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「Cyoryuha」

9/26 (Fri.)　26:30～
TV Tokyo series「Cyoryuha」

http://www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/choryuha/

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「Choryuha」

9/26 (Fri.)　26:30～
TV Tokyo series「Choryuha」

http://www.tv-tokyo.co.jp/choryuha/

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Miura Daichi "I'm On Fire" ("2014 DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR - THE ENTERTAINER" from) Published!

At GyaO, Miura Daichi "I'm On Fire" ("2014 DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR - THE ENTERTAINER" from)! Published!

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Miura Daichi "I'm On Fire" from the "2014 DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR - THE ENTERTAINER" has been released!

Miura Daichi "I'm On Fire" from the "2014 DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR - THE ENTERTAINER" has been released on GyaO!

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Could you extend the deadline of Translation job ( Job 1549202: Maschine FAQ)??
If you could allow to extend the deadline before 2nd October, I can finish that.
Please tell me one more, whether it is.↵
Thank you.

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Could you extend the deadline of Translation job ( Job 1549202: Maschine FAQ)??
If you could extend the deadline until October 2, I can finish it.
Please let me know what you have decided. Thank you.

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【Contact information】Kyoto Kacho University・Kyoto Kacho College・The comittee of executing Kacho festival
Tell 075-525-2339
☆We are sorry that we cannot always catch phones from students.
Kyoto Kacho Univesity web site http://www.kyotokacho-u.ac.jp/
Kyoto Kacho College web site http//www.kacho-college.ac.jp/

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【Contact information】Kyoto Kacho University・Kyoto Kacho College・The comittee of executing Kacho festival
Tell 075-525-2339
☆ For the students, we apologize that we are not always able to answer your phone calls.
Kyoto Kacho Univesity web site http://www.kyotokacho-u.ac.jp/
Kyoto Kacho College web site http//www.kacho-college.ac.jp/

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October 26th (Sun) AAA Shinjiro Atae will appear on "Kyoto Kacho University・Kacho College Kacho festival"

■AAA Shinjiro Atae talk show
Kyoto Kacho University・Kyoto college Kacho festival

【Date】October 26th (Sun)

【Place】Kyoto Kacho University・Kyoto College a Great Lecture hall on the campus (Kyotoshi Higashiyamaku Rinkacho 3-456)

【Open/Start】11:00/12:00

【Price】General￥1000( tax is included/ all seats are reserved)

【General release】October 5th (Sun) 10:00～
e+(e-plus)http://eplus.jp

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October 26th (Sun) AAA Shinjiro Atae will make an appearance in "Kyoto Kacho University・Kacho College Kacho festival"

■AAA Shinjiro Atae talk show
Kyoto Kacho University・Kyoto college Kacho festival

【Date】October 26th (Sun)

【Place】Kyoto Kacho University・Kyoto College a Great Lecture hall on the campus (Kyotoshi Higashiyamaku Rinkacho 3-456)

【Open/Start】11:00/12:00

【Price】General￥1000( tax is included/ all seats are reserved)

【General release】October 5th (Sun) 10:00～
e+(e-plus)http://eplus.jp

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Sorry Lisa.
I thought you received my package, so I wrote you back.
I was afraid,that I missed a figure of custom duty and my shipment has been shut down.
Now I see! Your article on Facebook was written while you were on the beach(#^.^#). Sorry that I couldn't notice that.
So, my secret be out of the closet. As you said,I left here on 16th and we passed each other.
I'm looking forward, that you receive my package,after you go back home.
Enjoy your vacation!
Love you, Lisa

Yuka

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Sorry Lisa.
I thought you received my package, so I wrote you back.
I was afraid that the shipment has been put on hold because I made a mistake with the custom duties.
Now I see! Your article on Facebook was written while you were at the beach(#^.^#). I'm sorry that I misunderstood.
So, my secret is out of the closet. As you said, I left here on 16th and we passed each other.
I'm looking forward to you receiving my package when you get back home.
Enjoy your vacation!
Love you, Lisa

Yuka

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I am sorry, Lisa. I was convinced that you had received it when I replied.
I was worried because I thought that they had stopped because the total amount of the custom duties was wrong.
I see! Your Facebook update was done from the beach(#^.^#) I am sorry I didn't get it at first.
You got me LOL. That's right, it left here on the 16th so it's likely that you passed each other.
I am looking forward to you getting it when you come back from your vacation.
Enjoy ♪
I love you, Lisa. From Yuka.

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I am sorry, Lisa. I was convinced that you already received it when I replied.
I was worried because I thought that they had stopped because the total amount of the custom duties was wrong.
I see! Your Facebook update was done from the beach(#^.^#) I am sorry I didn't get it at first.
You got me LOL. That's right, it left here on the 16th so it's likely that you passed each other.
I am looking forward to you getting it when you come back from your vacation.
Enjoy ♪
I love you, Lisa. From Yuka.

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She is conducting a tour called "Koda Kumi Live Tour 2014～Bon Voyage～" where 51 concerts are held in 2 countries with the album. The last one is held in Taiwan on August 16th.

On August 6th 2014, the newest summer single album "Hotel" will be released.

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She is currently having a tour called "Koda Kumi Live Tour 2014～Bon Voyage～" for the said album, with 51 concerts held in two countries. The last one was held in Taiwan on August 16.

On August 6, 2014, the newest summer single album "Hotel" will be released.

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Newest version released for "hilarious caring game", played by 300,000 users!

The concept of the game is to transform a 27year old Idol-otaku to becoming a hot popular stud.

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Newest version released for "hilarious caring game", played by 300,000 users!

The concept of the game is to transform a 27-year-old Idol-otaku to becoming a hot popular stud.

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As I lived in Moscow, I know about the Russian postal services well.

I marked $10/Gift on the invoice. Usually, packages are delivered to Russia without problem, but your local customs office seems to be strict in particular.
(訳注： invoice はshipping statement かもしれません）↵

I can send you a merchant invoice or receipt by email.

What do you need to collect your package?

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I am selling products on behalf of a Japanese razor collector.

Last time I listed an item with a big discount.
(商品が複数なら listed items with big discounts）

This time, as requested by the razor collector, I have elevated the price and made the item "Buy It Now".
（商品が複数なら　I have elevated the prices and made the itmes

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I know about the Russian postal services well because I lived in Moscow for three years.

I marked $10/Gift on the invoice. Usually, packages are delivered to Russia without problems, but your local customs office seems to be strict in particular.

I can send you a merchant invoice or receipt by email.

What do you need to collect your package?

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I am selling products on behalf of a Japanese razor collector.

Last time, I listed an item with a big discount.
(商品が複数なら listed items with big discounts）

This time, as requested by the razor collector, I have increased the price and made the item "Buy It Now".
（商品が複数なら　I have elevated the prices and made the itmes

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How long does it takes to deliver this product to Japan?
I would like you to deliver within 1 week but is it possible?

Best Regards,↵
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How long will it take to deliver this product to Japan?
I would like to have this delivered within one week, and I am wondering if that's possible.

Best Regards.

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Heat Tester is the shape inspection apparatus equipped with a heating device.

It is possible to perform heating simulating the reflow temperature based on the glass surface without contact and measure in terms of variation of the work due to the temperature.

Since the measurement results can be saved in 3D image data judged by sensation and numeric data, it could be used in solder failure during reflow and shape change measurement of parts used in high temperature places.

"surface measurement”— High-speed shape measurement overturns the common sense of the point measurement.

Swell and warp of the resin can’t be observed until now which can be measured at the same time.

Quickly understand the glass ground point

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Heat Tester is the shape inspection apparatus equipped with heating device.

It is possible to perform heating simulating the re-flow temperature based on the glass surface without contact and measure in terms of variation of the work due to the temperature.

Since the measurement results can be saved in 3D image data judged by sensation and numeric data, it could be used in solder failure during re-flow and shape change measurement of parts used in high temperature places.

"surface measurement”— High-speed shape measurement overturns the common sense of the point measurement.

Swell and warp of the resin can’t be observed until now which can be measured at the same time.

Quickly understand the glass ground point

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Okinawa Prefecture and Okinawa Convention & Visitors Bureau held a "Okinawa MICE Contents Trade Show" at the Okinawa Convention Center on November 22.

The show is held every year in order to publicize the charm of Okinawa as a MICE venue within key persons abroad and outside Okinawa prefecture and to promote MICE, and it is held for the sixth time this year.

This year, in addition to 73 buyers were invited from 7 markets of Beijing, Shanghai, Taiwan, Korea, Hong Kong, Thailand, and Singapore, More than 130 people in a total, including 48 society stakeholders and buyers at travel companies invited from Japan participated the show.

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Okinawa Prefecture and Okinawa Convention & Visitors Bureau held the "Okinawa MICE Contents Trade Show" at the Okinawa Convention Center on November 22.

The show is held every year in order to publicize the charm of Okinawa as a MICE venue within key persons abroad and outside Okinawa prefecture, and to promote MICE. This is the 6th time this has been held.

This year, in addition to 73 buyers were invited from 7 markets of Beijing, Shanghai, Taiwan, Korea, Hong Kong, Thailand, and Singapore, More than 130 people in a total, including 48 society stakeholders and buyers at travel companies invited from Japan participated the show.

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Thank you for your email.
I am very sorry, but we have 3 possibilities for you.

1. We can refund an amount of money.
2. If we have any products you would like, we can send them
3. You can return the product and we can replace it.

We can offer these 3 possibilities.
If you have any other ideas then please tell us.

Thank you for your email

We are sorry that the product is late
Below is the tracking number

It should be delivered within 10 days at the latest

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Thank you for your email.
To apologize, we have three possibilities for you.

1. We can refund the amount of money.
2. If we have them, we can send any product you like.
3. You can return the product and we can have it replaced.

We can offer these three possibilities.
Please tell us if you have other ideas.

Thank you for your email

We are sorry that the product is late
Below is the tracking number

It should be delivered within 10 days at the latest.

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Good day, the package arrived yesterday, however it does not contain the certificate.
Please send it immediately.

Afterwards , doesn't this product comes with 8 belts to secure it?

Look forward to hearing from you.

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Good day, the package arrived yesterday, however it does not contain the certificate.
Please send it immediately.

Also, doesn't this product come with eight belts to secure it?

Look forward to hearing from you.

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Hello, I received luggage yesterday, but it doesn't have a warranty.
Please send it immediately.
Besides, it doesn't contain eight belts that fasten the items?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Hello. I received the package yesterday, but the warranty isn't included.
Please send it immediately.
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Also, shouldn't this product have eight belts to secure it?
I look forward to hearing from you.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Thank you for your inquiry.
Sorry for late arrival.
I shipped your order from Japan to France.
I'll tell you the tracking number and the URL of Japan Post Co., Ltd.
Will you check it?
Please wait for a while until you receive.

Sincerely,

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Thank you for your inquiry.
Sorry for the late arrival of the product.
I shipped your order from Japan to France.
I'll tell you the tracking number and the URL of Japan Post Co., Ltd.
Will you check it?
Please wait for a while until you receive the product.

Sincerely,