ひろみ (hiromic) — もらったレビュー

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ph37002

▼What is THE IDOLM@STER?
『THE IDOLM@STER』 is an Japanese Anime created by A-1 Pictures. This is an animated version of a computer game 『THE IDOLM@STER』 series which has the same title sold by Namco Bandai Games.

▼More grouping
Most of the Japanese idol groups that have large number of staff almost always tend to be grouped up as several new groups. Anime idol groups are also show themselves individuality by grouping.

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ph37002

▼What is THE IDOLM@STER?
『THE IDOLM@STER』 is an Japanese Anime created by A-1 Pictures. This is an animated version of a computer game 『THE IDOLM@STER』 series which has the same title sold by Namco Bandai Games.

▼More grouping
Most of the Japanese idol groups that have large number of members almost always tend to be grouped up as several new groups. Anime idol groups are also showing themselves individuality by grouping.

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まず第一に、希望していた車輪の在庫があるショップがありませんでした。
ご注文される際はメーカーへ発注する形となり、お客様のお手元に届くまで1ヶ月はかかると思われます。
値段はオーストラリアドル、商品のみのものです。
また、FedExdexでの配送料金とオーストラリアでの関税が必要となります。
現在取引先のフォワーダーに料金確認をしているところですが、荷物のサイズと重さの予測が難しいため、見積もりがとれない状況です。
お考えをお聞かせください。

こんにちは。
お調べいただきありがとうございます。オーストラリアで同様の価格で手に入れることができます。
とりあえず、今はそのままで結構です。いろいろとありがとうございました。

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まず第一に、希望していたタイヤの在庫があるショップがありませんでした。
ご注文される際はメーカーへ発注する形となり、お客様のお手元に届くまで1ヶ月はかかると思われます。
価格は商品代のみでオーストラリアドル価格になります。
上記に加えまして、FedExdexでの配送料金とオーストラリアでの関税が必要となります。
現在取引先のフォワーダーに料金確認をしているところですが、荷物のサイズと重さの予測が難しいため、見積もりがとれない状況です。
お考えをお聞かせください。

こんにちは。
お調べいただきありがとうございます。オーストラリアで同様の価格で手に入れることができます。
とりあえず、今はそのままで結構です。いろいろとありがとうございました。

元の翻訳
ly79503

This is how it looks when you cut them. (Everybody just dig into it without cutting...)

▼Egg Salad
"Egg Salad" is the most popular kind of sandwich in Japan, you will always find this kind of sandwiches at stores. Without a doubt, it's the best. But there are some unique ones, too.

▼Green tea milk & brown sugar syrup (?!!)
?? Sounds like there is a lot of ingredients in this. Let's clear our minds.
Green tea and ...

milk...

brown sugar syrup!

Brown sugar syrup??

It is what you stir brown sugar in water and heat it till thicken.

Brown sugar

is produced from sugarcane, commonly used in Okinawa and Kyushu area.

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ly79503

This is how it looks when you cut them. (Everybody just dig into it without cutting...)

▼Egg Salad
"Egg Salad" is the most popular kind of sandwich in Japan, you will always find this kind of sandwiches at stores. Without a doubt, it's the best. But there are some unique ones, too.

▼Green tea milk & brown sugar syrup Jello(?!!)
?? Sounds like there is a lot of ingredients in this. Let's clear our minds.
Green tea and ...

milk...

brown sugar syrup!

Brown sugar syrup??

It is what you stir brown sugar in water and heat it till thicken.

Brown sugar

is produced from sugarcane, commonly used in Okinawa and Kyushu area.

元の翻訳
Halloween

For Disneyland outing!
Your nails are totally ready for World of Disney.

For Disneyland on Halloween Season!
Matching with the Halloween decorations at Disneyland.

For Paris trip

For UK trip
Little details but big impression to show that we are from Japan.

Fictional Characters
Japanese people love fictional characters. And Japanese people are good at detailed task and great at their hands.
These character nails are easily made.

Pocket Monsters

So Adorable!

M&M'S®
Love to grab some real M&M'S with this!

Hello Kitty and My Melody

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Halloween

For Disneyland outing!
Your nails are totally ready for World of Disney.

For Disneyland on Halloween Season!
Matching with the Halloween decorations at Disneyland.

For Paris trip

For UK trip
Give impressions in a casual way as Japanese tourists.

Fictional Characters
Japanese people love fictional characters. Furthermore, Japanese people are good at detailed works and are clever at their hands.
These character nails are easily made.

Pocket Monsters

So Adorable!

M&M'S®
Love to grab some real M&M'S with this!

Hello Kitty and My Melody