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If a recipient is absent, you can leave this package in the mailbox.

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If a recipient is not at home, you can leave this package in the mailbox.

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Plastic protect jacket covering the back side of iPhone for iPhone6.
They protect them from scratch and small shaking and shock.
Can be connected with lightning connector with it.
There is a strap hall for a strap.

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Plastic protect jacket for covering the back side of iPhone for iPhone6.
This jacket protects your iPhone 6 from scratch, small vibration, and impact.
Can be connected with lightning connector without taking it off.
There is a strap hole provided for you to attach a strap.

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This protect jacket for iPhone6 is made with plastic and can cover the backside of device.

I can protect your phone from damage, light vibration and impact.

It is possible to link to lightning connector with equipping it.
It has a hole for attaching strap.

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This protective jacket for iPhone6 is made with plastic and can cover the backside of your device.

It can provide the protection for your phone from damage, light vibration and impact.

You can connect the lightning connector without taking this cover off.
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Also, there is a hole provided for you to attach a strap.

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Please use this application in the environment where you can use the Internet.
A campaign for commemoration of the new release.
You cah use all the functions and contents at free of charge during the campaign.

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Please use this application in the environment where you can use the Internet.(...where internet connection is available)
A campaign for commemoration of the newly released service. (←ここはちょっと背景がよくわからないのですが、New Releaseだとなんとなくししっくりとこないような気がします。）
You can use all the functions and contents at free of charge during the campaign.

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It is not necessary to return the camera. As inconvenience may have been caused due to here's mistake on checking, USD300 will be refunded to you. The refund is our apology on the broken camera.

Once you confirmed the refund, I'm sorry to trouble you, but would you please help to revise the rating to positive? I look forward to receiving your reply.

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You do not have to return the camera. As we have caused you an inconvenience due to the verification error on our side, we will give you the refund of USD300 as a token of our apology for the broken camera.

Would you kindly revise your rating on us to positive once you have confirmed the refund? We look forward to receiving your reply.

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Thanks for your offers. However the bidding price is incorrect, please do not hesitate to bid for another chance, I will be glad to have your offer.

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Thank you. I have bid with the incorrect bidding price, but I may be bidding for the item later on.↵
Best regards,↵
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Thanks . I just took a wrong price .↵
But even so, perhaps I'll buy it later.
See u again

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Thanks . I have made a mistake on the bidding price, but I may be bidding it later on.
Best regards,

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Pluggy Lock is a very attractive product.

I have a lot of confidence in selling this product in Japan.

I want to be a regular agent in Japan.

Would you please tell me about conditions?

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Pluggy Lock is a very attractive product.

I have a confidence in selling this product in large volume Japan.

I want to be an official distributor for this product in Japan.

Would you please tell me about your terms and conditions?

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Pluggy Lock is an extremely attractive item.
I am confident that I can sell a large volume of this items in Japan.
I would like to be an official agency in Japan.
Please let me know your conditions.

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Pluggy Lock is an extremely attractive item.
I am confident that I can sell a large volume of this item in Japan.
I would like to be an official distributor in Japan.
Please let me know your conditions.

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Pluggy Lock is a very attractive product.
I am sure to be able to sell those products a lot in Japan.
I want to become the Japanere authorized agent.
Would you let me know conditions?

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Pluggy Lock is a very attractive product.
I am sure that I will be able to sell a lot of these products in Japan.
I want to become the authorized agent in Japan for this product.
Would you tell me your terms and conditions?

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Hope the world to be peace.

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Hope the world be happy.

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May the world be happy.

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May the world happy.

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Brand new.
After we inspect the items throughly, we will send it out.
We will send the items with a tracking number for the items over $100.
Usually we will sent it out from Japan within 5 days.↵
Average delivery time is 7 to 22days.

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Brand new item.
We will ship the item after a thorough inspection.
For the items with its price is or more than $100, we will ship them with tracking numbers.
We normally ship the ordered items out from Japan within 5 days from the date of order placement, and average time required for shipment is between 7 - 22 days.

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こんにちは

あなたはレンズのことについて何をご存じますか？

よろしくお願い致します。

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こんにちは

あなたはこのレンズのことについて何をご存じますか？

よろしくお願い致します。

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こんにちは。

この眼鏡に関して何か知っている事はありますか?

よろしくお願いします。

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こんにちは。

このレンズに関して何か知っている事はありますか?

よろしくお願いします。↵
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こんにちは。
お支払いは、いつ、なさいますか。

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こんにちは。
お支払いはいつごろ手配していただけますか？

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I purchased it at your shop.
As it is for the present, don't send it with a receipt or something from which we can know the price, please.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I purchased it from your shop.
As I am purchasing the item as a gift, please make sure not to include anything indicating the price such as the invoice.
Thank you for your cooperation.

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I purchased it from your store.
As it is a present, we ask you not to send it with the item that shows the price such as an invoice.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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I purchased it from your store.
As it is a gift, we ask you to make sure that the package does not include anything indicating the price, such as an invoice.
I appreciate your cooperation.

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We hate to say, but we do not know how to use the item in detail and its element.
If you worry about it, could you please cancel it today?
Thank you for using our store.

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We hate to say, but we do not know the details in regards to the use and the ingredients.
If you worry about it, could you please cancel your order by the end of today?
Thank you for shopping with us.

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After I checked my best friend, this time I've been seen.
I'm sorry for long waited examination.
Please give me your help on the next purchase.

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Dear XXX(Addressee)↵
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Hello.↵
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After I checked with my friend, I have decided not to proceed further.
I am sorry for making that decision after you have spent your time on researching.
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I look forward for doing business with you in the next opportunity.

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Since English is not my first language, I don't know if I am explaining this right but,

for example, could I add internet site such as "Google", "Yahoo", "YouTube", and "iTunes"?

Is it quite difficult to add certain sites by myself?

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Since English is not my mother tongue, I don't know if I am understanding it correctly but,

for example, could I add websites such as "Google", "Yahoo", "YouTube", and "iTunes"?

Or would it be quite difficult to add certain websites on my own?

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We have not received the bag yet. Would it be possible to trase the delivery situation?
Thank you for the information on SQ and CD. It is wonderful to hear that you have found good leather which is resist enough for being hurt. We look forward to receiving the finished work.

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We have not received the bag yet. Would it be possible to trace the delivery status?
Thank you for the information on SQ and CD. It is wonderful to hear that you have found good leather which has scratch resistance features. We look forward to receiving the finished work.

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The bag has not arrived yet.
Is it possible to check what is going on with the shipping?

Thank you for the information about SQ and CD.
It's amazing that you found the leather that can't not get damaged easily.
I'm looking forward to it completed.

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The bag has not arrived yet.
Is it possible for you to check the status for the shipping?

Thank you for the information on SQ and CD.
It's amazing that you found the leather that can't not be damaged easily.
I'm looking forward for the completion.

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Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest I can offer is $340 including postage.
If you agree to this I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.

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Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest price I can offer you is $340 including postage.
If you agree to accept this offer, I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.