翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )
評価: 50 / 1 Review / 2010/04/28 12:05:35
日本語
激しい吹雪の中、少年は描きあげた絵を手にして彼女家に向かうのだが・・・
英語
In a heavy snow storm, the boy headed for her home, however---
レビュー ( 1 )
elephantransはこの翻訳結果を"★★★"と評価しました
2013/10/05 15:21:00
元の翻訳
In a heavy snow storm, the boy headed for her home, however---
修正後
In a heavy snowstorm, the boy heads for her home with his painting he painted, however---
Something is missing. It sounds that the original sentence is describing the basic idea of a story.