Japan is the only country

Could I seek your advice?
It will be a great help if you could send me a replacement file.

Also, there are some mistakes in the manual as follows.

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I am giving a rating of 1 because there is no update for a long time.
I will rate it again when there is an update.

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Hello.
I have purchased the following PHP script.

As stated below, I am thinking of only searching for recruitment in Japan.

Also, I am thinking of removing the "SelectCountry" section in the front page.
* because I don't need other countries than Japan.

Can I seek your advice?
It will be a great help if you could send me a replacement file.

Also, there are some mistakes in the manual as follows.

----

I am giving a rating of 1 because there is no update for a long time.
I will rate it again when there is an update.

元の翻訳
I have understood about the processing fee.
Please split the package.
I have attached the return label and the screenshot of checkout screen.
Please have a look.

Also, please only return the game console.
Although the quantity you have purchased is 3, it is okay if you only return 2 of them.
Please contact me again if you have any question.

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I have understood about the processing fee.
Please split the package.
I have attached the return label and the purchase screenshot.
Please have a look.

Also, please only return the game consoles.
Although the quantity of the consoles you have purchased is 3, it is okay if you only return 2 of them.
Please contact me again if you have any question.

元の翻訳
Home | About book condition
[Representation of book condition] Conditions are rated from A-D
A (Good) -> D (Bad)

A: In very good condition. Almost like new with no taints.
B: Good condition. Taints from aging are present but there is no distinctive defects.
C: Average condition. There are some noticeable taints or writing, but no missing pages.
D: Bad condition. Missing or torn pages are present.

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Home | About book condition
[Representation of book condition] Conditions are rated from A-D
A (Good) -> D (Bad)

A: In very good condition. Almost like new with no taints.
B: Good condition. Taints from aging are present but there is no distinctive defects.
C: Average condition. There are some noticeable taints or writings, but no missing pages.
D: Bad condition. Missing or torn pages are present.

元の翻訳
By using the top left button, you can set the tempo of the metronome when recording.
By using the bottom left button, you can switch on/off the sound of the metronome.

By using the top right button, you can select the guide of the song you want to record.
By using the bottom right button, you can switch on/off the guide.
If you switch it on, you will be able to record while listening to the guide.

The bar at the bottom indicates the volume of the recording.
Please adjust the color of the lamp as you like.

It is recommended to put on earphones when recording.
With earphones, you will be able to hear the guide clearly, and it will not interfere with your recording.
You will also be able to hear the effect of echo.

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By using the top left button, you can set the tempo of the metronome when recording.
By using the bottom left button, you can switch on/off the sound of the metronome.

By using the top right button, you can select a guide for the song you want to record.
By using the bottom right button, you can switch on/off the guide.
If you switch it on, you will be able to record while listening to the guide.

The bar at the bottom indicates the volume of the recording.
Please adjust it according to the color of the lamp.

It is recommended to use headphones when recording.
With headphones, you will be able to hear the guide clearly, and it will not interfere with your recording.
You will also be able to check the effect of echo.

元の翻訳
Sorry to inform you that I am unable to continue with the trading of the product.
The reason is that I have discovered a potential problem in customs clearance at the time of import to Japan.
I am very sorry that it has come to this despite the long awaited product has finally become available.

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I am really sorry to inform you that I am unable to continue with the transaction.
The reason is because I have discovered that a possible problem might occur during customs clearance at the time of import into Japan.
Once again, I am truly very sorry that despite your help to secure the stock, it had to turn out this way.

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I have seen your work. I have finally found the person I have been looking for after recruiting for more than 1 year on oDesk.
I will need you to make some simple modification and it will be the exhibition page I am looking for.
The shipping fee for Economy is the same for the US and Europe. Please have a look at the file I have attached with the parcel.
Please replace the "タイトル(title)" in the title section with the item title.
I do not understand the meaning of "price bar". Could you explain?
Please search for the meaning using Google or eBay search.

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I have seen your work. I have finally found the person I have been looking for after recruiting for more than 1 year on oDesk.
Afterwards, I will need you to make some simple modification and it will be the exhibition page that I am looking for.
The shipping fee for Economy is the same for the US and Europe. Please have a look at the file I have placed in the box.
Please replace the "タイトル(title)" in the title section with the item title.
I do not understand the meaning of "price bar." Could you explain?
Please first search for the meaning using Google or eBay search.

元の翻訳
Auction will end after your bid. There will be no problem if payment is made within 5 days.
After receiving the payment, we will refund you $44 and ship the product.

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I can end my listing early after you bid. There will be no problem if the payment is made within 5 days.
After receiving the payment, we will refund $44 to you and ship the product.

元の翻訳
Thanks for the reply.
In current situation, it seems that we are unable to send you the invoice.
Although it is inconvenient, is it possible for you to bid and pay with $120?
The auction will end immediately after your bid and $44 + extra shipping charges will be refunded after payment.
Please consider it. Thanks.

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Thank you for the reply.
In the current situation, it seems that we are unable to send you the invoice.
Although it is inconvenient, is it possible for you to bid and pay $120 first?
The auction will end immediately after your bid and $44 as well as the extra shipping charges will be refunded after your payment.
Please consider it. Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thanks for the reply.
In current situation, it seems that we are unable to send you the invoice.
Although it is inconvenient, is it possible for you to bid and pay with $120?
The auction will end immediately after your bid and $44 + extra shipping charges will be refunded after payment.
Please consider it. Thanks.

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Thank you for your reply.
Under the current situation, I can't send you the invoice.
Although it is inconvenient, could you bid and pay $120?
The auction will end immediately after your bid and I will refund $44 + shipping charges after payment.
Please consider it. Thank you in advance.