1991_yappy — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Thank you for transfer. I've got a notice of the transfer from bank and ensured today. I will challenge to Japanese market again. I hope you keep supporting us continuously. Thank you.

修正後
I have been notified by the bank today regarding the remittance from you. We appreciate your kind arrangement. We will try approaching Japanese market again. We will appreciate your continued support.Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for transfer. I've got a notice of the transfer from bank and ensured today. I will challenge to Japanese market again. I hope you keep supporting us continuously. Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for transfer [unclear]. I received a notice of the transfer from bank and ensured today [unclear]. I will challenge the Japanese market again [different from the original]. Thank you for your continuous support.

元の翻訳
I got a answer that I had not expcted. Could you see the contents( or email) again?? The product name is (A). The seller and sender is the same company,(B). I paid $24.06 as the delivery fee but displays $203.97 just as delivery fee.The delivery destination is Japan. It has not passed long term since I bought last time. But, why is the price changed dramatically in negative way?? I've left the product in my cart and yet to out. So, please be clear out what happened and let me know.

修正後
I got the answer that is completely different from what I asked. Could you see the contents( or email) again?? The product name is (A). The seller and sender is the same company,(B). I paid $24.06 as the delivery fee but displays $203.97 just as delivery fee.The delivery destination is Japan. It has not passed long term since I bought last time. But, why is the price changed dramatically in the negative way?? I've left the product in my cart and yet to be out. So, please be clear about what happened and let me know.

元の翻訳
ありがとうございます。私はセイコをしています。しかし、もう日本では作っていません。知って悪いことではありません。あなたのお店の保証書を送っていただけますか？

修正後
ありがとうございます。私はセイコーはもう日本では作っていないことがわかりました。知って悪いことではありません。あなたのお店の保証書を送っていただけますか？