David Diaz (lapalomatokyo) — Received Reviews

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Almost 11 years ago

United States

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rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 28 Jul 2013 at 16:49
Comment good

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 28 Jul 2013 at 23:41
original I believe the problem was in the packing. Because the cardboard box was so thin and long, the heads were offset to the side. Two heads rubbed together and it left scratching. In the future, please place the items in a square box and include ample cushioning so that the heads don't contact one another. I know it may be a hassle, but our high profile customers have a keen eye for perfection. Please understand. For you as well, the less trouble there is in this respect, the more you can avoid losses.	corrected I believe the problem was in the packing. Because the cardboard box was long and narrow, the heads were offset to the side. Two heads rubbed together and it left scratching. In the future, please place the items in a square box and include ample cushioning so that the heads don't contact one another. I know it may be a hassle, but our high profile customers have a keen eye for perfection. Please understand. For you as well, the less trouble there is in this respect, the more you can avoid losses.

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English

28 Jul 2013 at 23:41

original
I believe the problem was in the packing.
Because the cardboard box was so thin and long, the heads were offset to the side. Two heads rubbed together and it left scratching. In the future, please place the items in a square box and include ample cushioning so that the heads don't contact one another. I know it may be a hassle, but our high profile customers have a keen eye for perfection. Please understand. For you as well, the less trouble there is in this respect, the more you can avoid losses.

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I believe the problem was in the packing.
Because the cardboard box was long and narrow, the heads were offset to the side. Two heads rubbed together and it left scratching. In the future, please place the items in a square box and include ample cushioning so that the heads don't contact one another. I know it may be a hassle, but our high profile customers have a keen eye for perfection. Please understand. For you as well, the less trouble there is in this respect, the more you can avoid losses.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Jul 2013 at 00:33
Comment Nice work!

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 24 Jul 2013 at 02:16
Comment よいと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 24 Jul 2013 at 02:23
Comment よくできていると思います。細かいかもしれませんが、Since we've already received a purchase order from youはalready よりpreviouslyのほうがよいかと思います。それと、if you're not going ...

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 27 Jul 2013 at 10:55
Comment Well translated.

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 26 Jul 2013 at 01:18
Comment looks fine

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 04 Aug 2013 at 21:48
Comment Good

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