David Diaz (lapalomatokyo) — Written Reviews

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Almost 11 years ago

United States

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rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 29 Jul 2013 at 00:42
Comment I think this is flawless. I believe there should be a comma before the 'too' in the second sentence, but who really gives a flip? Looks g...

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 28 Jul 2013 at 00:45
original Hello. We have received a bad review from a customer who has cancelled his/her order because we ran out of stock of the product that he/she wished to purchase. We would like to sincerely apologize to the said customer for the trouble that the issue has caused. We would like to contact the said customer that we will offer him/her money back and apologize if he/she will not pursue with giving us a bad review. Will this be a breach to the contract? Please let us know if you have a better advice. We are hoping for a prompt reply.	corrected Hello. We have received a bad review from a customer who has cancelled his/her order because we ran out of stock of the product that he/she wished to purchase. We would like to sincerely apologize to said customer for the trouble that the issue has caused. We would like to contact said customer explaining that we will offer him/her money back and apologize if he/she will remove their bad review. Will this be a breach of the contract? Please let us know if you have better advice. We are hoping for a prompt reply.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

28 Jul 2013 at 00:45

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Jul 2013 at 02:49
Comment I think it reflects the original tone very well!

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Jul 2013 at 01:03
Comment I think バラバラ generally implies more than one item, in which case "if you send them together" might be a better translation--perhaps irr...

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2013 at 15:49
original I will dispatch CPT tomorrow. After shipment, I will inform you of the tracking number. My last order arrived, but I found that HDMI cable was not enclosed with A. Please send it together with my order this time. Payment is to be made on 29th with a credit card. The photo of the parts I’m thinking about buying is attached for your reference. Please refer to the place circled in blue. The model number of B is RPMQ90, isn’t it? I assume that the parts shown on the attached photo and the three parts whose quotation I received the other day are the same ones. Am I correct? Could you give me a little more discount for the selling prices of B and C?	corrected I will dispatch CPT tomorrow. After shipment, I will inform you of the tracking number. My last order arrived, but I found that THE HDMI cable was not enclosed with A. Please send it together with my order this time. Payment is to be made on THE 29th with a credit card. The photo of the parts I’m thinking about buying is attached for your reference. Please refer to the place circled in blue. The model number of B is RPMQ90--is THAT CORRECT? I assume that the parts shown on the attached photo and the three parts whose quotation I received the other day are the same ones. Am I correct? Could you give me a little more discount for the selling prices of B and C?

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English

26 Jul 2013 at 15:49

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2013 at 14:06
Comment This is clear enough that a native speaker won't have much difficulty understanding! In my translations I always have difficulties with t...

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2013 at 15:53
Comment wow! perfection!

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2013 at 17:09
original Thank you very much for your question!! I'm sorry, this item is only available in Japanese. I'm sorry the shipment was delayed. I'm shipping the item soon. I'm shipping by EMS, which is the fastest way so that you can get it very soon after dispatch. Please look forward to the item to reach you. Thank you!!	corrected Thank you very much for your question!! I'm sorry, this item is only available in Japanese. I'm sorry the shipment was delayed. I'm shipping the item soon. I'm shipping by EMS, which is the fastest way so that you can get it very soon after dispatch. Please look forward to the item's arrival. Thank you!!

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2013 at 18:48
Comment wonderful, just as succinct as the original. That last phrase likely implies he's waiting for payment... Not sure how you want to transla...