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元の翻訳
ABC-MART 涉谷店獨家先行發售

『ayumi hamasaki PREMIUM SHOWCASE 〜Feel the love〜』（于國立代代木競技場第一體育館）的公演期間[从7月3日至6日（共計4天）]，本品將於ABC-MART涉谷店內數量限定的進行先行發售！

■期間：7月3日(週四) ～ 6日(週日) ※共計4天時間
■地點：ABC-MART 涉谷店
※ABC-MART的其他店鋪將不予發售。
※不包括國立代代木競技場第一體育館內的商品的販賣。

修正後
ABC-MART 涉谷店獨家先行發售

『ayumi hamasaki PREMIUM SHOWCASE 〜Feel the love〜』（於國立代代木競技場第一體育館）的公演期間[從7月3日至6日（共計4天）]，本品將於ABC-MART涉谷店內數量限定的進行先行發售！

■期間：7月3日(週四) ～ 6日(週日) ※共計4天時間
■地點：ABC-MART 涉谷店
※ABC-MART的其他店鋪將不予發售。
※不包括國立代代木競技場第一體育館內的商品的販賣。

元の翻訳
こんにちは！
遂にアイテムが到着しました．
もし私にあなたのPayPalに登録したメールアドレスを与えれば、32ユーロをお返しします．
さようなら！

修正後
こんにちは！
遂にアイテムが到着しました．
もし私にあなたのPayPalに登録したメールアドレスを教えていただければ、32ユーロをお返しします．
さようなら！

元の翻訳
Because the Japanese manual has been created so we attached it to this email.
In addition, it also attached a warranty of the product.
I'd like you to check the file for insuring there is no problem when printing.
When characters are readable, the font size is flexible as you like.

Please send an invoice with the contents of the following:
Quantity: 168 pcs
Documents included: Japanese manual, product warranty.
※ It will be paid by remittance this time. Please let us know the account information.
※ Please let us know the delivery time.
※ Because there are several bundled items missed, please bundle 5 parts each time.

Thank you

修正後
As the Japanese manual has been created, we have attached it to this email.
In addition, a warranty of the product has been attached too.
I'd like you to check the file to ensure there is no problem when printing.
As long as the characters can be read, we have no requirements on the print size.

Please send an invoice for the following:
Quantity: 168 pcs
Documents included: Japanese manual, product warranty.
※ It will be paid by remittance this time. Please let us know the account information.
※ Please let us know the delivery time.
※ Because there are several bundled items missed, please bundle 5 parts each time.

Thank you

元の翻訳
Hello！

I would like to know when will my ordered goods be shipped.
It is a very greatful for me if you can make the shipment early.

Best regards

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Hello！

I would like to know when will my ordered goods be shipped.
I will be very grateful if you could ship out my order early.

Best regards

元の翻訳
There are several demands and questions I want to ask.

1. The mobile phone's menu can not close when it opened. Is this a specification?
2. Does this mobile phone holds the function for posting(Twitter.etc)?
3. When mobile access, would it switch automatically to the layout of the mobile version

1. I'd like to have this feature that if I use Admin can I choose to display the image, such as user-contributed image, whether to hold them.
2. I want to put the title of the article to the post, such as Twitter.
3. I want the ABC links can be old articles.I think it is not so good When I press the ABC links button the page doesn't change since we have a latest post.　

修正後
There are several requests and questions I would like to ask.

1. The menu does not close when opened from a mobile device. Is this a specification?
2. Is there a function for posting from a mobile device?
3. When accessed by mobile device, would it switch automatically to the layout of the mobile version

1.Adminがユーザーが投稿した画像などを表示するか、保留にするかを選択できるような機能↵
2.Twitterなどの投稿に記事のタイトルをいれたい↵
3.ABCのリンクを古い記事にしてほしい↵
一番新しい投稿でABCのリンクを押してもページが変わらないのは良くないと思います↵
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1. I'd like to have this feature that if the Admin can choose to display or put on hold images, such as user-contributed images.
2. I want to put the title of the article to posts, such as Twitter.
3. I want the ABC links to be archived. I think it is not so good When I press the ABC links button and the page doesn't change on the latest post.