RT (cocomon) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
★Even though there are few mold spots, it is the level that would not influence the photo shooting much.

☆I bought a new one at a camera shop this March.

I have used it outside few time.
Its condition is nice as it has not been used much.

★I am not able to sell it at the price you are suggesting, but I would at $oo.
Please consider.

☆As a result of testing, its performance was not good enough for me to sell.
I am sorry that I could not meet your expectation.s

★If you are looking for anything else, I would look for it.
Please feel free to let me know.

修正後
★Even though there are few mold spots, it is the level that would not influence the photo shooting much.

☆I bought a new one at a camera shop this March.

I have used it outside few time.
Its condition is nice as it has not been used much.

★I am not able to sell it at the price you are suggesting, but I would at $oo.
Please consider.

☆As a result of testing, its performance was not good enough for me to sell.
I am sorry that I could not meet your expectations.

★If you are looking for anything else, I would look for it.
Please feel free to let me know.

元の翻訳
これらの二つの時計の違いはなんですか？カシオのリミティッド・エディッションは他より良い品質管理が施されているのでしょうか？二つとも日本モデルですか？どちらの時計もメトリック変換　（キログラム＞パウンド、メートル＞フィート）が可能でしょうか？それとも、カシオのアメリカバージョンを購入しなければいけないのでしょうか？

どちらか一つの時計を購入しようと思います。いくらお支払いすればいいのか知りたいです。ところで、これらの時計モデルに合う交換替えシリコン・カーボンファイバーストラップは購入可能でしょうか？もし可能なら、カシオ社ストラップの製造番号と、在庫取り扱い先を教えてください。

時間をかけて根気よく、数ある質問に答えてくださりありがとうございます。

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これらの二つの時計の違いはなんですか？カシオのリミティッド・エディッションは他より良い品質管理が施されているのでしょうか？二つとも日本モデルですか？どちらの時計もメトリック変換　（キログラム＞パウンド、メートル＞フィート）が可能でしょうか？それとも、カシオのアメリカバージョンを購入しなければいけないのでしょうか？

どちらか一つの時計を購入しようと思います。ただ、どのようなものに支払いをするのか知りたいのです。ところで、これらの時計モデルに合う交換替えシリコンもしくはカーボンファイバーのストラップは購入可能でしょうか？もし可能なら、カシオ社ストラップの製造番号と、在庫取り扱い先を教えてください。

時間をかけて根気よく、数ある質問に答えてくださりありがとうございます。↵
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元の翻訳
Thank you for the message.
I'm sorry, but could you please tell me how I can get feedback when none of the products are still not sold.

My account is suspended in the condition which I even haven't started to sell the products.
Please let me know release the account suspension.　

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Thank you for the message.
I'm sorry to trouble you, but could you please tell me how I can get feedbacks when only one of the products is sold.

My account is suspended in the condition where I haven't even started to sell the products.
Please remove the suspension of my account.

元の翻訳
I appreciate your response.
I am also totally shocked about the damage of the glass panel.
I'll attache the detailed image, so please confirm.

I am hoping to change the glass panel, so would like to receive $150 as a refund.
(As I described in the original email, I would like to receive $250; however I decided to compromise, and $150 will do.)

Please refund $150 to my PAYPAL account.
Thank you for your understanding.

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I appreciate your response.
I am also totally shocked by the damage of the glass panel.
I have attached the detailed image, so please confirm.

I am hoping to exchange the glass panel, so would like to receive $150 as a refund.
(As I described in the original email, I would like to receive $250; however, I decided to compromise, and $150 will do.)

Please refund $150 to my PayPal account.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
※미성년자는 보호자 동의를 받아 음모해 주시기 바랍니다. 미성년자가 음모한 경우 보호자 동의를 받은것으로 간주합니다.
※당일 공연장 입장시 본인확인을 하게됩니다. 입장시 "당첨메이르"과 본인확일을 위한 신문증을 제시해 주시기 바랍니다. (운전명호증, 의료보험증 등) 지점하지 않으신 경우, 어떠한 사유로도 입장이 불가하어니 양해해 주시기 바랍니다.
※"당첨메일" 분실・도난 ・파손등 어떠한 사유로도 재 발행이 불가합니다.

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※미성년자는 보호자 동의를 받아 응모해 주시기 바랍니다. 미성년자가 응모한 경우 보호자의 동의를 받은 것으로 간주합니다.
※당일 공연장 입장 시 본인 확인을 하게 됩니다. 입장 시 "당첨 메일"과 본인 확인을 위한 신분증을 제시해 주시기 바랍니다. (운전면허증, 의료보험증 등) 지참하지 않으신 경우, 어떠한 사유로도 입장이 불가하오니 양해 바랍니다.
※"당첨 메일"은 분실, 도난, 파손 등의 어떠한 사유로도 재발행이 불가합니다.