翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 40 / 3 Reviews / 2013/11/18 13:28:48
こんにちは
この商品をとても気に入っているのですが、もう少し安くして頂けないでしょうか?
宜しくお願いします。
Hello,
I am very interested in this product but could you sell me at lower price
Thank you and best regards
レビュー ( 3 )
元の翻訳
Hello,
I am very interested in this product but could you sell me at lower price
Thank you and best regards
修正後
Hello,
I am very interested in this product but could you sell it to me at a lower price?
Thank you and best regards
Be careful of the target of 'sell'
このレビューを50%の人が「適切であった」と回答しています。
元の翻訳
Hello,
I am very interested in this product but could you sell me at lower price
Thank you and best regards
修正後
Hello,
I am very interested in this product, but could you please consider selling it to me at a lower price?
Thank you.