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Please fill out an application form and send it to us. Our general information service will get back to you by email.
Please note that the reservation within two weeks before your requested date may not be accepted.
This form is displayed in frame structure and the key mark of SSL is not shown on the browser, however, please be assured that it is encrypted during transmission.
Other optional examination will be added based upon the requester's choise.
(Please not that the examination fee is to be paid by individuals.)

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Please fill out an application form and send it to us. Our general information service will get back to you by email.
Please note that the reservation within two weeks before your requested date may not be accepted.
This form is displayed in frame structure and the key mark of SSL is not shown on the browser, however, please be assured that it is encrypted during transmission.
Other optional examination will be added based upon the requester's choice.
(Please note that the examination fee is to be paid by individuals.)

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The Tokaido Shinkansen bullet train (Tokyo - Shin-Osaka) will gain the highest speed at 285 km/h for 23 years next spring. Because of the many curves on the track, the highest speed has remained 270 km/h since the train "Nozomi" appeared in 1992.
It will be the 50 year anniversary as of 1st of next month. Breaking this record is a tribute to the pursuit of "the technology of turning smoothly and stop rapidly."

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The Tokaido Shinkansen bullet train (Tokyo - Shin-Osaka) will reach the highest speed of 285 km/h after an interval of 23 years in next spring. Because of the many curves on the track, the highest speed has remained 270 km/h since the train "Nozomi" appeared in 1992.
It will be the 50 year anniversary as of 1st of next month. Breaking this record is a tribute to the pursuit of "the technology of turning smoothly and stop rapidly."

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Selling and selecting items

Selling items (How to place items)

Amazon allows not only ourselves to place items, but also individuals and people who belong to other companies to sell items.

You can sell items freely at our secured site named Amazon seller central.

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Regarding: Selling and selecting items

Selling items (How to list items)

Amazon allows not only [you] to list items, but also individuals and people who belong to other companies to sell items.

You can sell items freely at our secured site named Amazon seller central.

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If you type "japan import" in the blank around the center of the website and click on "Search", hundreds of thousands of Japanese products will be displayed as below.

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If you type "japan import" in the blank around the center of the website and click on "Search", hundreds of thousands of Japanese products will be displayed as the below page.

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Click on "INVENTORY" on the top of the screen, and copy and paste the ASIN, and search.

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Click on "INVENTORY" at the screen top, and paste the copied ASIN, and search.

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The sales price in USD at Amazon.com (including shipping fee) ×80-1000 ＞ The sales price in JPY at Amazon.co.jp.
If the the sales price at Amazon.com is 70USD, not more than 4600JPY is fine.
You can search the respective selling sites by entering ASIN.

If you have a different price range from other sellers and have a profit, follow the procedure of relist, and modify the price and place 1 for quantity.

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The sales price in USD at Amazon.com (including shipping fee) is ($)×80-1000 ＞ The sales price in JPY at Amazon.co.jp.
If the the sales price at Amazon.com is 70USD, not more than 4600 JPY is fine.
You can search the respective selling sites by entering the ASIN.

If you have a different price range from other sellers and have a profit, follow the procedure to re-list, and modify the price and place 1 in the quantity.

元の翻訳
The sales price in USD at Amazon.com (including shipping fee) ×80-1000 ＞ The sales price in JPY at Amazon.co.jp.
If the the sales price at Amazon.com is 70USD, not more than 4600JPY is fine.
You can search the respective selling sites by entering ASIN.

If you have a different price range from other sellers and have a profit, follow the procedure of relist, and modify the price and place 1 for quantity.

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The sales price in USD at Amazon.com (including shipping fee) ($)×80-1000 ＞ is the sales price in JPY at Amazon.co.jp.
If the the sales price at Amazon.com is 70USD, not more than 4600JPY is fine.
You can search the respective selling sites by entering ASIN.

If you have a different price range from other sellers and have a profit, follow the procedure of re-list, and modify the price and place 1 in the quantity area.