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rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 01 Sep 2013 at 13:25
Comment The 3rd sentence doesn't convey the client's intention. He/she wants to buy 3 more, but is asking if the price can be reduced to $100 ...

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 30 Aug 2013 at 11:21
Comment 直訳が多く、日本語として意味が通らない部分が多い。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 28 Aug 2013 at 08:54
original 香港スタートアップのSky Droneはあなたを無人操縦機で空の旅へあなたはかつて体験したことがあるだろうか。無人操縦機で空を飛ぶ楽しさを。もちろん面倒なミリタリーでの体験ではなく。香港発のスタートアップ SkyDroneはあなたの夢を叶える。もちろん軍用機を提供するわけではない。むしろ操縦機自体提供しない。 SkyDroneが開発した搭載カメラを実際の操縦機に搭載しAppを起動することで、スマートフォンを通じてまるで自らが操縦しているかのような体験が出来るのである。↵	corrected 香港スタートアップのSky Droneはあなたを無人操縦機で空の旅へあなたは無人操縦機を飛ばす楽しさを味わいたいと思ったことがあるだろうか。軍隊に入ることに伴う面倒や心的外傷無しに。香港発のスタートアップ SkyDroneはあなたの夢を叶える。もちろん軍用機を提供するわけではない。それどころか、操縦機自体も提供しない。 SkyDroneが開発した搭載カメラを実際の操縦機に搭載しAppを起動することで、スマートフォンを通じてまるで自らが操縦しているかのような体験が出来るのである。

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese

28 Aug 2013 at 08:54

original
香港スタートアップのSky Droneはあなたを無人操縦機で空の旅へ

あなたはかつて体験したことがあるだろうか。無人操縦機で空を飛ぶ楽しさを。もちろん面倒なミリタリーでの体験ではなく。

香港発のスタートアップ SkyDroneはあなたの夢を叶える。
もちろん軍用機を提供するわけではない。むしろ操縦機自体提供しない。

SkyDroneが開発した搭載カメラを実際の操縦機に搭載しAppを起動することで、スマートフォンを通じてまるで自らが操縦しているかのような体験が出来るのである。↵

corrected
香港スタートアップのSky Droneはあなたを無人操縦機で空の旅へ

あなたは無人操縦機を飛ばす楽しさを味わいたいと思ったことがあるだろうか。軍隊に入ることに伴う面倒や心的外傷無しに。

香港発のスタートアップ SkyDroneはあなたの夢を叶える。
もちろん軍用機を提供するわけではない。それどころか、操縦機自体も提供しない。

SkyDroneが開発した搭載カメラを実際の操縦機に搭載しAppを起動することで、スマートフォンを通じてまるで自らが操縦しているかのような体験が出来るのである。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 28 Aug 2013 at 14:06
Comment 「その時点でまだ必要であればお送りしますね。」 Above sentence refers to the product (body of the RC car?) he is selling, not e-mail.

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 28 Aug 2013 at 06:11
Comment 不自然な日本語が目につきます。例：「詳しくな」、「発送したの」、「発した」 refund->「返金」「私に返品したものを払います」->「返送のための費用を支払うので」

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 21 Aug 2013 at 06:00
Comment The 2nd & 3rd lines make up one sentence. The 4th and 5th lines as well. "2k copies": 20k copies "1000 yen (inc. tax)": EXCLUDING ta...

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 13 Aug 2013 at 15:39
Comment The translation does not make sense in Japanese. Too much literal translations.

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 13 Aug 2013 at 08:58
Comment The Japanese translation doesn't make any sense. Too much literal/mechanical translations.

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 13 Aug 2013 at 00:55
Comment 機械翻訳並みで、日本語として意味をなしていません。

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 13 Aug 2013 at 00:52
Comment ほとんど直訳・誤訳ばかり。一部機械翻訳の可能性あり。

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 12 Aug 2013 at 11:33
Comment 他の部分の翻訳は問題ないですが、冒頭の「Apple will hold its next iPhone event on Tuesday, September 10th」が完全に抜けています。原文で一番重要な部分です。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 11 Aug 2013 at 01:53
original I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company. You are the first company we started our business in the USA. You were very kind to us who were not good at English. Thank you very much for your great support. For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual? As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking to make an order on 22 August.	corrected I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company. You are the first company we did business with in the USA. You were very kind to us who could barely speak English. Thank you very much for your great support. For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual? As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking of placing an order on 22 August.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

11 Aug 2013 at 01:53

original
I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company.

You are the first company we started our business in the USA. You were very kind to us who were not good at English.
Thank you very much for your great support.

For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual?
As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking to make an order on 22 August.

corrected
I am really sorry to hear that you are going to leave the company.

You are the first company we did business with in the USA. You were very kind to us who could barely speak English.
Thank you very much for your great support.

For the future, would it be fine for me to send orders @yahoo.com as usual?
As I am going to the USA in September, I am thinking of placing an order on 22 August.

rated this translation result as ★★★ English → Japanese 31 Jul 2013 at 09:44
Comment 「依頼者プロフィール欄の翻訳ガイドライン」に沿っていません。Microsoft Research Asia、 Institute of Computing Technologyなどは原文のままにすべきです。 Institute of Computing Techno...

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 01 Aug 2013 at 02:16
Comment ＞値が下がって売りに出された時に、iPhone 5C を手に入れようと検討中でしょうか？ fallは秋です。＞そうですね、あなたはその製品にその順調さと、後ろ側のプラスチック部分が全ての傷を保護します。 smoothは「順調さ」ではな背面の滑らかさです。「あ...

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 01 Aug 2013 at 02:08
Comment ＞「私達の製品「Slim Fits」と言う名の２つのケースは、特にあなたの携帯電話から傷や油分や汚れの残りを減らす為に表面を覆われています。その間グリップの質も向上します。」「Slim Fit 2」が商品名＞iPhone 5Cは正面から背面へという形で製品を一...

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 01 Aug 2013 at 01:59
Comment ＞Apple社が製品の設計書をある選ばれた数社の製造業者に作って貰うよりも先に、 make specifications availableは、「仕様を提供する」＞中小企業は単に噂のみを基準に最初にその製品の市場に介入しようと、付属品を作ります。「参入」のほう...

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 01 Aug 2013 at 00:55
Comment ＞アップルは、大手の発売開始 majorは「重要な新製品」などと意訳すべき。「大手の発売開始」は日本語としておかしい。＞に先立ち数社の製造会社を選択するために製品の仕様を作成しますが、「数社を選んで、製品の仕様を提供しますが、」＞小規模の会社では、自社...

rated this translation result as ★★ English → Japanese 30 Jul 2013 at 09:16
Comment ＞ワークを伴うデータとは、この場合のworkとは「作品」であることは後の文章から明らかです。the data that must accompany the workは「作品に添付されなければならないデータ」、「作品とともに提出すべきデータ」などと訳すべきで、「ワークを...

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 19 Jul 2013 at 15:26
Comment 文法的に基礎レベルの間違いが多すぎます。またスペルミスもあり(occurred)。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 19 Jul 2013 at 15:16
Comment 訳語の選択、動詞の活用・時制、文章の組み立てなど、あらゆるレベルで問題があります。

rated this translation result as ★ English → Japanese 16 Jul 2013 at 05:07
Comment 日本語として意味が通じません。機械翻訳のように見受けられます。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 12 Jul 2013 at 05:54
Comment 問題ないと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 11 Jul 2013 at 09:58
original Long time no see everyone! It's flower member! It's finally summer isn't it! I've watched lots of good summer cartoons, but my best recommendation is definitely○○! ●●was also interesting, of course, but ○○was so imaginative! The characters' bathing suits and muscles were so fine and they had such cool faces. It's been a long time since I've seen real-looking muscles.... I particularly like the main character, Haruka, and the young guy Nagisa! Haruka has a cool character, and Nagisa has numbingly cute behaviours...!	corrected Long time no see everyone! It's flower member! It's finally summer isn't it! I've watched lots of the first episodes of the summer animes, but my best recommendation is definitely○○! ●●was also interesting, of course, but ○○was better than I imagined! The characters' muscles were so fine in their bathing suits even though they had such cool faces. It's been a long time since I've seen real-looking muscles in anime.... I particularly like the main character, Haruka, and the young guy Nagisa! Haruka has a cool character, and Nagisa has numbingly cute behaviours...!

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

11 Jul 2013 at 09:58

original
Long time no see everyone! It's flower member!
It's finally summer isn't it!

I've watched lots of good summer cartoons, but my best recommendation is definitely○○!

●●was also interesting, of course, but ○○was so imaginative!

The characters' bathing suits and muscles were so fine and they had such cool faces.

It's been a long time since I've seen real-looking muscles....

I particularly like the main character, Haruka, and the young guy Nagisa!

Haruka has a cool character, and Nagisa has numbingly cute behaviours...!

corrected
Long time no see everyone! It's flower member!
It's finally summer isn't it!

I've watched lots of the first episodes of the summer animes, but my best recommendation is definitely○○!

●●was also interesting, of course, but ○○was better than I imagined!

The characters' muscles were so fine in their bathing suits even though they had such cool faces.

It's been a long time since I've seen real-looking muscles in anime....

I particularly like the main character, Haruka, and the young guy Nagisa!

Haruka has a cool character, and Nagisa has numbingly cute behaviours...!

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 06 Jul 2013 at 08:39
Comment この場合faceはゴルフクラブのヘッドの表面と思われるので、「顔面」という訳は適切ではないと思います。それ以外は良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★ Japanese → English 05 Jul 2013 at 05:59
original Germany I checked the status with the delivery company and found the parcel had god lost. DHL should have lost it. It may take long to trace and find the item. I would like to sugguest you the following to two options to prevent you from further troubles. 1. Full refund 2. Reshipment of new item * Reorder and shipment will not be charged. Please advice me. Have a nice day!	corrected Germany I checked the status with the delivery company and found that the parcel has gotten lost. DHL may have lost it. It may take a long time to track down the item. I would like to suggest you the following two options to save you from further troubles. 1. Full refund 2. Reshipment of new item * Reorder and shipment costs will not be charged. Please advice me. Have a nice day!

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