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元の翻訳
We set up contracts with several buyers. Also we are running our own EC site and have multiple sales channels.
We check the logical values according to stock records and books. Also we are comparing the logical values on book and actual numbers on stocks monthly, in order to deliver ordered items to our customers properly.
Additionally, high-valued products are stocked in different places from ordinary ones and hedging the steal risk by counting daily.

修正後
We set up contracts with several buyers. Also we are running our own EC site and have multiple sales channels.
We daily check the logical values according to stock records and books. Also we are comparing the logical values on book and actual numbers on stocks monthly, in order to deliver ordered items to our customers properly.
Additionally, high-valued products are stocked in different places from ordinary ones and hedging the steal risk by counting daily.

元の翻訳
こんにちは。

お問い合わせありがとうございます。
商品は第34週の8月18日に入荷予定ですので、18日以降に発送いたします。発送後には追跡番号での追跡(トラッキング)をお勧めします。

よろしくお願いいたします。

修正後
こんにちは。

お問い合わせありがとうございます。
商品は第34週（8月18日始まりの週）に入荷予定ですので、18日以降に発送いたします。発送後には追跡番号での追跡(トラッキング)をお勧めします。

よろしくお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
We were exchanging messages, however, another people's bid was accepted. Exchanging messages doesn't mean you put it on hold.↵
Even if we were exchanging messages, we must sell it to the successful bidder due to the nature of our auction. We appropriate your understanding.

修正後
While we were exchanging messages, someone else's bid was accepted unfourtunately. Exchanging messages doesn't mean the item is put on hold (as a lay-away). Even if we were exchanging messages, we must sell it to the successful bidder due to the nature of our auction. We appreciate your kind understanding.

元の翻訳
High quality Japanese harp (Taisho Koto) by zen-on
It is made of Paulownia wood and is characterized by its beautiful gorgeous sounds.
It is volume controllable and you could play it on the speakerphone connected with a dedicated cable.
Strings: 6 strings 27 keys/5-6#
Strings length: 520mm
Size: 695×130×95mm
Weight: 1.6kg (includes case, 1.8kg)
Material: Top panel (Paulownia) Keboard (Wooden square shape) Protector (Rosewood)
Price: 98,000yen

I'm sure that EMS insurance might cover the cost but if they don't I will pay for it instead so don't worry about that.
I'm not good at english, so that would be helpful if you write me back in simple english.

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High quality Japanese harp (Taisho Koto) by zen-on
It is made of Paulownia wood and characterized by its beautiful gorgeous sounds.
It is volume controllable and you could play it on the speakerphone connected with a dedicated cable.
Strings: 6 strings 27 keys/5-6#
Strings length: 520mm
Size: 695×130×95mm
Weight: 1.6kg (includes case, 1.8kg)
Material: Top panel (Paulownia) Keyboard (Wooden square shape) Protector (Rosewood)
Price: 98,000 Japanese yen

I'm sure that EMS insurance might cover the cost but if they don't I will pay for it instead so don't worry about that.
I'm not good at English, so that would be helpful if you write me back in simple English.