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元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
As described in the item description please wait until the period of the 7th -22nd.
In some cases, there is also a possibility the item may take longer depending on custom etc.
Thank you.

修正後
Thank you for your message.
As described in the item description please wait until the period of between the 7th -22nd.
In some cases, there is also a possibility the item may take longer depending on customs inspection, etc.
Thank you.

元の翻訳
Thank you for your message.
For the item you ordered, please wait the delivery for 7 to 22 days as stated in the shipping information.
The delivery may take more than expected in case of going through the customs' inspection etc.
Thank you for your understanding.

修正後
Thank you for your message.
For the item you ordered, please wait the delivery for 7 to 22 days as stated in the shipping information.
The delivery may take more than expected in case of going through the customs inspection etc.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
I understand your opinion.
Then, may I import and sale JA products in Japan under my own responsibility?

Many meisters inJapan do not know the existance of JA.
In addition, they are less people who make inquiry to JA by oneself and import (purchase) the products from Germany.

By advertising and sale your products in Japan, I think I can increase customers in Japan.
I think Japanese market scale is as large as that in Germany.

I will import and sale your products under my own responsibiliy. Could you accept my proposal?
Could you please supply your products by 30% discount?

修正後
I understand your opinion.
Then, may I import and sell JA products in Japan under my own responsibility?

Many meisters in Japan do not know the existance of JA.
In addition, there are fewer people who make inquiry to JA by themselves and import (purchase) the products from Germany.

By advertising and sale your products in Japan, I think I can increase customers in Japan.
I think Japanese market scale is as large as that in Germany.

I will import and sell your products under my own responsibiliy. Could you accept my proposal?
Could you also supply your products by 30% discount?

元の翻訳
I understood your request.
Then, may I take responsibility to export the products of JA by myself ↵
and sell them in Japan?

Many of Japanese masters don't know about JA.
Moreover, there are few masters who make contact with JA and export them from Germany.

I'm sure that I can increase the number of customers by my advertisement in Japan.
And I guess the market of Japan is as large as that of Germany.

I take all responsibility. Why don't you taking this offer?
Will you supply me it and discount it by 30%?↵

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I understood your request.
Then, may I take the full responsibility for importing and selling the JA products in Japan?

Many of Japanese masters don't know about JA.
Moreover, there are only few masters who make contact with JA and export them from Germany.

I'm sure that I can increase the number of customers through my advertisement in Japan.
And I guess the Japanese market is as large as that of Germany.

I will import/sell those products at my own risk. Would you please accept my proposal?
Would you please supply supply those products by making a 30% discount off the price?

元の翻訳
Thank you very much for your waiting. Since I ordered to maker, I 've just realized that the lauch date has been postponed.
The launch date will be 29 August 2014.
Originally,it was planned to be launched by June which made me misunderstood that it already had been launched.
I would like to appologize for it.
Please select whether you want to keep waiting or cancel.
Sincerely yours,

修正後
Thank you very much for your waiting. Since I ordered to manufacturer, I've just realized that the lauch date has been postponed.
The revised launch date will be 29 August, 2014.
Originally, it was planned to be launched in June, which made me misunderstood that it already had been launched.
I appologize for it.
Please select whether you wish to continue waiting or cancel your order.
Sincerely yours,

元の翻訳
Thank you for your patience.
As we confirmed the order with the maker, it turned out the sales date has been postponed.
The release date is August 29, 2014.

There was a misunderstanding on our side that it was supposed to be released in June, so it has already been sold in the market.
We sincerely apologize for the confusion.

Kindly please choose whether you will wait, or cancel the order.
Thank you for your understanding.

修正後
Thank you for your patience.
As we confirmed the order with the manufacturer, it turned out the sales date has been postponed.
The revised release date is August 29, 2014.

There was a misunderstanding on our side that it was supposed to be released in June, so it has already been sold in the market.
We sincerely apologize for the confusion.

Please kindly choose whether you wish to wait, or cancel the order.
Thank you for your understanding.

元の翻訳
eメールありがとうございます。
ご注文の品が届いていないこと、お詫びいたします。私どもは貴殿の注文の品物について内部で調査を開始し、UPSに問題の解決を要請しています。UPSが私どもに解決策を提示してくるまでに、7～10営業日かかってしまうことをご承知おきください。貴殿の品物の所在がわかり次第、すぐご連絡いたします。また、仮に品物が見つからなかった場合、代替品の発送がいつ届くかをお知らせいたします。

修正後
eメールありがとうございます。
ご注文の品が届いていないことをお詫び申し上げます。私どもは貴殿の注文の品物について内部で調査を開始し、UPSに問題の解決を要請しています。UPSが私どもに解決策を提示してくるまでに、7～10営業日かかってしまうことをご承知おきください。貴殿の品物の所在がわかり次第、すぐご連絡いたします。また、仮に品物が見つからなかった場合、代替品の発送がいつ届くかをお知らせいたします。

元の翻訳
下記の価格をご確認下さい。
ＡＡ商品およびＢＢ商品に関しては２−3週間後に在庫が出来る予定です。
もしあなたが前もって購入したい場合、支払いのために見積りインボイス及び発送ができる日付を送ります。
(1個に当たり$60-250個以上の数の値段です。)

修正後
下記の価格をご確認下さい。
ＡＡ商品およびＢＢ商品に関しては２−3週間後に在庫が出来る予定です。
もしあなたが前もって購入したい場合、支払いのために見積りインボイス及び発送ができる日付を送ります。
(単価$60、250個以上の数の値段です。)

元の翻訳
ちょうど休暇から戻ってきたところ、不在配達連絡票が二回分ありました。荷物は７/３０に到着すると思っていたのですが。もし、USPSが荷物の返品の可否をたずねてきたら、拒否してください。7/28には、荷物を受け取りに行けるので。

修正後
ちょうど休暇から戻ってきたところなのですが、船積通知書が2通届いていました。荷物は７/３０に到着すると思っていたのですが。もし、USPSが荷物の返品の可否をたずねてきたら、拒否してください。7/28には、荷物を受け取りに行けるので。

元の翻訳
先ほど休暇から戻り、２件の宅配不在通知がありました。　
７/３０頃になると思っていました。　もしUPSがこのパッケージの返却を希望するか聞いてきたら
希望していないと伝えてください。7/28にはそのパッケージを取りに行きます。

修正後
先ほど休暇から戻り、２件の船積通知書がありました。　
７/３０頃になると思っていました。　もしUSPSがこのパッケージの返送を希望するか聞いてきたら
希望していないと伝えてください。7/28にはそのパッケージを取りに行きます。

元の翻訳
［CD］RZCD-59646 ￥1,200(tax not inclusive)

［CD］
01. Introduction 〜Check IN〜
02. HOTEL
03. Interlude 〜Secret Room〜
04. MONEY IN MY BAG
05. Interlude 〜Last Night Dream〜
06. TURN AROUND

※Fab club 「Koda Gumi」/「Playroom」Limited version
［CD＋DVD］RZC1-59647/B　￥1,800(Tax not inclusive)

修正後
［CD］RZCD-59646 ￥1,200(tax not inclusive)

［CD］
01. Introduction 〜Check IN〜
02. HOTEL
03. Interlude 〜Secret Room〜
04. MONEY IN MY BAG
05. Interlude 〜Last Night Dream〜
06. TURN AROUND

※Fan club 「Koda Gumi」/「Playroom」Limited version
［CD＋DVD］RZC1-59647/B　￥1,800(Tax not inclusive)

元の翻訳
Could you accept my proposal of exclusive distributorship in Japan?

2. Could you supply the JA’s tools lower than current wholesale price?
I would like to have around 30% of discount from the current wholesale price because the prices of them are about 50% higher than that of those very cheap American made.
I appreciate if you could consider it. I would like to purchase them at lower price as much as possible to give them price competiveness for familiarizing them in Japan.

3. Could you send me digital images of tools published on the catalogue?
I would like to used them on the internet shop in Japan.

That all I would like to request you to take them in consideration.

修正後
Could you accept my proposal of exclusive distributorship in Japan?

2. Could you supply the JA products lower than current wholesale price?
I would like to have around 30% of discount from the current wholesale price because the prices of them are about 50% higher than that of those very cheap American made.
I appreciate if you could consider it. I would like to purchase them at lower price as much as possible to give them price competiveness for familiarizing them in Japan.

3. Could you send me the digital images of the products published on the catalogue?
I would like to used them on the internet shop in Japan.

That is all I would like you to take them in consideration.

元の翻訳
Both No.1234 and No.1345 have a stock.
I am looking forward to your consideration.

修正後
Both No.1234 and No.1345 are in stock.
I am looking forward to your consideration.

元の翻訳
I am afraid but we can not ship by cash-on-delivery. I will send the invoice again from paypal, could you pay by credit card, not by e-check? According to paypal, your payment will be processed right away if you pay by credit card. For the item A, I will put it out to tender in 250 USD. Please, note that freight etc. will be added to the price, even if we succeed the tender in 250 USD. We can send together with the item B. I will inform you after the auction.

修正後
I am afraid but we can not ship by cash-on-delivery. I will send the invoice again from paypal, could you pay by credit card, not by e-check? According to paypal, your payment will be processed right away if you pay by credit card. For the item A, I will put it out to tender in 250 USD. Please, note that freight etc. will be added to the price, even if we succeed the tender in 250 USD. We can ship together with the item B. I will inform you after the auction.

元の翻訳
8/17(SUN.) "a-nation island powered by in jelly Aisa Progress ~Departure~" Tickets will be on sale from 7/12(Sat.) am 10:00.

Below is the official website of Asia Progress.
【URL】http://www.asia-progress2014.com/

Date: 2014/8/17 (SUN.)
Open 15:00/ Start 16:00
The venue: Tokyo Yoyogi National Stadium Yoyogi Gymnasiums 1

【The artists starring in the performance】

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8/17(SUN) "a-nation island powered by in jelly Asia Progress ~Departure~" Tickets will be on sale from 7/12(Sat) at 10:00 am!!!

Below is the official website of Asia Progress.
【URL】http://www.asia-progress2014.com/

Date: 2014/8/17 (SUN)
Venue opens at 15:00/ Show starts from 16:00
The venue: Tokyo Yoyogi National Gymnasium Yoyogi Gymnasium 1

【The artists starring in the performance】

元の翻訳
Is it well known among overseas fans that A is not sure on wether to continue XYZ group or not?(B and C agrees immediately)
I don' t know what makes A confused on to continue or not, but maybe A just want to continue as a pure idol.
If A did not agree to continue, XYZ group would be over at that time. So I am grateful that A decides to continue.
This is only my guess, I think even right now A might still wants to continue as a pure idol.

修正後
Is it well known among overseas fans that A is not sure on wether to continue XYZ group or not? (B and C agreed to continue immediately)
I don' t know what confused A to continue or not, but maybe A just wanted to continue as a pure idol.
If A did not agree to continue, XYZ group would have been over at that time. So I am grateful that A decides to continue.
This is only my guess, but I think even right now A might still have a strong will to continue as a pure idol.

元の翻訳
Item description as follows.

AABB Type ACOG TA31 Replica New Model Focused Tube Scope.
Compatible with 20mm rails.
Unlike traditional battery-powered units, the scope specification actually uses the focus tube.
No need for batteries as the light enters through the fiber tube, to illuminate the cross shaped reticle.
Same as the original, it automatically adjusts the amount of light around the reticle for the best result.
** It will not illuminate in the dark
Therefore there is no excessive bleeding or reflection from the reticle, making it clear and easy, promoting better accuracy in shooting.

修正後
Item description as follows.

AABB Type ACOG TA31 Replica New Model Focused Tube Scope.
Compatible with 20mm rails.
Unlike traditional battery-powered units, the scope specification actually uses the focus tube.
No need for batteries as the light enters through the fiber tube, to illuminate the cross shaped reticle.
Same as the original, it automatically adjusts the amount of light around the reticle for the best result.
* It will not illuminate in the dark
Therefore there is no excessive bleeding or reflection from the reticle, making it clear and easy, promoting better accuracy in shooting.

元の翻訳
Thank you for the nice offer. I'm considering of purchasing those products, but my PayPal account has been sentenced for examination since a couple days ago. The person in charge of the examination told me that it had to be done due to my recent transaction with a large amount of money. It seems that the examination will take a few days, so by the beginning of August, my PayPal account would be reactivated and I would be able to send you money. Could you please wait until then?

Best regards,

修正後
Thank you for the nice offer. I'm considering of purchasing those products, but my PayPal account has been on restriction since a couple days ago. The person in charge of the screening process told me that it had to be done due to my recent transaction with a large amount of money. It seems that the screening will take a few more days, so by the beginning of August, my PayPal account would be reactivated and I would be able to send you the money. Could you please wait until then?

Best regards,

元の翻訳
I would like to upload Avatar's drawing by myself. Then, if there have SiteMap and user's browsing pages will be better.

修正後
I would like to upload Avatar's drawing by myself. Then, if there were SiteMap and user's browsing pages, it would be better.

元の翻訳
スズキ様

発送日時についてご了承頂き誠にありがとうございます。品物は、2014年7月28日に確かに出荷させていただきます。

展示会に関しましては、おっしゃる通り、私どもは香港の展示会でのみ製品のディスプレイを行っており、台湾では展示会を行っておりません。

独占販売者であるかないかにつきましては、一般的に申しますと、貴社のみに販売するには、各モデルの数量が私どもの定める数量に達している必要がございます。残念ながら、貴社からの今回のご注文は規定の数量を満たしておりません。加えまして、私どもの定める数量はバイヤーにとって不都合である可能性がございます。

もし、特定のモデルに関する独占販売にご関心がおありでしたらお知らせ下さい。さらなる議論をさせていただければと存じます。

よろしくお願いいたします。

修正後
スズキ様

発送日時についてご了承頂き誠にありがとうございます。品物は、2014年7月28日に確かに出荷させていただきます。

展示会に関しましては、おっしゃる通り、私どもは香港の展示会でのみ製品のディスプレイを行っており、台湾では展示会を行っておりません。

独占販売者であるかないかにつきましては、一般的に申しますと、貴社のみに販売するには、各モデルの数量が私どもの定める数量に達している必要がございます。残念ながら、貴社からの今回のご注文は規定の数量を満たしておりません。加えまして、私どもの定める数量はバイヤーにとって不都合である可能性がございます。

もし、特定のモデルに関する独占販売にご関心がおありでしたらお知らせ下さい。さらに協議を進めさせていただければと存じます。

よろしくお願いいたします。

元の翻訳
I would like to apologize for responding lately.
About the items you had ordered, unfortunately but they can not be shipped by air.
I am sending to you regarding the decision of impossibility of shipment,
I am very sorry for the late reply.

修正後
I would like to apologize for my late responding.
About the items you have ordered, unfortunately, I could not ship them due to the Civil Aeronautics Law.
↵
I am sending this notice to you after the above judgment was made,
I am very sorry for the late reply.