Conyac: 翻訳者レビュー ( 日本語 → 英語 )

transcontinents 52 ビジネス文書作成、交渉、輸出入実務の経験があり、ビジネス関連コミュニケーシ...

日本語

お問い合わせありがとうございます。
送料込みで$340までしか値下げ出来ません。
もしよろしければ値下げして再出品します。
宜しくお願い致します。

英語

Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest I can offer is $340 including postage.
If you agree to this I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.

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[削除済みユーザ] 44

[削除済みユーザ]はこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/11/03 13:08:24

元の翻訳
Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest I can offer is $340 including postage.
If you agree to this I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.

修正後
Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest I can offer is $340, including shipping.
If you agree to this, I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.

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chee_madam 52 留学、就労と英語圏で15年生活してまいりました。実務翻訳に従事しています。...

chee_madamはこの翻訳結果を"★★★★"と評価しました 2014/11/04 00:26:32

元の翻訳
Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest I can offer is $340 including postage.
If you agree to this I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.

修正後
Thanks for your inquiry.
The lowest price I can offer you is $340 including postage.
If you agree to accept this offer, I'll lower the price and re-list it.
Thank you.