長島文代 (fumiyok) — Received Reviews

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rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 05 Jun 2013 at 10:38
original xxx can be sold to the worldwide market via Internet, but I’m afraid that such a sales method will not work well in the Japanese market. Many Japanese don’t purchase from overseas sites even if some can read English to some extent. This is because they have concerns about reliability of delivery from overseas shops and about the quality of products. It will be important to translate production introduction on your web sites into Japanese or to advertise the value and brand image of your products by introducing them on influential magazines. Could you allow us to help you in selling your products in Japan?	corrected xxx can be sold to the worldwide market via Internet, but I’m afraid that such a sales method will not work well in the Japanese market. Many Japanese don’t want to purchase from overseas sites even if they can read English to some extent. This is because they have concerns over the reliability of delivery from overseas shops and the quality of products. It will be important to translate product's description on your web sites into Japanese or to advertise the commodity value and brand image of your products by exposing them to the influential magazines etc. Could you allow us to help you in promoting your products in Japan?

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English

05 Jun 2013 at 10:38

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xxx can be sold to the worldwide market via Internet, but I’m afraid that such a sales method will not work well in the Japanese market.

Many Japanese don’t purchase from overseas sites even if some can read English to some extent. This is because they have concerns about reliability of delivery from overseas shops and about the quality of products.

It will be important to translate production introduction on your web sites into Japanese or to advertise the value and brand image of your products by introducing them on influential magazines.

Could you allow us to help you in selling your products in Japan?

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xxx can be sold to the worldwide market via Internet, but I’m afraid that such a sales method will not work well in the Japanese market.

Many Japanese don’t want to purchase from overseas sites even if they can read English to some extent. This is because they have concerns over the reliability of delivery from overseas shops and the quality of products.

It will be important to translate product's description on your web sites into Japanese or to advertise the commodity value and brand image of your products by exposing them to the influential magazines etc.

Could you allow us to help you in promoting your products in Japan?

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 02 Jun 2013 at 12:17
Comment About how long will it take to reach Nagoya Port? は何が着くのかの主語があったほうがいいのではないでしょうか。 will it take for the goods (適当に it でもいいか） to reach ・...

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 17 May 2013 at 00:37
Comment 勉強になりました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 13 May 2013 at 21:31
Comment Good translation! I would change "I want to order" to "I would like to order". And "placing an order on a continuous basis" to "placin...

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 13 May 2013 at 14:35
Comment 勉強になりました。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ Japanese → English 09 May 2013 at 13:03
Comment order for のforは不要かと思いますが。

rated this translation result as ★★★★ English → Japanese 08 May 2013 at 10:20
Comment 情報筋という訳し方はなるほどです。勉強になります。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ English → Japanese 05 May 2013 at 21:16
Comment Accurate and well written imho.

rated this translation result as ★★★ Japanese → English 03 May 2013 at 15:48
Comment 細かい点で恐縮ですが、商品は、一般的には "goods"と複数形にしたほうが良いと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 03 May 2013 at 22:12
Comment Perfect

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 02 May 2013 at 11:15
Comment 上手な訳だと思います。

rated this translation result as ★★★★★ Japanese → English 01 May 2013 at 16:56
Comment It's perfect. Found just one minor mistake in the second line that you probably just missed out on. Great work

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