Translator Reviews ( Japanese → English )

Additional info: アルファベットのA、B、Cには商品名が入ります。

Japanese

CPTは明日発送します。　
発送後にトラッキング№を連絡しますね。

前回の注文商品が到着しました。
AにHDMIケーブルが付属されていませんでした。
今回の注文商品に同梱してください。

支払いはクレジットカードの関係上29日になる予定です。


私が購入を検討しているパーツの写真を添付しました。
青く囲った部分です。

Bの型番はＲＰＭＱ90ですよね？

今回添付した写真のパーツと、
先日に見積もりをいただいた3つパーツは
同じですよね？
間違いはないですか？

BとCの販売価格はもう少し安くなりませんか？



　

English

I will dispatch CPT tomorrow.
After shipment, I will inform you of the tracking number.

My last order arrived, but I found that HDMI cable was not enclosed with A.
Please send it together with my order this time.

Payment is to be made on 29th with a credit card.

The photo of the parts I’m thinking about buying is attached for your reference.
Please refer to the place circled in blue.

The model number of B is RPMQ90, isn’t it?

I assume that the parts shown on the attached photo and the three parts whose quotation I received the other day are the same ones. Am I correct?

Could you give me a little more discount for the selling prices of B and C?

Reviews ( 1 )

lapalomatokyo rated this translation result as ★★★★★ 26 Jul 2013 at 15:49

original
I will dispatch CPT tomorrow.
After shipment, I will inform you of the tracking number.

My last order arrived, but I found that HDMI cable was not enclosed with A.
Please send it together with my order this time.

Payment is to be made on 29th with a credit card.

The photo of the parts I’m thinking about buying is attached for your reference.
Please refer to the place circled in blue.

The model number of B is RPMQ90, isn’t it?

I assume that the parts shown on the attached photo and the three parts whose quotation I received the other day are the same ones. Am I correct?

Could you give me a little more discount for the selling prices of B and C?

corrected
I will dispatch CPT tomorrow.
After shipment, I will inform you of the tracking number.

My last order arrived, but I found that THE HDMI cable was not enclosed with A.
Please send it together with my order this time.

Payment is to be made on THE 29th with a credit card.

The photo of the parts I’m thinking about buying is attached for your reference.
Please refer to the place circled in blue.

The model number of B is RPMQ90--is THAT CORRECT?

I assume that the parts shown on the attached photo and the three parts whose quotation I received the other day are the same ones. Am I correct?

Could you give me a little more discount for the selling prices of B and C?

I like this translation... the English flows very well. 個人的にisn't it?という表現よりis that correct?(とか、am I correct?)はより丁寧でこのメールのtoneに合ってる気がします。全体的完成度高い文になっていると思います。

[fumiyok]

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