Kellie CHEUNG (kellie619) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Did the returned product arrive safely?

Kindly refund once you confirmed the product is arrived.
After refund is completed, we would appreciate hearing from you.

修正後
Have you received the product I returned on November 13?

Please refund me when you confirm the product has arrived.
After the refund is completed, please inform us.↵

元の翻訳
It is not necessary to return the camera. As inconvenience may have been caused due to here's mistake on checking, USD300 will be refunded to you. The refund is our apology on the broken camera.

Once you confirmed the refund, I'm sorry to trouble you, but would you please help to revise the rating to positive? I look forward to receiving your reply.

修正後
You do not have to return the camera. As we have caused you an inconvenience due to the verification error on our side, we will give you the refund of USD300 as a token of our apology for the broken camera.

Would you kindly revise your rating on us to positive once you have confirmed the refund? We look forward to receiving your reply.

元の翻訳
It is not necessary to return the camera. As inconvenience may have been caused due to here's mistake on checking, USD300 will be refunded to you. The refund is our apology on the broken camera.

Once you confirmed the refund, I'm sorry to trouble you, but would you please help to revise the rating to positive? I look forward to receiving your reply.

修正後
It is not necessary to return the camera. As inconvenience has been caused due to here's mistake on checking, USD300 will be refunded to you. The refund is a sign of our apology on the broken camera.

Once you confirmed the refund, I'm sorry to trouble you, but would you please help to revise the rating to positive? I look forward to receiving your reply.

元の翻訳
Good morning./Good afternoon.

How to make shipping possible for those four products which unable to ship?
Kindly advise.


Mr. / Miss / Ms. ○○

Good morning./Good afternoon.

What is the status of Product 1 and Product 2 thereafter?

Purchase 36 pieces for Product 1, would you please advise the details of Product 2?

Thank you very much.

修正後
Hello,

How to make shipping possible for those four products which unable to ship [unclear, ungrammatical]?
Kindly advise.


Dear ○○:

Hello.

What is the status of Product 1 and Product 2 thereafter?

[subject missing] Purchase 36 pieces of Product 1, [comma splice] would you please advise the details of Product 2?

Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I deeply apologize that only 60 pieces of your requested product have been sent out.
Normally 120 pieces will be sent out by today.
Due to mistake here, only 60 pieces are packed and it would be great if you keep using those.
Very sorry for sending product incorrectly.

The product have been shipped on 27th October.
I guess you will be receiving it soon, so please feel at ease.
As now is holiday season, the delivery seems quite busy which arrival date may not be exactly as being told even the send out date is same.
Anyway, I will try my best to keep up the status until the end.
Please feel free to contact anytime in case you have any concerns or questions.

修正後
I deeply apologize that only 60 pieces of your requested product have been sent out.
Normally [unclear] 120 pieces will [tense confusion] be sent out by today.
Due to [word missing] mistake here, only 60 pieces are packed and it would be great if you could keep using those.
Very sorry for sending product incorrectly.

The product have [s-v agreement] been shipped on 27th October.
I guess you will be receiving it [unclear antecedent] soon, so please feel at ease.
As now is holiday season [unnatural], the delivery [strange choice of subject] seems quite busy which [grammar] arrival date may not be exactly as being told [unclear agent] even the send out date is same.
Anyway, I will try my best to keep up the status [usage] until the end.
Please feel free to contact anytime in case you have any concerns or questions.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。
お客様の質問について、当方のミスでグッズを間違って、配送してしまった。
このたびは大変なご迷惑をおかけし、誠に申し訳ございませんでした。
その“20*40MIL chip of 100W white”も使えます。もしお客様に＄１００を返していただいて、いかがでしょうか？お客様と長期的な業務提携を望みますので、反省して今後は二度とミスをしないように銘記して、次回の注文に特別割引値段も提供いたします。
ありがとうございます、ご連絡を待っておきます。

修正後
こんにちは。
お客様の質問について、当方のミスで間違った商品を配送してしまいました。
このたびは大変なご迷惑をおかけし、誠に申し訳ございませんでした。
その“20*40MIL chip of 100W white”も使えます。全額返金だと当方の負担が大きいため、＄１００だけを返金させていただけないでしょうか？お客様と長期的な業務提携を望みますので、反省して今後は二度とミスをしないように銘記して、次回の注文に特別割引値段も提供いたします。
ありがとうございます、ご連絡を待っております。