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Thank you for contacting.

I will send to you your product's tracking number.
We have confirmed that the product will be sent on January 21 from Tokyo Customs to America since we already have the permission to export it.
You were notified the it will arrive on March 21 but this is actually our fault.
The product is set to be delivered around January 24-27.
Depending on the situation of the transportation, I want to let you know that it may arrive late.

I am hoping that it will arrive on time for your parent's birthday.
Thank you very much.

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Thank you for contacting.

I will send to you your product's tracking number.
We have confirmed that the product will be sent on January 21 from Tokyo Customs to America since we already have the permission to export it.
You were notified the it will arrive on March 21 but this is actually our fault.
The product is set to be delivered around January 24-27.
Depending on the situation of the transportation, I want to let you know that it may arrive late.

I am hoping that it will arrive in time for your parent's birthday.
Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
I am glad to know that you were pleased with the gift.
It meant for a Christmas gift, but the delivery took long time, and it arrived very late (smile).

As you might have noticed, “〇〇〇〇” , an animation book, has very unique feature where the animation changes depend on flipping place on the book.
There is a YouTube movie about it, I will send the URL.

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I am glad to know that you were pleased with the gift.
It meant as a Christmas gift, but the delivery took long time, and it arrived very late (smile).

As you might have noticed, “〇〇〇〇” , an animation book, has very unique feature where the animation changes depend on flipping place on the book.
There is a YouTube movie about it, I will send the URL.

元の翻訳
Hello there. That setup is the original specification of the converter and can only be used manually when I confirmed it in the manufacturer's website. The following note is listed in the product description, but were you able to check the compatibility beforehand?
※Please contact the manufacturer before a successful bid about the suitability of the lens and camera.

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Hello there. That setup is the original specification of the converter and can only be used manually as I confirmed it in the manufacturer's website. The following note is listed in the product description, but did you not check the compatibility beforehand?
※Please contact the manufacturer before a successful bid about the suitability of the lens and camera.

元の翻訳
I understand. I will order as soon as it is arrived. By the way, hasn't AAA arrived yet?
Now, when does it seem BBB is released? Could you tell me the releasing day?

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I understand. I will order it as soon as it is arrived. By the way, hasn't AAA arrived yet?
Now, when does it seem BBB is released? Could you tell me the possible release date?

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OK. I will place the order as soon as it becomes available. Isn't AAA available yet?
By the way, when does BBB come to market? Please let me know the launching day.

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OK. I will place an order as soon as it becomes available. Isn't AAA available yet?
By the way, when does BBB come to market? Please let me know the launching day.

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I get it. I will make a order as soon as it is in stock. By the way, does AAA still not in stock?

Also, when will BBB's shipment be? Please tell me the shipment date.

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I get it. I will make an order as soon as it is in stock. By the way, does AAA still not in stock?

Also, when will BBB be released? Please tell me the release date.

元の翻訳
A nice trip
It was really good. The weather was fine and I enjoyed superb view. The tour guide was nice too. A day trip by bus was kind of enforced, but it was good for me to enjoy reasonably.
The shop was closed because I partcipated in it on Sunday. If you want to go shopping, you feel bored a little bit.
I booked a lunch on the tour without checking the circumstance of the place. But I shouldn't have booked there, and should have looked for a restaurant which has a good atmosphere.
I think it depends on how many tourists there are on the day when you join, All of the restaurant were available at the begining of April when I join.

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A nice trip
It was really good. The weather was fine and I enjoyed superb view. The tour guide was nice too. A day trip by bus was kind of enforced, but it was good for me to enjoy reasonably.
The shop was closed because I partcipated in it on Sunday. If you want to go shopping, you feel bored a little bit.
I booked a lunch on the tour without checking the circumstance of the place. But I shouldn't have booked there, and should have looked for a restaurant which has a good atmosphere.
I think it depends on how many tourists there are on the day when you join, most of the restaurants were available at the beginning of April when I participated.

元の翻訳
This pen has already ink inside, so you can use it soon.
The color of ink is black.
This ballpoint pen can change lead. ( The maker is Sunstar Stationery in Japan, but any other maker will be OK.)

And I would like to tell you one more thing. The shipment is the way you wanted.
So please wait feeling at ease.

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This pen has already ink inside, so you can use it immediately.
The color of ink is black.
This ballpoint pen can change lead. ( The maker is Sunstar Stationery in Japan, but some of other manufacturers may fit.)

I forgot to tell you one thing. We shipped with the method you wanted.
So please do not worry about it.

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I have a feature request for Next video auto play.
- When you finish playing the last video, it will go back the the page where is the first video and begin playing again (From the video in the same category)
- Repeat playing the same video.

Then it would be good if the reinitialization state could be turned off.
Since there is a lot of similar themes, if some original features could be implemented it would sell very well, I think.
Please take it in consideration as a request.

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I have feature requests for Next video auto play.
- When you finish playing the last video, it will go back the the page where is the first video and begin playing again (From the video in the same category)
- Repeat playing the same video.

Then it would be good if the reinitialization state could be turned off.
Since there is a lot of similar themes, if some original features could be implemented it would sell very well, I think.
Please take it in consideration as a request.

元の翻訳
I have a request about feature of Next video auto play.

A feature that goes back to the first video page once the final video is finished and replay the first video (in video of the same category)
A feature that enables consecutive video replay

In addition, it would be better if I could set up the initial state OFF.
There are many similar themes, so I think it will sell well if an original feature is implemented.
Please refer my opinion as a request.

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I have a request about features of Next video auto play.

A feature that goes back to the first video page once the final video is finished and replay the first video (video in the same category)
A feature that enables consecutive video replay

In addition, it would be better if I could set up the initial state OFF.
There are many similar themes, so I think it will sell well if an original feature is implemented.
Please refer my opinion as a request.

元の翻訳
We apologize for keeping you waiting.
We truly regret to disappoint you.
We are working hard to get the item you ordered delivered by 15th so please bear with us a little longer until the arrival of the item.

We have to tell you a bad news.
The item was not the 20th anniversary version.
We checked with numbers of suppliers but couldn't have 20th anniversary version in stock.
We will make sure to refund you soon.
As a mere token of our apology, we'd like to offer you a complimentary Sailormoon pouch if you would like.
We apologize for not being able to meet your expectation this time.
We look forward to hearing from you.

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We apologize for keeping you waiting.
We truly regret to disappoint you.
We pray for the item you ordered to be delivered by 15th, so please bear with us a little longer until the arrival of the item.

We have to tell you a bad news.
The item was not the 20th anniversary version.
We checked with numbers of suppliers but couldn't have the 20th anniversary version in stock.
We will make sure to refund you soon.
As a mere token of our apology, we'd like to offer you a complimentary Sailormoon pouch if you would like.
We apologize for not being able to meet your expectation this time.
We look forward to hearing from you.

元の翻訳
We are terribly sorry to have you waiting.
We understand your feelings.
Right now we could only keep praying that the merchandise would arrive by the 15th of January.
Please wait just a little more until it reached us.

We also have an unfortunate event to report.
It turns out that the merchandise we could arrange for is not the 20th anniversary version.
We contacted various suppliers to confirm the situation, yet we failed to arrange for the 20th anniversary version.
We will refund you immediately.
We also considered sending you a Sailor Moon pouch free of charge as an apology, would that be all right with you?
We are sorry that we could not answer your expectation this time.
We await your reply.

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We are terribly sorry to have you waiting.
We understand your feelings.
Right now we could only keep praying that the merchandise would arrive by the 15th of January.
Please wait just a little more until it reaches you.

We also have an unfortunate report.
It turns out that the merchandise we could arrange for is not the 20th anniversary version.
We contacted various suppliers for stocks, yet we failed to arrange the 20th anniversary version.
We will refund you immediately.
We also considered sending you a Sailor Moon pouch free of charge as an apology, would that be all right with you?
We are sorry that we could not answer your expectation this time.
We await your reply.

元の翻訳
There was no crack on the razor's grip when I sent out it to you.
Plastic grips, with old razors in particular, tend to get broken. If I fixed them, I took the grips apart and then glue them together with the glue for plastic and sandpaper them.

However, I do understand you felt sorry. So, I would like to offer free delivery charge
when your next purchase.

And I am pleased to announce that the razors manufactured by the same company have arrived.

It is rare that you meet a perfect grindstone with one chance. There is no way but to find good ones by purchasing several times. ↵
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Sincerely yours,

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There was no crack on the razor's grip that I sent you.
Plastic grips, with old razors in particular, tend to get broken. If I fixed them, I took the grips apart and then glue them together with the glue for plastic and sandpaper them.

However, I do understand you felt sorry. So, I would like to offer you a free delivery charge
when you purchase next time.

And I am pleased to announce that the razors manufactured by the same company have arrived.

It is rare that you meet a perfect grindstone with one chance. There is no way but to find good ones by purchasing several times.

元の翻訳
Hello. I ordered two of 〇〇 and one of them reached me today.
Have you already went out the other one?
Please let me know the tracking number.

If you have not sent it out yet, will you do so asap?
Awaiting your reply.

Best regards,

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Hello. I ordered two of 〇〇 and one of them reached me today.
Have you already sent out the other one?
Please let me know the tracking number.

If you have not sent it out yet, will you do so asap?
Awaiting your reply.

Best regards,

元の翻訳
Dear my friend,

Thank you for your continuous support.
As for your ordered fishing rod, the size is too big to send by EMS. So, I will obtain some quotations from a few delivery companies and find the cheapest delivery charges. Thank you for your patience.

I will be able to let you know it next week.

I will ship the item ordered before (as below) today.

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Dear my friend,

Thank you for your continuous support.
As for your ordered fishing rod, the size is too big to send by EMS. So, I will obtain some quotations from a few delivery companies and find the cheapest delivery charge. Thank you for your patience.

I will be able to let you know it next week.

I will ship the item ordered before (as below) today.

元の翻訳
Dear friend,

Thank you as always.
With regards to your requested fishing rod this time, it has exceeded the shipping size of EMS so please kindly wait for a little longer while I am checking out the cheapest quotations for other delivery companies.

I think I can provide you with an answer within next week.

As for the previous requests, I will ship the following items today.

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Dear friend,

Thank you as always.
With regards to your requested fishing rod this time, it has exceeded the shipping size of EMS so please kindly wait for a little longer while I am checking out the cheapest quotations from several delivery companies.

I think I can provide you with an answer within next week.

As for the previous requests, I will ship the following items today.

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A is not being sold in Japan.
Because of that, we have decided to continue stocking up on it after the trial sale.
B is being sold in Japan as of the moment.
We are thinking of selling both A and B in Japan.
We intend to buy adapters with the PSE mark from another company.
Is the price of B without the PSE mark at 14 dollars?

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A is not being sold in Japan.
Because of that, we will decide to continue purchasing it after the trial sale.
B is being sold in Japan as of the moment.
We are thinking of selling both A and B in Japan.
We intend to buy adapters with the PSE mark from another company.
Is the price of B without the PSE mark at 14 dollars?

元の翻訳
The product A is not available in Japan.
So, after its test-marketing, I will make a decision whether I will keep purchasing or not.
Product B is sold in Japan.
I'm thinking about selling both product A and B in Japan.
I will purchase adapters with PSE mark from another company.
Is the price of product B without PSE mark 14 dollars?

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The product A is not available in Japan.
So, after its test-marketing, I will make a decision whether I will keep purchasing it or not.
Product B is currently sold in Japan.
I'm thinking about selling both product A and B in Japan.
I will purchase adapters with a PSE mark from another company.
Is the price of product B without a PSE mark 14 dollars?

元の翻訳
To those who are person in charge

Hello, my name is XX
I send you this mail to inform you that I would like my account of the store to be closed

If any message is necessary, please refer the following

The reason I would like to close my account is that
I considered of the direction of business and found there is no need to remain it.

Thank you very much

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To whom it may concern,

Hello, my name is XX.
I send you this email to inform you that I would like my account of the store to be closed

Below is the information needed.

The reason I would like to close my account is that
I considered of the direction of business and found there is no need to keep it.

Thank you very much

元の翻訳
To person in charge.

Thank you for helping our business. My name is ●●.
Because I wanted to close my account I use now,I sent this mail.

Below is the information which is needed.

The reason that I want to close my account,I judged it is not need when I considered the direction of our business in the future.

Maybe it mail will bother you, Please consideration.

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To person in charge.

Thank you for helping our business. My name is ●●.
Because I wanted to close my account I use now,I sent this mail.

Below is the information needed.

The reason that I want to close my account, I judged it is not necessary when I considered the direction of our business in the future.

It may bother you. Thank you very much.

元の翻訳
Dear Sir or Madam

Thank you for your continuous support.　I'm **.
I just sent a mail because I'd like to ask to close my store account.

Here is a required information below.

The reason I'd like to close account is I decided we don't need it for our future business.

Sorry for bother you and thank you in advance.

Sincerely.

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Dear Sir or Madam

Thank you for your continuous support.　I am **.
I just sent an email because I would like to ask to close my store account.

Here is a required information below.

The reason I would like to close my account is I decided we do not need it for our future business.

Sorry for bother you and thank you in advance.

Sincerely.

元の翻訳
To whom it may concern

I am ●●, writting because I would like to delete my account that I am using currently.
The necessary information is below.
The reason why I would like to delete the account is that I determined it is not necessary for the future direction of my business
I am sorry to inconvenience you, but I appreciate your reply. Thank you.

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To whom it may concern

I am ●●, writting because I would like to delete my account that I am using currently.
The necessary information is below.
The reason why I would like to delete the account is that I determined it is not necessary for the future direction of my business.
I am sorry to inconvenience you, but I appreciate your reply. Thank you.

元の翻訳
To the person in charge,

How do you do? My name is xx.
I want to close the store account that I am currently using so I am sending you this email.

The required information are as follows:

The reason why I want to close the account is because I don't think I need it anymore when I was thinking about the future direction of my business.

Sorry to trouble you, but I request for your support.

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To the person in charge,

How do you do? My name is xx.
I want to close the store account that I am currently using so I am sending you this email.

The required information are as follows:

The reason why I want to close the account is because I don't think I need it anymore when I thought about the future direction of my business.

Sorry to trouble you, but I request for your support.