tomatjp (tomatjp) — もらったレビュー

元の翻訳
Yesterday, I talked to Valencia about the order via live chat.
The following are what we talked about.

I asked the UPS about the two packages, but they said they lost.
They said the sender needs to contact UPS by phone.
Please ask your vendor to contact UPS.

I reorder the same rug as Order#60. (because I'm always asked to do by your company.)
Please explain the situation to your vendor and ask them to deliver my order by February 19.

I'd like to cancel the two rugs that weren't delivered.
Please process the refund.

修正後
Yesterday, I talked to Valencia about this order via live chat.
The following are what we talked about.

I asked UPS about the two packages, but they said they lost.
They said the sender needs to contact UPS by phone.
Please ask your vendor to contact UPS.

I reordered the same rug as Order#60, (because you always asked me to do so).
Please explain the situation to your vendor and ask them to deliver my order by February 19.

I'd like to cancel the two rugs that weren't delivered.
Please process the refund.

元の翻訳
You can book a private bathroom by filling in our room number on the time table sheet. Other guests were also just doing that without any hesitation. That kind of casual way was very good for us and made us feel comfortable.

The location was also great. It was located just a 10-minute walk away from Togendai Station, which is the final stop of the ropeway. And from Togendai, you can easily access to "Kaizokusen (Pirate Ship)" that cruises Ashinoko (Lake). It was a wonderful time on our check-in day when we were going up to Togendai, looking at the sunset from the ropeway.

Thank you very much to all the staff members for the great time!

修正後
You can book a private bathroom just by filling in your room number on the time table sheet. Other guests were also just doing that without any hesitation. That kind of casual way was very good for us and made us feel comfortable.

The location was also great. It was located just a 10-minute walk away from Togendai Station, which is the final stop of the ropeway. And from Togendai, you can easily access to "Kaizokusen (Pirate Ship)" that cruises Ashinoko (Lake). It was a wonderful time on our check-in day when we were going up to Togendai, looking at the sunset from the ropeway.

Thank you very much to all the staff members for the great time!

元の翻訳
No problem.

An American address is fine.
I will start processing the payment once 5 items are ready. I'm looking forward to letting me know the status.

修正後
No problem.

The address in the US is fine.
I will start settle an immediate payment once 5 items are ready. I'm looking forward to hearing from you about the status.

元の翻訳
*"Family Seat" is prepared for small kids and people who want to sit and see the live, so please take a seat while the live is ongoing.
*It does not include seats that guarantee a close distance from the stage.
*Family Seats are only available at Kodagumi and playroom.
*Elementary students or older are same rate as adults for all tickets. (If you wish for your child to have their own seat, a ticket is required even for children under elementary school)

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*"Family Seats" are for small kids and people who want to sit and see the show, so please take a seat while the show is ongoing.
*Does not include seats that are guaranteed to be close to the stage.
*Family Seats are only available at Kodagumi and playroom.
*Elementary students or older are the same rate as adults for all tickets. (If you wish for your child to have their own seat, a ticket is required even for children younger than elementary school age)