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From 22:00 onwards on June 11 (Wednesday), a special program commemorating the release of TOHOSHINKI's new single, Sweat to be broadcasted on Ameba Studio!

To commemorate the new single release, Sweat
there will be a special program broadcast on Ameba Studio on June 11 (Wednesday) from 22:00 onwards.

Focusing on Sweat's music video, comments from the members will be broadcasted too!
As they look back on their TREE tour, showing the PV for the album, TREE and etc,
It's a special broadcast that showcases TOHOSHINKI's appeal!

Don't miss it!

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From 22:00 onwards on June 11 (Wednesday), a special program commemorating the release of TOHOSHINKI's new single, Sweat to be broadcasted on Ameba Studio!

To commemorate the new single release, Sweat
there will be a special program broadcast on Ameba Studio on June 11 (Wednesday) from 22:00 onwards.

Focusing on the music video for Sweat, comments from the members will be broadcasted too!
As they look back on their TREE tour, showing the PV for the album, TREE and etc,
It's a special broadcast that showcases TOHOSHINKI's appeal!

Don't miss it!

元の翻訳
I have received the products today.
After confirming them, I have found ○○ and ○○ to be missing from my order.
(I have double-checked this many times)
As it might be a simple mistake, please issue a refund or take the necessary action immediately.

My next purchase will be done next month.
Please tell me if there are any good bargains.
(Like always, we would need ○○)
I would let you know my next order in a separate email.

From two to three times a month, we will regularly make around △△△ Canadian dollars worth of purchase from your store.
There is no doubt that we would increase the amount that we would spend on purchases from your store.
Hence, I would like to discuss whether you could give us a 30 percent discount from the proposed amount.

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I have received the products today.
After confirming them, I have found ○○ and ○○ to be missing from my order.
(I have double-checked this many times)
As it might be a simple mistake, please issue a refund or take the necessary actions immediately.

My next purchase will be done next month.
Please tell me if there are any good bargains.
(As always, we would need ○○)
I would let you know my next order in a separate email.

From two to three times a month, we will regularly make around △△△ Canadian dollars worth of purchase from your store.
There is no doubt that we would increase the amount that we would spend on purchases from your store.
Hence, I would like to discuss whether you could give us a 30 percent discount from the proposed amount.

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It is possible to alter our dinner arrangements on June 18, in the evening.
Please tell me the time and place once it has been confirmed.
There will be two attending from my end, A and B.

I plan to alter our meeting on June 18 for A Company and B Company.
If there is time, I am thinking of arranging a meeting with C Company.

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It is possible to adjust our dinner arrangements on June 18, in the evening.
Please tell me the time, place and member once it has been confirmed.
There will be two participants from our end, A and B.

Also, I plan to adjust our meetings on June 18 with A Company and B Company.
If there is time, I am thinking of arranging a meeting with C Company.

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The pink ribbon that you have ordered are no longer available in our inventory and production of the item has ended. We still have the black ribbon in stock, would you like us to send that instead?

As an apology, we would refund X dollars after we send out the item.

We have tried our best to source for the pink coloured item but the manufacturer has informed us that they have also run out of stock.

We sincerely hope for your understanding in the matter. If you would like to cease the transaction, you can do so from Amazon's cancellation link.

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The pink ribbon that you have ordered is no longer available in our inventory and production of the item has ended. We still have the black ribbon in stock, would you like us to send that instead?

As an apology, we would refund X dollars after we send out the item.

We have tried our best to source for the pink coloured item but the manufacturer has informed us that they have also run out of stock.

We sincerely hope for your understanding in the matter. If you would like to cease the transaction, you can do so from Amazon's cancellation link.

元の翻訳
An app where you can crop photos or images easily!

1) Launch the app.
2) Press 'Gallery' and choose your photos.
3) Highlight the area that you want to crop.
4) Select 'OK'.
5) You can even rotate them and then share it with your friends.

You are able to crop them in any shape you like. There are options to crop them in squares so they would be easier to share at other apps.

The app would also launch when you take screenshots, making it easier for you to crop them.
Cropped images would be saved in the 'CROP' folder.

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An app where anyone can easily crop photos or images!

1) Launch the app.
2) Press 'Gallery' and choose your photos.
3) Highlight the area that you want to crop.
4) Press 'OK'.
5) You can rotate the photos and share it with your friends.

Besides being able to crop them in any shape you like, there are options to crop them in squares so they would be easier to share in other apps.

The app will automatically launch when you take screenshots, making it easier for you to crop them.
Cropped images would be saved in the 'CROP' folder.

元の翻訳
As it is of many transactions, we would be underfunded and not be able to carry out any business if the full sum isn't repaid.
With one way or another, could the remaining stock be shipped?
We plan to store the stock at our shop for the time being.

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It is a high volume transaction so if you do not refund the full amount right now, then we won't have enough funds and won't be able to do business.
Is there any way that you can ship the remaining products to us?
For the meantime, we are planning to store the products in our store for a little while.

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As it is of many transactions, we would be underfunded and not be able to carry out any business if the full sum isn't repaid.
With one way or another, could the remaining stock be shipped?
We plan to store the stock at our shop for the time being.

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As it is a large volume of transactions, we would be underfunded and not be able to carry out any business if the full sum isn't repaid.
Could the remaining stock be shipped to us one way or the other?
We plan to store the stock at our shop for the time being.

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Dear ○○

Regarding your inquiry, the item is the first edition. (It is not the best-of edition).

I am unable to confirm whether the spin card is attached to the item.

Thank you very much for visiting the store.

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Dear ○○

Regarding your inquiry, the item is the first edition. (It is not the best-of edition).

I am unable to confirm whether the spin card is included with the item.

Thank you very much for visiting the store.

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Thank you for your reply.
The aforementioned bolster has shown to be in stock at your website but I can't seem to make an order. If an order can't be made, I would like to cancel the item.

Thank you also for suggesting an alternative bolster but as of the present time, there isn't any need for the alternative product.

Thank you for making a back order. We are waiting for the bolster covers and will send them once it is produced.

I look forward to your favorable reply.

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Thank you for your reply.
The aforementioned pillow has shown to be in stock on your website so would we be able to make an order? If an order can't be made, we would like to cancel the item.

Thank you also for suggesting an alternative pillow. However, as of the present time, there isn't any need for an alternative product.

Thank you for making a back order. We are waiting for the quilt covers so please send them once they have been produced.

I look forward to your favorable reply.