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You can choose the sizes from small, medium, and large.

If you're paying through PayPal, in the message area please include the size that you wished.

Because this is a popular item, it may be sold out very soon.

If it is out of stock. new stock will arrived only after 1 to 2 months, so it is recommended that you place your order as fast as possible.

I am looking forward to your order.

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You can choose from sizes small, medium, and large.

If you're paying through PayPal, in the message area please include the size that you require.

Because this is a popular item, it may be sold out very soon.

If it is out of stock. new stock will arrived only after 1 to 2 months, so it is recommended that you place your order as fast as possible.

I am looking forward to your order.

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Shinnya Miyamoto, talking about his experiences in Olympic

Tokyo Fuji University will be holding a public speech "Instilling power to Japan from events towards Tokyo 2020" on September 13th, at Media Hall located at school main hall first floor. Shinnya Miyamoto will be appearing as guest.

Shinnya Miyamoto will be appearing as guest in the first of the two session of the speech. As a pro baseball player as well as Nagashima Japan captain of baseball, having participated in Athens Olympics (Bronze medal) and Beijin Olympics, he will be speaking his experiences from baseball, caption to Olympics for a session of 60 minutes.

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Shinya Miyamoto, talking about his experiences in the Olympics

Tokyo Fuji University will be [wrong tense] holding a public speech "Instilling power to Japan from events towards Tokyo 2020" on September 13th, at Media Hall located at [article] school main hall first floor. Shinya Miyamoto will be [wrong tense] appearing as a guest.

Shinya Miyamoto will be [wrong tense] appearing as guest in the first of the two session of the speech. As a pro baseball player as well as Nagashima Japan captain of baseball [awkward phrasing], having participated in the Athens Olympics (Bronze medal) and the Beijing Olympics, he will be [wrong tense] speaking his experiences from [wrong preposition] baseball, caption [?] to [wrong proposition] the Olympics in a 60 minute-session.

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Good afternoon,
Thank you for the reply.
And thank you for your understanding.
I am pleased as well to make acquaintance with you through ebay.
I will continue working hard for a better business relationship.
Also, if you have any enquiries regarding the products, please free feel to ask anytime.
Please pardon my poor English :)

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Good afternoon,
Thank you for the reply.
And thank you for your understanding.
I am pleased as well to make acquaintance with you through ebay.
I will continue working hard for a better business relationship.
Also, if you have any enquiries regarding the products, please free feel to ask anytime.
Please pardon my poor English. lol

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Daichi Miura Live Performance 「DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2014 - THE ENTERTAINER」

http://live.nicovideo.jp/watch/lv192267123

※Time shift period: 30 Days
※ International viewing is possible
※Twitter hashtag: #三浦大知

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Daichi Miura Live Performance 「DAICHI MIURA LIVE TOUR 2014 - THE ENTERTAINER」

http://live.nicovideo.jp/watch/lv192267123

*Time shift period: 30 Days
* International viewing is possible
*Twitter hashtag: #三浦大知

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Sorry for the late response.

I do not know what is the right way to say but we are really sorry this time so we are refunding you the money.

Please tell me your name, address and telephone number for the return delivery.
We will pay for the return delivery fee.
Please tell us what is the cheapest option available for the return delivery if you happen to know.

We will be anticipating your response.

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Sorry for the late response.

I do not know what is the right way to say 「誤訳」but we are really sorry this time so we are refunding you the money　「誤訳」.

Please tell me your name, address, and telephone number for the return delivery.
We will pay for the return delivery fee.
Please tell us what is the cheapest option available for the return delivery if you happen to know.

We will be anticipating your response.

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Really? I didn't know cute manga in Singapore is so popular.
I don't really read such manga until now.
But I have friends around me that like it.
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I like adventure genre manga. For example, Dai no Daibouken.
I like character A the most. He is a timid as first but he beginning to become more brave as he starts his adventure.
What kind manga do you like most for adventure genre?
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I was just at the manga cafe just now reading a manga called ~.

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Really? I didn't know cute manga in Singapore is so popular.
I don't really read such manga until now.
But many of friends like the genre.
----
I like adventure genre manga. For example, Dai no Daibouken.
I like character A the most. He is a timid at first, but he gradually became braver as he went through adventures.
What kind manga do you like most for adventure genre?
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I was just at the manga cafe just now reading a manga called ~.