翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

日本語

ご連絡遅くなり申し訳ありません。
現在、会社の上司と購入を検討中です。
失礼ですが、多少お値引きしていただけませんか？
多少の値引きが上司を説得する上で役に立つと思うのです。
ご検討してください。

検討した結果、購入させていただく意思決定をしました。
現在、支払い手続きの準備中です。
2～５日の間までには入札させていただきます。
差し出がましいようですが発送の際は対衝撃材に厳重に包んで発送してください。
お世話になると思いますのでどうぞ宜しくお願いいたします。

英語

Sorry for the late reply.
At present, We are considering purchasing with company's boss.
Sorry for this impolite but could you offer us some discount?
I think that If you offer us some discount it is useful for persuading my boss.
Please think about it.
We will decide purchasing after receiving your offering.We are making payment documents now.
We will take part in the auction within 2-5 days.
At the risk of sounding too forward, please wrap tightly to Impact-resistant material and ship it.
Please support for us.Thank you and best regards.

レビュー ( 1 )

huuhungはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2013/12/03 13:05:27

元の翻訳
Sorry for the late reply.
At present, We are considering purchasing with company's boss.
Sorry for this impolite but could you offer us some discount?
I think that If you offer us some discount it is useful for persuading my boss.
Please think about it.
We will decide purchasing after receiving your offering.We are making payment documents now.
We will take part in the auction within 2-5 days.
At the risk of sounding too forward, please wrap tightly to Impact-resistant material and ship it.
Please support for us.Thank you and best regards.

修正後
Sorry for the late reply.
At present, We are considering purchasing with company's boss.
Sorry for this impolite but could you offer us some discount?
I think that If you offer us some discount it is useful for persuading my boss.
Please think about it.
We will decide purchasing after receiving your offer.We are making payment documents now.
We will take part in the auction within 2-5 days.
At the risk of sounding too forward, please wrap tightly to Impact-resistant material and ship it.
Please support us.Thank you and best regards.