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Because the wood shrunk from desiccation, this part turned white. I think this trouble had been resolved. The listing price of this product has not been decided yet. How much do you think it can be sold for in America? I would like to take your picture. I might post it up on my homepage.

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Because the wood shrunk from desiccation, this part turned white. I think this trouble will have been resolved next time. The listing price of this product has not been decided yet. How much do you think it can be sold for in America? I would like to take your picture. I might post it up on my homepage.

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The world of Metal music has lost one of the greatest vocalist. I'd like to convey my deepest condolences to his family and his many fans.

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The world of Metal music has lost one of the greatest vocalists. I'd like to convey my deepest condolences to his family and his many fans.

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This is a cup which made by carbonized bamboo coated by urethane on the potter’s wheel

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This is a cup which is made by carbonized bamboo coated by urethane on the potter’s wheel

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When you enter the number listed in the EMS invoice(Yhe label), you can check the delivery status.

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When you enter the number listed in the EMS invoice(The label), you can check the delivery status.

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You can confirm the delivery situation if you put on the number which is on the EMS conformation letter (Label).

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You can confirm the delivery situation if you put on the number which is on the EMS confirmation letter (Label).

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The lock smith open the safe at the request of beauty, then he found a trunk.

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The locksmith opens a safe at the request of a beauty; then he found a trunk in it.

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There are many instance that little barriers between languages make international exchange, information flow, and overseas business transactions impossible in this internationalized society where communication over multi-lingual information is essential.
Translation will play important roll in the society.
There are competitions between professional translators (translation agencies) and alternatives such as web-based machine translation. There is vast space of customer needs in the aspects of price and quality for a small and casual translation.
Conyac with novel idea of social translation will provide an environment for individuals who want to get real-time translation with expanding database of translators and mobilize social media including social network services.

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There are many instances that little barriers between languages make international exchange, information flow and overseas business transactions impossible in this internationalized society where communication over multi-lingual information is essential.
Translation will play important roll in the society.
There are competitions among professional translators (translation agencies) and alternatives such as web-based machine translation. There is vast space of customer needs in the aspects of price and quality for a small and casual translation.
Conyac with novel idea of social translation will provide an environment for individuals who want to get real-time translation with expanding database of translators and mobilize social media including social network services.

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In this social world in which needs communication between multiple languages according to the process of globalization, we see often that the slight language barrier blocks various activities such as international exchanges, information-sharing, and overseas advance.
The translation serves an important role in such circumstance.
In the translation market there are already competitors such as professional translators(or translation agents) or substitutions such as mechanical translations on the web, though they don't fulfill niche needs of the customers who has casual demand in the aspect of the price and quality.
We meet such customers' needs with our advantage, flexibility and convenience.
We conduct a service named Conyac which contains a new concept—social translation. We will create a new environment where provided more realtime translation for any person by improving translators' database and increasing the amount of registrants(users) through the social media like SNS.

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In this social world in which needs communication between multiple languages according to the process of globalization, we see often that the slight language barrier blocks various activities such as international exchanges, information-sharing, and overseas advance.
The translation serves an important role in such circumstances.
In the translation market there are already competitors such as professional translators(or translation agents) or substitutions such as mechanical translations on the web, though they don't fulfill niche needs of the customers who have casual demand in the aspect of the price and quality.
We meet such customers' needs with our advantage, flexibility and convenience.
We conduct a service named Conyac which contains a new concept—social translation. We will create a new environment where provided more real-time translation for any person by improving translators' database and increasing the amount of registrants(users) through the social media like SNS.

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We provide a broad range of marketing consulting services with focus on research & compilation.

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We provide a broad range of marketing and consulting services, focusing on coverage and compilation for researching publications.

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I have made, by mistake, double the payment. So, I would like you to give me a refund of 10 pounds. Thanks a lot.

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I have made, by mistake, the payment doubly. So, I would like you to give me a refund of 10 pounds. Thanks a lot.

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If there are any doubt of my way of thinking, please don't hesitate to say anything to me. And please kindly send replay with details about my questions.

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If there are any doubts of my way of thinking, please don't hesitate to say anything to me. And please kindly send your replys with details about my questions.

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If you have any question to my idea, please do not hesitate to tell anything to me. And, please bring a memo with your reply to my question written.

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If you have any questions to my idea, please do not hesitate to tell anything to me. And, please bring a memo with your detailed reply to my question.

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If you have any doubts about the case, do not hesitate to ask me anything.
Please bring me a written answers to my questions in detail.

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If you have any questions about my way of thinking, do not hesitate to ask me anything.
And please send me your detailed written answers to my questions.

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The Earth is warmed by energy from the Sun, and the heat is eradiated from the warmed Earth. A part of the heat is absorbed by greenhouse gases such as CO2 in the atmosphere, and returned to the land surface again. This is called reradiation. Average air temperature is kept at 15 degree with the reradiation, making it possible for living organism including human to live. In the nature of things greenhouse gases are indispensable. However, if greenhouse gases increase, the Earth gets warmer and warmer.

Various impacts are seen by the global warming.

Average sea level: Average sea level rose 10-20cm during the 20th century.
Glaciers: Many glaciers on the Earth considerably retreated in the last half of the 20th century. 20th century is a turning point that glaciers started to retreat globally. Especially for the past two decades ice sheets have increasingly melt. According to NASA's satellite investigation glaciers at the Andes, Himalaya, Alpine and Pyrenees are significantly shrank over the past decade. Some reports say that a large extent of all glaciers may disappear.

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The Earth is warmed by energy from the Sun, and the heat is also reradiated from the warmed Earth. A part of the heat is absorbed by greenhouse gases such as CO2 in the atmosphere, and returned to the land surface again. This is called reradiation. Thanks to it average temperature of the Earth is kept at 15 degrees, making it possible for living organism including human being to live. In nature greenhouse gases are indispensable. However, if greenhouse gases increase, the Earth gets warmer and warmer.

Various impacts are seen by the global warming.

Average sea level: Average sea level rose 10-20cm during the 20th century.
Glaciers: Many glaciers on the Earth considerably retreated in the last half of the 20th century. 20th century is a turning point that glaciers started to retreat globally. Especially for the past two decades ice sheets have increasingly melt. According to NASA's satellite investigation glaciers at the Andes, Himalaya, Alpine and Pyrenees are significantly shrank over the past decade. Some reports say that a large extent of all of the glaciers may disappear.

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In a hard snowstorm, he hurried her home with his painting completed, but ...

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In a hard snowstorm, he hurries her home with his painting completed, but ...

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In a heavy snow storm, the boy headed for her home, however---

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In a heavy snowstorm, the boy heads for her home with his painting he painted, however---

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He has not lost his pure heart and drawn what he like best with a night sky color paint.

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The boy never loses his pure heart and draws what he likes most with a night sky color paint.

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An orphan boy was to poor to go school, but living a humble life with a dream to be an artist painter someday.

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An orphan boy was too poor to go to school, but living a humble life with a dream to be an artist painter someday.

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A boy who had no parents was too poor to go to school, but lived humbly dreaming to be a painter.

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A boy who had no parents was too poor to go to school, but living humbly dreaming to be a painter.

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干ばつや戦乱状態が長引けば、作物は駄目になり、多くの人々が餓死することになる。土壌浸食の主な原因である森林伐採やイナゴ被害も飢餓の一因となる。潜在飢餓状態は、３百万人のアメリカ人を含む全世界の３分の１の人々が陥っていると考えられている。ほぼどの国においても、ホームレスの家庭、失業者、固定額の年金で生活する高齢者、片親家庭は存在し、そういった人々は食料品の価格が上がるほど口にする食料が減るのである。

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干ばつや戦乱状態が長引けば、作物は駄目になり、多くの人々が餓死することになる。土壌浸食の主な原因である森林伐採やイナゴ被害も飢餓の一因となる。潜在飢餓状態は、３千万人のアメリカ人を含む全世界の３分の１の人々が陥っていると考えられている。ほぼどの国においても、ホームレスの家庭、失業者、固定額の年金で生活する高齢者、片親家庭は存在し、そういった人々は食料品の価格が上がるほど口にする食料が減るのである。

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The only way I have is ask questions. Then tell me the details about it.

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The only way I have is to ask you. Therefore, please tell me the details about it.

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This animation reveal after stories of the warriors not shown in the TV series!

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This animation reveals after stories of the warriors not shown in the TV series!

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May require payment of duties.

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Payment of customs duty may be required occasionally.

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ミシガン州のブルークロスブルーシールドは先月報告でそのグループが規制当局の承認を56％の率を高めるため要請していた後、キャスリーンセベリウス(保健福祉サービスの秘書)に攻撃された。そのグループは、最終的に22％の金利の引き上げあたりに同意した後、2009年にまだ個人保険事業に280ドルを失ってしまうと反撃した。

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ミシガン州のブルークロスブルーシールドは、先月保健福祉サービスの秘書、キャスリーンセベリウス氏の報告で、グループが率を56%上げる規制認可を要請したと非難された。そのグループは、最終的に22％の率の引き上げで取締官と合意した後、2009年にまだ個人保険事業で280百万ドルの損失があったと反撃した。

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オバマ政権は月曜日にミシガン州の二社に対して独占禁止法の懸念から買収計画を断念させる事により保険業界にもう一発の打撃を与えた。司法省の競争当局によるとミシガン州のブルークロス・ブルーシールド社の子会社は司法省が買収を阻止する訴訟手続きを起こす可能性を保険会社に示唆した後、中部ミシガン州の医師会健康計画の買収提案を放棄した。

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オバマ政権は月曜日にミシガン州の二社に対して独占禁止法の懸念から買収計画を断念させた後、保険業界にもう一発の打撃を与えた。司法省の競争当局によるとミシガン州のブルークロス・ブルーシールド社の子会社は司法省が買収を阻止する訴訟手続きを起こす可能性を保険会社に示唆した後、中部ミシガン州の医師会健康計画の買収提案を放棄した。