treediagram (treediagram) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Sorry to have kept you waiting.
I asked supplier, and they said that this week is vacation, so they will resume business from next week. Therefore, we will send out cargo about 21st.
Sorry to have kept you waiting, but we ask for your kind understanding. Thank you for your consideration.

修正後
Sorry to have kept you waiting.
I asked [article] supplier, and they said that this week they are vacation, so they will resume business from next week. Therefore, we will send out cargo around the 21st.
Sorry to have kept you waiting (repetitive), but we ask for your kind understanding. Thank you for your consideration.

元の翻訳
小米ブランドのインドでの影響：サムソン、モトローラを値切りに追い込む

小米のインドでの最初のスマートフォン販売はMi 3の数字を見る限りはとても少数だった。短い間に小米はその名前を正しく発音せれずに人々の間で話題になった。小米の解かりやすい影響は中国企業のインド市場への参入である。

修正後
小米ブランドのインドでの影響：サムソン、モトローラに新商品の発売・値切りをさせる

小米のインドでの最初のスマートフォン販売はMi 3の数字を見る限りはとても少数だった。一ヶ月未満で小米は、その名前を正しく発音できる人は多くないとはいえ、人々の間で話題になった。はっきりしているのは、中国企業のインド市場への参入による影響である。

元の翻訳
Basically, I am limiting the category.
Because, this category will have high amount of access,
Do you have any suggestion?
Basically, I don't upload movie which there is no needs, because they are meaningless.

The quality of movie is okey with standard of smart phone, digital camera.
It is better to have higher pixel number.

修正後
Basically, I am limiting the category.
Because, this category will have high amount of access [sentence fragment],
Do you have any suggestion?
Basically, I don't upload movie which there is no needs [awkward, ungrammatical], because they are meaningless [differs from the original].

The quality of a movie is okey [spelling] with standard of smart phone, digital camera [this is not what the original says].
It is better to have a higher pixel number.

元の翻訳
you mean you are going to give invoice and receipt separately? If it's about tariff,then invoice is enough.↵
And there is no space for writing delivery fee. So I will write payment for goods as $150.
And I can not send except the address that registered on Paypal. If you really wants to send other address, then please change the address before you make up accounts.

修正後
Do you mean you are going to attach the receipt separate from the invoice? If it's a problem with customs, I think the invoice will be enough. And there is no space for writing the delivery fee, so I will write the payment for the goods as $150.
Also, I can not send to any address other than the one registered on PayPal. If you really want it sent to another address, please change the address registered on PayPal before you make the payment.

元の翻訳
Gmail より
これはあなたが二回目にアマゾンでパイレーツ品を売っているのを報告されました。前回あなたはこれらのものを売らないと保証したにも関わらず続けてこういった行為を行っている。あなたはラインセンスをもらっていないマインクラフトの商品を売ってはいけない。もしあなたは正規品を売るつもりがあるのなら次のリンクを開けると良い。

同時にあなたがあなたのセラーIDとE-mailを提出しない限りは我々はあなたの訴えをBに伝えることができない。

修正後
Gmail より
これはあなたが二回目にアマゾンで海賊版を売っているのを報告されました。前回あなたはこれらのものを売らないと約束したにも関わらずこういった行為を行い続けている。あなたはラインセンスを受けていないマインクラフトの商品を売ってはいけない。もしあなたは正規品を売るつもりがあるのなら次のリンクを開けると良い。

同時にあなたがあなたのＢアカウントと関連したセラーIDとE-mailアドレスを提出しない限りは、我々はあなたの訴えを解決するためにBに連絡を取ることができない。

元の翻訳
Product with the combination of color of OO are black and pink are selling on the maker's homepage.

But, the list of wholesale only shows the combination of black and gray.

Where I can buy the combination of black and pink?
My customer wants it.

This is also not on the list of wholesale.

My customer wants it, so where can I buy it?

修正後
The product with the combination of color of OO are black and pink and is being sold on the maker's homepage.

But, the wholesale list only shows the combination of black and gray.

Where I can buy the product with the combination of black and pink?
My customer wants it.

This is also not on the wholesale list.

My customer wants it, so where can I buy it?