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Would you test to register the following two items? Please let me know as soon as it is done so that I can confirm. I will pay you for this work once everything is done.

I have been received an admission from the support center to sign in your account, and am now monitoring your account. Sign in your account using the following ID and passward.
Please be sure to send me an e-mail when you signed in and out your account, so that we can avoid logging in at the same time.

ID:
PW:

Once I confirm that you registered items properly, I will let you know the URLs for the rest 36 items.

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Would you test to register the two items? Please let me know as soon as it is done so that I can confirm. I will pay you for that once everything is done.

We have been received an admission from the support center to sign in your account, and are now monitoring your account. Please sign in your account using the following ID and password.
Please be sure to send us an e-mail when you sign in and out your account, so that we can avoid logging in at the same time.

ID:
PW:

Once we confirm that you registered items properly, I will let you know the URLs for the rest 36 items.

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We have just listed the guitar you requested on e-mall.

We provide guitars, including K guitars, to professional musicians not only in the U.S. but also all over the world.
We have confirmed that a KGP is now fortunately available in stock.

We can offer you a trade outside of e-mall, if you wish. In this case, we would be able to give you some discount, so please send me an e-mail if you wish.

This guitar will be accompanied by a special gig bag.
Also a hard case is available from the maker on a made-to-order basis, so please note that it should take about a month before you receive your order.

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We have just listed the guitar you requested on e-mall.

We provide guitars, including K guitars, to professional musicians not only in the U.S. but also all over the world.
We have confirmed that a KGP is now fortunately available in stock.

We can offer you a trade outside of e-mall, if you wish. In this case, we would be able to give you some discount, so please send me an e-mail if you would like to place an order.

This guitar will be accompanied by a special gig bag.
Also a hard case is available from the maker on a made-to-order basis, so please note that it should take about a month before you receive it.

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I am a repairer of watches in Japan.
In order to repair a watch, I definitely need the Rolex movement you are posting.
I have a few quesitions here.
Is it for men?
Does it work properly?
Has it come through overhauls?
Is there any part missing?
If I am to buy it, will you ship it to Japan?
If yes, I would like to know the shipping cost, the handling fee and time for delivery.
I want to pay by PayPal, so would you please change your setting on the web page to allow shipping to Japan?
Thank you.

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I am a repairer of watches in Japan.
In order to repair a watch, I definitely need the Rolex movement you have posted.
I have a few quesitions here.
Is it for men?
Does it work properly?
Has it ever been overhauled?
Are there any parts missing?
If I am to buy it, will you ship it to Japan?
If yes, I would like to know the shipping cost, the handling fee and leadtime for delivery.
I want to pay by PayPal, so would you please change your setting on the web page to allow shipping to Japan?
Thank you.

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I regret my poor explanation then. I am always ready for any payment for orders I place. However, I asked you to wait for a while at that time as the cutoff date of my credit card was very close. Never did I mean that I was not able to afford it. My stock has run out already, and I need to order right away. If I order blue and black in lots now, how long will they take to reach me? I want about 40 units in total. On the other hand, how many units do you still have? If you have some, would you sell them to me?

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I regret my poor explanation then. I am always ready for any payment for orders I place. However, I asked you to wait for a while at that time as the cutoff date of my credit card was very close. Never did I mean that I was not able to afford it. My stock has run out already, and I need to order right away. If I order blue and black in lots now, how long will it take them to reach me? I want about 40 units in total. On the other hand, how many units do you still have? If you have some, would you sell them to me?

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It is sad that the item was broken.

I inquired Japan Post and they said that EMS is covered by insurance.
Please contact the local delivery company at your end to file an insurance claim, as we are told that we are not eligible to do so from here in Japan.

I apologize for the inconvenience, and appreciate your help.

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I am very sorry that the item was broken.

I inquired Japan Post, and they said that EMS is covered by insurance.
Please contact the local delivery company at your end to file an insurance claim, as we are told that we are not eligible to do so from here in Japan.

I apologize for the inconvenience, but please make the application by yourself.

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All of the products use the high-quality leather which requires several months for production.

Yaraku Co., Ltd. is pleased to announce its release of the hybrid translation managing system "World Jumper", open to public for free.

World Jumber is designed for SOHOs, private businesses and small-size businesses, contributing them to have their websites in foreign languages on their own by its free basic charge and very simplified steps of usage.

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All the products use high-quality leather which requires several months for production.

Yaraku Co., Ltd. is pleased to announce its release of a hybrid translation managing system "World Jumper", open to public for free.

World Jumber is designed for SOHOs, private businesses, and small-size businesses, and its free basic charge and very simplified steps of usage allow them to have their own multilingual websites.

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I have a few questions again.

1. What the breakdown of the amount of purchase should look like?

Is there any items required to be purchased?
We hope to select items we consider popular in Japan .
Can we pick up specific items to buy?

2. What is the price range the Japanese seller is buying from?

3. Do you provide warranties to your items?

If yes, what are the conditions for a return?

4. What shipping methods are expected?

Also, how much are the approximate shipping costs, if available, for both U.S. domestic and international to Japan?

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I have a few questions again.

1. What will we be purchasing with the total amount of money?

Is there any items required to be purchased?
We hope to select items which are popular in Japan .
Can we pick up specific items to buy?

2. What is the price range the Japanese seller can offer?

3. Do you provide your items with warranties?

If yes, what are the conditions for returning items?

4. What kind of shipping methods will be applied?

Also, if you know how much are the approximate shipping costs for both U.S. domestic and international to Japan, please inform me of it.

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The period of keeping your item with us will be 7 to 10 days after it reaches our department concerned. However, please note that it may be longer depending on our stock status and etc.

Regarding your question about repaiment services in the U.S., unfortunately we do provide repairments at our repariment centers in Japan only. I apologize for the inconvenience.

Please feel free to contact us for any questions.

We hope your continued patronage for the Bandai products.
Thank you very much.

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The period of repairing your item will take 7 to 10 days after it reaches our repair service department. However, please note that it may take longer depending on our stock status and etc.

Regarding your question about repair services in the U.S., unfortunately we only provide repair services at our repair centers in Japan. I apologize for the inconvenience.

Please feel free to contact us for any questions.

We hope you keep supporting and using Bandai products.
Thank you very much.

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The repairment fee is not determined until we see the item, however, it should range between none (zero) to almost 20% of the suggested retail price at most.

When a repariment fee is to be charged, we will include a money order with the item returned to you for your later payment's convenience.

We will bear the shipping cost to return the repaired item to you, however, please kindly pay the shipping fee for your sending the item to us.

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The repairment fee is not determined until we see the item, however, it should range between none (zero) to almost 20% of the suggested retail price at most.

When a repariment fee occurs, we will attach a postal transfer form to the repaired item and please make a payment when it's convenient for you.

We will cover the shipping cost to return the repaired item to you, however, please kindly pay the shipping fee when you send the item to us.

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Thank you for your suggestion.
It is currently built in that way in order to shun the bug in iOS7.
It will remain as it is until the bug in the OS is removed.
If any good solution will be found, it will be revised for sure.

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Thank you for your suggestion.
It is currently built in that way in order to avoid the bug in iOS7.
It will remain as it is, until the bug in the OS is removed.
Until then, if a good solution is found, we would like to revised it.

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I am writing to you as we have been contacted by the delivery company.

・ The delivery company say that they delivered a package to XX on October 5, but that they could not hand it as you were not there.

・ Your telephone number seems to be wrong. Please tell me your phone number accessible in Japan.

・ Is the following address correct to deliver to? I would like to make it sure for just in case.

I am sorry to bother you, but would appreciate your response at your earliest convenience. I will contact the delivery company with your response.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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I am writing to you as we have been contacted by the delivery company.

・ The delivery company said that they delivered a package to XX on October 5th, but that they could not hand it as you were not there.

・ Your telephone number seems to be wrong. Please tell me your phone number which is accessible in Japan.

・ Is the following address correct to deliver to? I would like to make it sure for just in case.

I am sorry to bother you, but would appreciate your response at your earliest convenience. I will contact the delivery company with your response.

Thank you for your cooperation.

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Please tell your shipping staff to ship my rug so that it will hopefully reach me by September 26.

I know that you cannot guarantee, but please tell your shipping staff to try anything he/she can do so that my rug will reach me as soon as possible.

Among the items I received today, an item different from my order was included. As I cannot return it directly, I will send it back to you. Is the address shown in the current address alright for you to receive it?

When you receive it, please forward it to the specified location for me. I will send you the free shipping label and the address to return via email later.

I am placing an order again because a wrong item was delivered. Please ship it immediately.

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Please tell your shipping staff to ship my rug so that it will hopefully reach me by September 26.

I know that you cannot guarantee, but please tell your shipping staff to accommodate this so that my rug will reach me as soon as possible.

Among the items I received today, an item different from my order was included. As I cannot return it directly from Japan, I will send it back to you. Is it alright to send it to the address shown in the Current Address?

When you receive it, please forward it to the specified location for me. I will send you the free shipping label and the return address via email later.

I am placing an order again because a wrong item was delivered. Please ship it immediately.

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Today I looked at the rugs I received and found a wrong one that I did not even order.

I attach a picture of this wrong rug.

I will not be able to return it to you until next week due to my job.

I would like to have the rug I ordered immediately. Please ship the one I ordered before you receive the return. Could you do so?

Will I get the right rug sooner if I place an order again?

Recently troubles have been often happening including late deliveries and cancellation of orders by your reasons. Please make sure with your shipping staff not to ship a wrong item this time.

I would like you to process this order as soon as possible.

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Upon confirming today I found that a totally different rug was delivered to me.

This was the rug that was delivered to me. I am also attaching a picture.

I will not be able to return it to you until next week due to my work schedule.

I would like you to deliver the rug according to what I've ordered as soon as possible. I would like you to ship the one I've ordered prior to receiving the returned product. Is this possible?

Will the delivery be faster if I place a new order for the same rug?

Recently, troubles such as late deliveries and cancellation of orders made by your company are frequently occurring. Please inform your staff not to ship a wrong item this time.

I would like you to process this order as soon as possible.

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Hello,

My sales has been grwoing since I increased transactions with you. I thank you.

In order to further increase my sales, I would like to buy more items other than watches at wholesale prices. Could you help me buying items at wholesale prices?

Is there any your friends or person you know who would supply me products to sell?
Either would be fine if I deal directly with them or with you being in between.

I look forward to your positive reply.

Thank you.

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Hello,

My sales has been grwoing since I increased transactions with you. I thank you.

In order to further increase my sales, I would like to buy more items other than watches at wholesale prices. Could you help me buying items at wholesale prices?

Is there any your friends [awkward] or person you know who would supply me [with] products to sell?
Either would be fine if I deal directly with them or with you being in between [awk].

I look forward to your positive reply.

Thank you.