Katherine Bantiles (googlybear) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
それは違います。EMSは追跡することができます。到着は3日~5日です。送料は3700円です。
SALは追跡することができません。そして、到着は2週間です。SALの送料は1380円です。それはOKではありません。あなたは、EMSを書いて、私はEMSと追跡のために払いました。しかし、私が得たものは、追跡のないSALと待つ2週です。

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それは違います。EMS（便）は追跡することができます。到着には3日~5日しかかかりません。送料は3700円です。
SAL（便）は追跡することができません。そして、到着までには約2週間かかります。SALの送料は1380円です。それはOKではありません。あなたは、EMSと書いて、私はEMSと追跡のために支払いました。しかし、私が得たものは、追跡のついていないSAL便で、2週間も待たされました。

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This is a spoon.↵
It looks like a candy.↵
It's made from acrylic.↵
There's a bubble to make it look even more like a candy.↵
It can also be used as a stir stick.↵
It creates an atmosphere.

Small fishes are arranged on a dining table.↵
This is a chopstick rest.↵
It's made from aluminum cast metal.↵
There's five of them.↵
Let's arrange small fishes on the dining table.

Sit on a fluffy bread.↵
This is a tatami chair.↵
It's shaped like a sliced bread.↵
You can adjust it for five degrees.↵
The fabric is fluffy.↵
It's fit with soft materials.↵
There's also a type that looks like toasted bread.

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This is a spoon. It looks like candy. It's made of acrylic. A bubble is put in to make it look even more like a candy. It can also be used as a stirring stick. It creates a certain atmosphere.

Small fish are lined up on a dining table. This is a chopstick rest made of aluminum cast metal. There are five of them. Line up small fish on the dining table.

Sit on fluffy white bread. This is a tatami chair shaped like a slice of bread. You can adjust it to five angles of folding. The fabric is fluffy and stuffed with soft materials. Another type that looks like toasted bread is also available.

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Please let the manager or the assistant manager if the room's air-con has a leak. You can also put a note in the box located in front of the manager's room.

A contractor comes once a month for the maintenance and repair of all air-con.

Please let them know by Monday morning because the schedule for this month is on August 19.

We will let you use the cover sheet for free so that you can attach it to the outdoor unit of the air-con.

Since you can expect the power-saving operation, please let us know which one you want. It's first-come-first-serve basis because there's only a few of them.

We apologize for the inconvenience, and we hope for you cooperation.

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Please let the manager or assistant manager if your room's air conditioner has a leak. You can also put a note in the box located in front of the manager's room.

A repair person comes once a month for the maintenance and repair of all air conditioners.

Please give notice by the morning of August 19 since this month's repairs will take place next week.

Cover sheets for the air conditioner outside unit are available to be loaned out for free.

These can be expected to save energy so please let us know if you would like one. Only a few are available so they will be distributed on a first-come-first-serve basis.

We apologize for the inconvenience and ask for your understanding.

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Please come to Kumamoto!

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Come to Kumamoto!

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Thank you for your suggestion.
Of course, let me search for it.

Also, thank you for showing me a several links.
Of course, I have also searched for it in famous shops (such as Rakuten and Yahoo!) and other auctions.
However, it's either it is out-of-stock or the price for the bid exceeds the budget.

I have found two retails stores that handles it, and right now, I am inquiring about their available stocks.

I will continue looking for it, and I will contact you again if we have secured the stocks!

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Thank you for your suggestion.
Of course, let me search for it.

Also, thank you for showing me several links.
Of course, I have also searched for it in famous shops (such as Rakuten and Yahoo!) and other auctions.
However, it's either it is out of stock or the price for the bid exceeds the budget.

I have found two retail stores that handle it, and right now, I am inquiring about their available stocks.

I will continue looking for it, and I will contact you again if we have secured the stocks!

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Can you do a pay the 1,900.93 dollars that I am requesting now?
I would like confirm your situation because I have been doing the process for the payment several times now.

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Can you pay the currently invoiced amount of $1,900.93?
I have arranged for payment several times so I would like to confirm the current situation.

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Can you do a pay the 1,900.93 dollars that I am requesting now?
I would like confirm your situation because I have been doing the process for the payment several times now.

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Can you pay the 1,900.93 dollars that I am requesting now?
I would like confirm your situation because I have been doing the process for the payment several times now.

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Dear ××

It's been a long time.. Do you still remember me? I previously worked for you in ○○.

It seems that you have retired. Congratulations. Your second life has begun. Please spend time with your family because there has been conflict in time until now.

I learned a lot from you during the time that I had worked with you. There have been times that I want to quit when it got difficult, but thanks to you, I became mentally and emotionally strong.

Please let me know how you are doing if we meet in the street someday. Please take care.

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Dear ××

It's been a long time. Do you still remember me? I previously worked for you.

It seems that [word choice] you have retired. Congratulations. Your second life has begun. Please spend time with your family because there has been conflict in time [awkward] until now.

I learned a lot from you during the time that I had worked [tense] with you. There have been times that I want [tense] to quit when it got difficult, but thanks to you, I became mentally and emotionally strong.

Please let me know how you are doing if we meet in the street [awkward] someday. Please take care.

元の翻訳
Dear ××

It's been a long time.. Do you still remember me? I previously worked for you in ○○.

It seems that you have retired. Congratulations. Your second life has begun. Please spend time with your family because there has been conflict in time until now.

I learned a lot from you during the time that I had worked with you. There have been times that I want to quit when it got difficult, but thanks to you, I became mentally and emotionally strong.

Please let me know how you are doing if we meet in the street someday. Please take care.

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Dear ××

It's been a long time. Do you still remember me? I am ○○ who previously worked for you.

It seems that you have retired. Congratulations. Your second life has begun. Unlike before you now have a lot of time, so please spend some of it with your family.

I learned a lot from you during the time that we worked together. There were times I wanted to quit when it got difficult, but thanks to you I became mentally and emotionally strong.

Let me know how you are doing if we come across each other someday. Please take care.

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Is it possible to purchase 10 pieces of this product? It's okay even if it takes until January 2014. If we purchase 10 pieces, can you give us a volume discount to make the price cheaper? We would be glad if we get a reply from you as soon as possible. Thank you in advance.

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Is it possible to purchase 10 pcs of this product? It's okay even if it takes until January 2014. If we purchase 10 pieces, can you give us a volume discount to make the price cheaper? We would be glad if we get a reply from you as soon as possible. Thank you in advance.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your email.
Should you wish for the full refund, the request should be done within a week of the product's arrival.

Also, the total amount of the refund will be based on the product's condition

Thank you for your email.
You can use a plug converter when using a Japanese product in the United States.
Regarding the lithium-ion battery, it is possible to put it inside the unit and have it shipped.
The product is being shipped at the moment, and the lithium-ion won't be damaged.

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Thank you for your email.
Should you wish for the full refund, the request should be done within a week of the product's arrival.

Also, the total amount of the refund will be based on the product's condition

Thank you for your email.
You can use a plug converter when using a Japanese product in the United States.
Regarding the lithium-ion battery, it is possible to put it inside the unit and have it shipped.
There is no case reported that the lithium-ion battery was damaged during the shipment so far.

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I purchased 5 pairs of boots from you the other day. When I checked the boots today, I found that the three pairs of boots have a problem.
１．item number:251303556896
Overall, the dirt caused by the adhesion is bad, especially the part of the photo where it is darkish in color.
I am hoping for a 30 dollar refund..

2.item number:251303558692
The size of the right pair is 7E while the left pair is 8E.
If you find the other pair, please sell it to me at the same price.

3.item number:261245187310
There's a cut on the left side.
This product can no longer be sold, so please give me a refund of 50 dollars.

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I purchased five pairs of boots from you the other day. When I checked the boots today, I found that three pairs have a problem.
1. item number: 251303556896
Overall, the dirt sticking to the glue is very bad, especially the part of the photo where the color is darkened.
I would like a $30 refund.

2. item number: 251303558692
The right is 7E while the left is 8E.
If you find the matching ones, please sell them to me at the same price.

3. item number: 261245187310
There's a cut on the left tongue.
This product can no longer be sold, so I would like a $50 refund.

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・ I noticed XXX just now.
・ What is the antonym of that word?
・ I don't really like it that much.
・ It will be troublesome if the problems happen one after another.
・ I couldn't wake up that easily this morning.

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・ I give attention to XXX just now.
・ What is the antonym of that word?
・ I don't really like it that much.
・ I get bothered because problems occur one after another.
・ I couldn't wake up that easily this morning.

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I have a question regarding Order ID 12345678.

Why was there a refund for the payment of this product?
Does it mean that it was returned?

If that is the case, please tell me the reason why.

Did I make a mistake by placing two orders, so the other one got returned?

Please inform me the details of the amount of money about this.

$54.80 was the refunded amount, and $48.22 is the amount that was withdrawn from my account balance.

Could you sell the returned product again?

Thank you in advance.

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I have a question regarding Order ID 12345678.

Why was there a refund for the payment of this product?
Does it mean that it was returned?

If that is the case, please tell me the reason why.

Did I make a mistake by placing two orders, so the other one got returned?

Please inform me of the details of the amount of money about this case.

$54.80 was the refunded amount, and $48.22 is the amount that was withdrawn from my account balance.

Could you sell the returned product again?

Thank you in advance.

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All the products that I had purchased In April were imitations and have low quality.
Almost all of the products were returned by the customers because they were defective.
Because of issues about installation wages and shipping costs for returned goods, there have been instances that the customer discarded the item. At present, we have at hand 2 points for ＊＊＊ and 6 points for ＊＊＊.
Including the warranty, the amount of damages is very immense.
I will send you all the products that I have at hand, so I am demanding that you refund me the amount of the products that I will send back and its shipping fee.
Please reply as soon as possible.

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All the products that I had purchased In April were imitations and have low quality.
Almost all of the products were returned by the customers because they were defective.
Because of the issues about installation and shipping costs for returned goods, some of them discarded their item. At present, we have at hand 2 pieces of ＊＊＊ and 6 pieces of ＊＊＊.
Including the warranty, the amount of damages is very immense.
I will send you all the products that I have at hand, so I am demanding that you refund me the amount of the products that I will send back and its shipping fee.
Please reply as soon as possible.

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We have received the products yesterday.
Among the products received, there was an extra for model number A, but model number B, C, and D have is missing 1 piece each.

Model number A is 26 dollars
Model number B is 40 dollars
Model number C is 44 dollars
Model number dis 44 dollars.型番Ｄは44ドル
So, the balance is 102 dollars.

The payment made was 2244 dollars while the total amount of the products was 1689 dollars, and the difference is 555 dollars.

The products that were out of stock is 102 dollars and the balance is 555 dollars. Please credit the total 657 dollars for the next purchase.

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We have received the products yesterday.
Among the products deliverd, there was an extra for model number A, but model number B, C, and D are missing each 1 piece.

Model number A is 26 dollars
Model number B is 40 dollars
Model number C is 44 dollars
Model number D is 44 dollars
So, it's a total of 102 dollars.

The payment made was 2244 dollars while the total amount of the products was 1689 dollars, and the difference is 555 dollars.

The products that were out of stock are 102 dollars and the total sum is 555 dollars. Please credit the total 657 dollars for the next purchase.

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UK

Thank you for your email.
It was really unfortunate that the product was lost.
We will make arrangements for the replacement.
Please do not worry because it will of course be free of charge.
We will contact you again once the product is ready to be shipped.
We wish you all the best!

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UK

Thank you for your email.
It was really unfortunate that the product was lost.
We will make arrangements for the replacement.
Needless to say it will be free of charge, so please rest assured.
We will contact you again once the product is ready to be shipped.
We wish you all the best!

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Thank you for using our store.
We have something important to inform you, so we request that you read this email until the end.
First, we would like to sincerely apologize.
We are truly sorry.
The product 「 」 you had ordered is no longer in our inventory, and we have tried looking for it in Japan.
However, we could no longer find any stock of this product since it is also popular in Japan. We sincerely apologize, but all that we can do is to cancel this order.

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Thank you for patronizing our store.
We have something important to inform you, so we request that you read this email until the end.
First, we would like to sincerely apologize.
We are truly sorry.
The product 「 」 you had ordered is no longer in our inventory, and we have tried looking for it in Japan.
However, we could no longer find any stock of this product since it is also popular in Japan. We sincerely apologize, but all that we can do is to cancel this order.